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Poem Poem for zombies

Discussion in 'Literature' started by DiverXe, Feb 14, 2014.

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  1. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    I made a another poem :smile: hope you like it :3

    I run through the full moons light.
    I stumble and fall in the snow,
    as my fear I try not to show.

    I find a place to hide,
    sniffling back tears I have cried.
    Close my eyes and start to pray,
    I want to live another day.

    I hear someone creeping near,
    I start to panic and fill with fear.
    A pain runs through my sight,
    my arm the wretched zombie did bite.

    I quickly pull and run away,
    human is what I want to stay.
    My blood starts to boil,
    dying I fall onto the soil.

    My heart is beating less and less.
    Starving as the hunger starts to rise,
    inside my humanity slowly dies.

    They slowly hide behind the walls and they made people falls in the hole.

    They ate human / minecraft human ... And wait for other day.


    Hope you like it :smile:
     
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  2. MrCowlick

    MrCowlick Well-Known Member

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    This is a really good poem, I am amazed at this.
     
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    #2 MrCowlick, Feb 14, 2014
  3. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    Very glad to hear.
     
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    #3 DiverXe, Feb 14, 2014
  4. MrCowlick

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    No problem, I always love to give feedback.
     
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  5. GreenPeas

    GreenPeas The man, the myth, the meme

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  6. GlobalistCuck

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    This poetry amazes me.
    It's fill with creativity.
    Please make another, oh please do.
    Or at your head I will throw a shoe.
    We love your poetry, write some more.
    I would pay you if I weren't so poor.
     
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    #6 GlobalistCuck, Feb 14, 2014
  7. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    Ofcourse i will. Very glad to hear
     
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  8. soSTARLY

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    change the "getting" to beating , as in beating less and less
     
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  9. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    Got your idea ! Thanks
     
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    Thankyou, I am a certified poet.
     
    #10 soSTARLY, Feb 14, 2014
  11. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    Nice you should also make a poem :smile:
     
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    #11 DiverXe, Feb 15, 2014
  12. shunsukez

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    Nice poem.
     
    #12 shunsukez, Feb 21, 2014
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