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Mount Brawlus (Episode 1)

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  1. Verasium

    Verasium Well-Known Member

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    This is just a little story that a friend and I came up with. It's a runoff between McBrawl and Percy Jackson.

    Here are the roles:

    Demigods // Satyrs
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    Percy Jackson - @Sonicluke2000
    Annabeth - @rainywolvess
    Grover the Satyr - @minecraftbro13
    Thalia - @XXXFIAXXX
    Luke - @Tac42
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    Gods // Goddesses // Titans
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    Zeus(God of the Sky; King God)- @orange451
    Poseidon(God of the Sea) @8vo
    Hades(God of the Dead) @chickenputty
    Hera(Goddess of Women and Marriage) @Majora_Jora
    Ares(God of War) @joeymast99 (Oh, the irony)
    Apollo(God of the Sun) @Cbsusd
    Artemis(Goddess of the Moon) @BorN_Adderr
    Athena(Goddess of Wisdom and War) @Queen_Shine
    Dionysus(God of Wine, Winemaking, and Ecstasy) @aidanmcc
    Hermes(God of Transitions and Boundaries) @Signatured
    Hestia(Virgin Goddess of the Hearth and Architecture)No one has been assigned this role yet; PM me if you'd like to.
    Demeter(Goddess of the Harvest) @bman7842
    Hephaestus(God of the Forge and Volcanoes) @etano
    Aphrodite(Goddess of Beauty and Love) @QueenLizzie123
    Gaea(Earth Titan) @Chaploo
    Chronos(Father of Time) @Skulduggery57


    Episode 1

    Checkers
    Percy Jackson had dealt with the gods before. They were devious people and enjoyed playing with humans. Percy was a demigod, son to Poseidon. His two best friends, Grover and Annabeth, were always there from him and he had taken them on many quests. Grover had been gone for a couple months, looking for Pan. Annabeth had gone to visit her father in San Francisco. Percy had been alone and frequently had visited the gods. On one of his travels, Hermes had told him a story about his redemption.

    Hermes had said, "I was near mortality. I was very liked in both worlds. Yet, I had wanted more power and I was denied. Many thought I would run, or hide. Disappear from the face of the earth like others. But, I kept myself here and proved them wrong. I was allowed into the heavens one day and they divined me. The day I become a god was the best day of my mortal life, I now look over all those who believe they can not overcome their boundaries."

    Another day, he had a dream concerning Hades, both the god and the place. He dreamed up two instances. One where he was in Elysium (Accepted Staff Applications) and another where he was in Hades (Denied Staff Applications). Expected, Hades was filled with the foolish and young. "Heeeelp uuuus. We did nooot knoooow" and others such as Brewhaha and Robrox were condemned to eternity sounded by people worse than them. "HAHAHAHA Robrox wanna play some Roblox? Get it? Robrox Roblox? HAHAHAH!" He heard the scream of Robrox. He saw many people who weren't tortured or regretful. Those who made good applications but were just denied because they did not have the qualities." He saw @will_soph and others. In Elysium, all the current mods and retired mods were there. He saw @Majora_Jora and @sargeant55. "Hello the- wait... who are you?" They chased after him, but he woke up.

    The last thing he remembered was when he met Ares. "Hello there twerp." Percy's blood boiled around him, he was never able to beat him. He knew it was just Ares tricking him, but he fell to his tricks. "I'll.. I'll beat you one day Ares and then you'll be the one asking for mercy." Ares looked at him dead in the eye. "You don't wanna make the wrong enemies, kid. Now think this through. The god of war on your side... the benefits.. all the battles you'll win.." Percy spit in his face. Ares' face was filled with surprise. "I don't want your help, Ares. I'll beat you in fair battle. No godly armor (/war buy superarmor or /war buy armor) and no enchanted bows (crossbow)." Ares smiled and responded, "Your funeral, Perseus. Your funeral." The room started to get hotter and hotter until he was gone and then it cooled down. Percy's temper flared a bit but then went back to normal. "One day Ares. One day."

    THIS IS ONLY FOR FUN. NOT MEANT TO BE MEAN IN ANY WAY.
    NOT MEANT TO COPY 'IF MC-WAR WAS A SCHOOL'.
    BY MINECRFTBRO13 AND FRIENDS

    Tell me if you want to be in the next edition!
     
