Mc-war map (Bus Depot)

Um...
This is not very detailed, and it is vey small.
Add more detail, and make it bigger. I am pretty sure that the real map has more to it than that as well.
I am sorry about being negative. But I want the maps to be the BEST. I am sorry, but this doesn't cut it for me.

 

Not a half bad map, but it's a little small and undetailed. Basically, if accepted, admins will worldedit the map in by selecting a rectangular region that contains the map and placing it into the map world.

 

It's a good map in length, but not width. The roads and the bridge are kinda generic considering you mainly used only one block. Also, your map would stand a better chance of getting added if you made it look like it was in ruins; you know, for the CoD feel.

 

It's just too bland, too rigid and wouldn't suit MC-War. I've noticed you making and submitting a lot of maps recently and to be honest, all of them are very lacking in detail and are obviously not thought out. Instead of all these maps. Pick one idea and build it. Don't just spend a few hours on it either, put weeks if not months into planning, testing and executing your ideas, and whenever you think you're done, stop and think about how you could improve and expend on the map even more.

 

The map is to small but nice word

 

Stand in the middle of a map with iso....30 second nuke...

 

Sturm knows what he's talking about. He has spent countless building maps for Mc-Warfare, and each one has been better than the last. Take his advice, and I'm sure your builds would get much better.

This build is a little small. I understand that it's length is good, but if you look at the width, you can see how narrow it is. Spend more time on your maps as Sturm said, and I'm sure you can make your builds great.

 

The map is overall pretty good but the small details need more work. Maybe tweak it, and it will be good.

 

Maybe stop making so many maps because there all getting denied maybe try making some other things for like Mc-Warz.

 

Personally, I think you should add more detail and more shacks for players to get protection at and the spawn's should be a little more ''Spawn'' like. But good job!

 

You have made like 5 maps all denied I am just suggesting maybe try something else. Also don't start disagreeing all my posts.