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Complete Army base for the new map

Discussion in 'Building Submissions' started by Vulnerose, Mar 25, 2014.

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  1. Vulnerose

    Vulnerose Active Member

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    #1 Vulnerose, Mar 25, 2014
  2. Parkman1221

    Parkman1221 Well-Known Member

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    Nice build.
    But it seems really un-proportional since the truck seems to be larger than the complex? It is like twice the size of one of the buildings.
     
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    #2 Parkman1221, Mar 25, 2014
  3. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    Looking good, except add some fire around the crater in picture 2 as it'll make the area look better. Also, the roads that are made out of obsidian are too even. If you're thinking of making them only partially there, than try to make the ends of those obsidian roads more uneven because it makes the army base look too out of proportion.
     
    #3 F1r3tar, Mar 25, 2014
  4. Vulnerose

    Vulnerose Active Member

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    Thanks i will do that
    it could also be my FOV, my fov is at Quake Pro so...
     
    #4 Vulnerose, Mar 26, 2014
  5. iErebos

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    Has some potential, but its a bit small and bland. Add in some block variations and itll be good.
     
    #5 iErebos, Mar 26, 2014
  6. gamemaster800

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    Yep, also try to add some outside detail to some of the buildings in the base.
     
    #6 gamemaster800, Mar 26, 2014
  7. KiIIerCameron16

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    I love it how it is! it reminds me of the bases in DayZ that people make by hand.
     
    #7 KiIIerCameron16, Mar 30, 2014
  8. CapzMC

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    Its rather bland, could you put more detail in this please? I like how its forming, but could you add like maybe more detail and make it more WarZ like?
     
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    #8 CapzMC, Mar 30, 2014
  9. KiIIerCameron16

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    Ya i agree, it is sort of bland.
     
    #9 KiIIerCameron16, Mar 31, 2014
  10. Parkman1221

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    @SlimeCraftMC you can see that the truck is about the half the size of the rest of the build, how is that incorrect?
     
    #10 Parkman1221, Apr 22, 2014
  11. iMacro

    iMacro An Essential Meme Maker (^:

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    It's decent so far, just needs outside details. To make it make it look slightly less bland.
     
    #11 iMacro, Apr 22, 2014
  12. bob8is8cool

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    It looks alright... Try adding some army tents maybe?
     
    #12 bob8is8cool, Apr 29, 2014
  13. BTDSnipez

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    Like the idea just need to improve on it
     
    #13 BTDSnipez, Apr 30, 2014
  14. MrDasky

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    Looks okey by now. You could add some detail to the ground like adding grass and flowers.
     
    #14 MrDasky, May 1, 2014
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