    #1 Verasium, Jan 21, 2014
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  2. GlobalistCuck

    GlobalistCuck Well-Known Member

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    Oh the irony....


    Make me Demeter please. Demeter is goddess of farming and she uses hoes and in-game I like to use famas which is a diamond hoe. There is some logic behind it.
     
  3. Verasium

    Verasium Well-Known Member

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    Yes. You are now Demeter! In the next story, you'll be featured! Thanks for commenting. Also, could I get some feedback? How'd you like it? Should I continue? :V
     
  4. GlobalistCuck

    GlobalistCuck Well-Known Member

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    I like what you've done here.

    I'm done with fan-fiction, so if you'd ever like to write episodes of my series, feel free, but this is great!
     
  5. Verasium

    Verasium Well-Known Member

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    I don't think I can make your series as good as you did, but in Skype, I'll write a little preview to see if you like it!
    Also, thanks! I hope to keep this series going on for a while.
     
  6. GlobalistCuck

    GlobalistCuck Well-Known Member

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    Honestly, I don't think my series was half as good as everyone says it was.
    If you want my advice for a series like this, don't ask people who they want to be, select who they are to fit the roles, that is, if it gets popular. I had thirty or so people each wanting to be in it, I ended up picking the person who didn't because his personality suited my episode.

    I tried planning ahead and deciding which idea to put into an episode early on, for me it didn't work. If you're a good enough writer, hopefully you can think of an idea on the spot and knock one out in 15 minutes like me.
     
  7. Signatured

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    I was featured :grinning: Excellent story Minecraftbro. I love the character choices. I would like to see more of these!
     
  8. Verasium

    Verasium Well-Known Member

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    Yeah. Truthfully, my friend and I were just talking last night and this came up and we decided to actually do it.
    I wrote this one by myself, but I think she might want to write some of them. I believe we'll be doing some from Percy Jackson and Greek mythology itself, so watch out for that.
    I also only ask people if they want to be in it because I don't know a lot of the community. We put people to what they thought they did to others and acted.
    Yes! You were featured because your story of being sent to 'Hades' and coming back and actually getting to 'Elysium' as you were denied first but were dedicated and actually came through! Rainy was the one who actually placed Hermes to you, I was going with Hephaestus. :stuck_out_tongue:
     
  9. GlobalistCuck

    GlobalistCuck Well-Known Member

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    Funny. Me and Cow were just talking one night and wrote one together. However beyond that first episode, it was mostly just me. If you're doing some with a friend, my advice to you, is to work on different episodes.

    I feel like such a seasoned veteran of fan-fiction.
     
  10. Verasium

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    Thanks for all the advice.. good thing I have your Skype so maybe some time we can elaborate together!
     
  11. GlobalistCuck

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    Is it possible to make me Chronos, father of time and premordial deity? He was the first ever being and he created the possibility of a world. He didn't actually create anything, he just made it possible for Aether (day) to shine. Pretty apt description? He is not to be confused with Cronus or Kronos the Titan.
    It would be my absolute pleasure.
     
  12. Verasium

    Verasium Well-Known Member

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    Yeah! That'd can be easily arranged. Let me just edit that in now.
     
  13. GlobalistCuck

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    Thank you. Him and Chaos (nothingness) are the fathers of everything. So I guess I'm homosexual.
     
  14. Verasium

    Verasium Well-Known Member

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    Yes. I will find a Chaos. Hmm... personality wise Chaos would be quiet and distant.
     
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    Chaos shouldn't have any lines he's not really human. So I guess I'm homosexual with animal...
    Chronos created Gaia and Uranus which are heaven and earth and he also created Chaos who is the gap between them, a nothingness. Then he went on to have children with Chaos.

    So I guess I'm homosexual with an animal who also happens to be my son.....
     
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    Verasium Well-Known Member

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    ...Incestincestincest...
    I have Spanish class now so I'll be back later.
     
  17. GlobalistCuck

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    So I guess that means I'm Chaploo's father......
    Goodbye.
     
  18. Verasium

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    Chapdaddy. V:
     
  19. GlobalistCuck

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    Early Greek mythology is very confusing. Take Chronos's relationship with Tartarus, the abyss. It's his son, his son-in-law, his nephew and his grandson, I think.

    Also, early Greeks must not have known much about anatomy, back when it was just Chronos in nothingness, he managed to have several children by himself and then another few children with Chaos...?
     
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    The story is amazing! Do you think I could be in it? :3
     
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