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Story WarZ: 1

Discussion in 'Literature' started by BrawlerAce, Mar 18, 2014.

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Should I continue this series?

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  1. BrawlerAce

    BrawlerAce Well-Known Member

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    In a world... where a new, deadly, contagious disease infected everyone and everything in its path. Destroying all of humanity. Leaving behind the world as we knew it in ruins. Only a few thousand have survived, and are scattered in an island infected with the highly contagious species once known as the human race. No government, order, discipline, leaves common villagers with a role they never thought possible. They must struggle, and band together to survive the infectious disease. This new era is no place for peace and tranquility. Only the strongest survive. This, is WarZ....

    Matthan Ashton woke up, finding himself on the ground. The last memories he had before passing out was the whine of a government jet attempting to control the disease, explosions, then nothing. It had felt like the airstrikes to attempt to control the infection had only happened yesterday, but judging by the ruined buildings nearby, Matthan could tell that it had been a long time. Picking himself up, he felt a sharp jolt of pain in his left arm. He tested it, and realized that it had a large gash in it. The blood that had flowed out of it had dried, leaving a caked reddish substance on his arm. Matthan trudged to a house that looked decent, and went inside. Grabbing the remains of a paper towel roll and a strip of fabric, he trudged to the nearby river, which was almost dry. Cleaning and dressing his arm wound, Matthan then walked towards a building, eager to seek shelter before it got dark. Then, footsteps. And a growl. Matthan whirled around and found himself staring into the blank, soulless eyes of a man. But this man wasn't any normal man. His clothes were ripped, he had grayish green skin, and he stunk. Darn, that can't be- Matt began to think, before the thing charged at him, clumsily. Matthan ran, knowing that there was nothing he could do to stop this creature, which he could tell was a zombie. Until he saw a glint of light on the ground. Picking it up, he dusted the object off, and realized that it was an MP-444 semi automatic handgun. Yes... I hope this works.. he thought to himself. Aiming the handgun carefully at the zombie's head. BAM! The zombie faltered, but quickly recovered and started running at Matthan again. Pulling the trigger repeatedly, Matt yelled, "STAY DEAD, YOU FREAK!" After unloading a full magazine of 9mm ammo into the zombie, its head was nothing but mush now, blown off by 15 carefully placed shots. Matt stored the gun away, to use later, and began to walk towards the building he intended to go towards before the zombie. Then, he heard the click of a shotgun and a voice behind him. "Hey, you. Stop right there."

    Well, that's the first part of my little series. I hoped you enjoyed this little story I made, based on WarZ. To let you guys know, it will have a DayZ/WarZ feel to it, but it's slightly more realistic than the actual server is.
    Credit to @Parkman1221 for the modified intro v:
     
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  2. Parkman1221

    Parkman1221 Well-Known Member

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    I like it. Seems cool.
    But I would've started off...

    In a world... where a new, deadly, contagious disease infected everyone and everything in its path. Destroying all of humanity. Leaving behind the world as we knew it in ruins. Only a few thousand have survived, and are scattered in an island infected with the highly contagious species once known as the human race. No government, order, discipline, leaves common villagers with a role they never thought possible. They must struggle, and band together to survive the infectious disease. Blah blah, go on. Just what I thought would be cool.
    I like it. Cool story and plot.
     
  3. BrawlerAce

    BrawlerAce Well-Known Member

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    Fine, added v:
     
  4. Parkman1221

    Parkman1221 Well-Known Member

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    You didn't need to. I just thought of another hook. I am learning about it in school. :grinning:
    My teacher would be so proud of my english and writing.
    But if you insist, take whatever you want from me.
     
  5. BrawlerAce

    BrawlerAce Well-Known Member

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    Yeah, but it looked good compared to mine. So, yeah.
     
  6. Parkman1221

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    Thanks.
    And I am assuming this is only the first part of the story?
    Because you leave it off on a really good cliffhanger. I like it.
     
  7. BrawlerAce

    BrawlerAce Well-Known Member

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    Yes, there's more coming

    Probably
     
  8. Parkman1221

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    Well I am hoping that you do make more.
     
  9. xXBearPvPXx

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    This is a very nice story. I like the cliff hanger, and it was nicely written. Great job.
     
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    Good story, I would like to read more.
     
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    Really interesting story, but I think you should of described the immense pain that Matthan felt from the large wound because it seems as if he just got massively injured and ignored the pain in his wound.
     
  12. BrawlerAce

    BrawlerAce Well-Known Member

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    Oh, but he did v:
    He couldn't feel the wound, because it was numb. It was a long time since he had received the wound, so...
     
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