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Story The Arrival of the Legend

Discussion in 'Literature' started by TheDeluxeGamer, Feb 19, 2014.

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  1. TheDeluxeGamer

    TheDeluxeGamer Well-Known Member

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    The Arrival of the legend

    Just another day in the Sadarion City the stranger arrived in the town, lots of people started to notice him. As he reached the center of the town people recognized him. He was the player that beat the game! So as the people gather around him, A kid approached him.

    ''Zegal, Can you tell me how you beat the game?'' Said a young man
    ''How do you know my name young one?'' Said Zegal
    ''I an Arthor, son of Artos. He was you're best friend'
    ''Oh, yes I made a promise with him to protect you, even if it caused my life' Said Zegal
    ''So can you tell me?'' Said Arthor
    ''I'm not sure if you're ready for this, it's gonna be a long and heart breaking story' Said Zegal
    ''I can handel it, it's been 10 years since you beat the game and i'm 14 now, I want to know more about my dad... It's not easy growing up as a child not having a father, Please, tell me.'' Said Artos son
    ''Ok, but get comfortable it this may take a while' Said Zegal

    So me and you're dad was playing MineCraft at his place. We decided to get some snack so we walked to the store when we same a game on sale called McGc for only $20 compatible with a headset, which you can control the game with you're mind! So we bought two so we both could play. We went to his place and started to play the game.

    When we joined the game I entered the username Zegal which I thought was a cool username and he entered in Aurtorz I asked him why he used that username and he said because he was gonna name his child Artios and he wanted to match his sons name. I said that he was to young to be thinking of this stuff but we just dropped the subject. So as we started to play, and turns out it happened to be just like minecraft! Except, there was no blocks what so ever but we can do everything we did in minecraft in there and it felt like you we're a real person, like you we're playing in a muliplayer vanilla server with a super HD texturepack applied on. So we finished our day of playing and thought we'd get off, we hovered to he logout button but it wasn't there.... We reported it as a bug and we got a replay saying ''This Is Not A Bug''

    There we're some players just like on a faction server, they tried to kill other players and ruin everything they built or created but the thing to when you die ingame, You die in real life it turned out that the creator of this game made it so when you die in this game you die in real life too, it fries you're brain and kills you, sleeping. So we had to be the best players they're we're, and we we're till one day we thought we had a trusted player to join our team named ''Redrum'' he was an epic PvPer and a good bowist. So how we had to defeat the game was we beat the Enderdragon, so we thought we could be him so we went to the end.

    We thought it would be just like another enderdragon and regular end, but we we're wrong. It was like a parkour death area, We saw many skeleton's and as we went towards the parkour was moving and this was testing our metal strength, if you didn't believe you could make it you couldn't.. Redrum didn't believe in him self... He fell into try to do the parkour :/ he was at the last block too. So we continued on with our goal to save everyone in the game.

    As we fought the Enderdragon it turned out he was a player! He was not an ordinary CPU, We shot arrows at him and he just simply dodge him we tried every way to kill him, we tried to attack him with our swords, shoot him from high up and even blowing up his healing towers which didn't work either. Then out of now where a stranger appeared and almost killed the Enderdragon, the player just left it with 1 heart.
    Aurtorz was feeling brave and said ''Zegal, I got this I can kill it''
    I responded ''No you can't, you're gonna die''
    He said ''No I will defeat him!''
    And out of no where that random player came out of no where and killed him. The blood still gushing out of Aurtorz, I asked him

    'Who are you?!?!'

    'I am Murder' He responded

    'Wait Redrum is Murder back words' I said

    'Why did you do this?!....' I said with anger gushing out of my heart
    He was still quite no facial expressions
    'I will be kill you!!!' I said breaking the silence

    I picked up my sword and lunged at him, when I was about to hit him it said Immortal subject over his head.... I thought and I thought till I realized he was the creator of the game! I ran as fast as I could to get away from and and try to be the enderdragon, and finally till I beat it, the game was over and the players who survived had their normal lives back. Until one day.....

    (To Be Continued........)
    (Please leave feedback and what you want more of in the next story.)
     
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  2. Diecimo

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    Dang, I wasn't in it :/ but good job buddy!
     
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  3. TheDeluxeGamer

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    Thanks man! I took a lot of work to do this, hope ya liked it.
     
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  4. randomcitizen1

    randomcitizen1 The schizophrenic swagmoneymillionaire

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    This was actually a little bit scary. Probably because I have a vivid imagination and this whole thing played out like a movie in my mind. Creepy, but interesting. I would love for you to continue this. If you need more characters then you can add me in the story as long as you don't kill me. :V Edit: Oops, forgot about the feedback. That entire thing was the main character telling a story. Perhaps you can make the next story from his perspective as to make it more personal and engaging. I think it would be more exciting that way.
     
  5. TheDeluxeGamer

    TheDeluxeGamer Well-Known Member

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    Haha I didn't plan it to be scary thanks for the freed back I'll make sure to make it better
     
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    randomcitizen1 The schizophrenic swagmoneymillionaire

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    I didn't mean scary in a bad way. It was a good story.
     
  7. TheDeluxeGamer

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    Oh, ok thank you and thanks for the feedback again!
     
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  8. dk212333333

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    :open_mouth: quite a story
     
  9. TheDeluxeGamer

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    Haha forreals tho... In working on my skills :V
     
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