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Poem Poem for PVP

Discussion in 'Literature' started by DiverXe, Feb 12, 2014.

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  1. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    I was playing PVP and i thought of the poem for it.

    We met online in a game we both play,
    with millions of others each and every day.
    In the arena by chance we did meet,
    But that was a day I could not be beat!
    You tried your best, but it was not to be
    There was no way I would let you beat me!
    When we were done I said “good game” thats
    when you said “Bull, this is not over lets do it again”
    Ok I said with a smile on my face,
    because I knew I left you in a hard place.
    Once again I knew you would feel my sting!
    I heard you growl when the game let me go first,
    and thought to myself “at least it wasnt a curse!”
    I waved my wand and grinned as it went critical,
    and heard you yell “dang this is just pitiful!”
    With your head spinning and a scowl on your face,
    you growled “Ill get you next time, this is a disgrace!”
    Then you stopped and said with a grin,
    “It’s been fun, tomorrow we do it again!”

    Feedback thx and if you can think about a poem for PVP survival is well.
     
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  2. shunsukez

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    Nice poem :smile:
     
    #2 shunsukez, Feb 12, 2014
  3. teawithchoco

    teawithchoco Well-Known Member

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    Did you beat him again the next day ?
     
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    #3 teawithchoco, Feb 12, 2014
  4. Lord_Roke

    Lord_Roke Forever the Forums Watchdog
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    Someone already had the same idea

     
    #4 Lord_Roke, Feb 12, 2014
  5. VforVenom

    VforVenom Well-Known Member

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    What's with all the poems lately? Is this the new fad, am I missing something?
    Also, it's a good poem. Good work.
     
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    #5 VforVenom, Feb 12, 2014
  6. Lord_Roke

    Lord_Roke Forever the Forums Watchdog
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    Those poems I posted came up like a week after the creation of the server.
    So no, you didnt really miss something.
     
    #6 Lord_Roke, Feb 12, 2014
  7. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    Yes i beat him :smile:
    Thank you.
     
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    #7 DiverXe, Feb 12, 2014
  8. 18kss

    18kss All is within

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    Good job! :smile:
     
    #8 18kss, Feb 12, 2014
  9. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    Watch out everyone, this guy might be the next Shakespeare. :stuck_out_tongue:
     
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    #9 F1r3tar, Feb 12, 2014
  10. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for the feed back guys.
     
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    #10 DiverXe, Feb 13, 2014
  11. maths_minecraft

    maths_minecraft Well-Known Member

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    nice poem! :smile:
    but maybe you should post it in off topic next time (correct me if im wrong)
     
    #11 maths_minecraft, Feb 13, 2014
  12. Verasium

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    Huh, trying to take my spot as the forum's poet? :l
    Here's my rebuttal:

    The spawn filled with noobs,
    and as always, spammers, advertisers, and hackers being boobs.
    I run out to the forest, desolate of life,
    only to be surrounded by Team OG, surrounded by knifes.
    I yell, "Oh no! Please spare me!"
    Signatured grins, "Merciless killing is the key."
    I get barraged with enchanted swords,
    "I shall get my revenge," were my final words.
    As I respawn, my goal is fueled by fury,
    I must get diamond armor! I must hurry!
    As my mother calls from upstairs,
    I say to myself, "Tomorrow is when Team OG will care."
    They will care about mercy and peace.
    "DANIEL, GET UP HERE!" Okay, Mom, sheesh!

    There's my poem. No offense to Team OG, just used your name. :smile:
    I'm no Shakespeare.. but I am a Dante. :v
     
    #12 Verasium, Feb 13, 2014
  13. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    Nice poem :smile:
     
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    #13 DiverXe, Feb 13, 2014
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