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MC-WarZ - A Soldier's Tale - Chapter 1 (Story)

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  1. McRing

    McRing Active Member

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    Note: If you'd like to be in the story then let me know with a post, but until then, enjoy the story!

    Characters: McRing, Bandit(1), Bandit(2), Bandit(3), Bandit(4), Hero(1).

    Note: First person requesting to be in the story will be Hero(1), so hurry! Also, I control all the Character's fates, sadly, so just request and post if you're a Bandit or a Hero in the real server!

    Time: 5:30 PM, EST.

    Location: Near the road to the Gas Station.

    McRing runs in the woods as fast as he can, his leather slipping off of him as he runs, he darts left and right but he can't seem to lose the Bandits, one Bandit is constantly shooting a Rifle at him while he runs, how?!? Dazed and confused on why these high ranking Bandits are chasing McRing out of all people, he continues to run like the wind.

    McRing: I have to lose them..but where...

    Out of breath he takes a sharp left and dives under 2 tree's, he then takes a sharp right and runs as fast as he currently can go, right when he thinks he's made it and is away from the Bandits, he stops in his feet in front of a man, the man looks like a grown man, with a beard of grey and black and is stocked up in muscle, while McRing..who looks strong, is only a boy around the age of 17.

    McRing slowly tries to back up but the man points a AA-12 at him, square in the face.

    McRing: Hey look mister, I don't want any trouble...I just want to be on my way...
    Hero(1): Who's chasing you boy.
    McRing: No one's chasing me si--
    Hero(1): Cut the bullshi, who's chasing you.
    McRing: Fine fine, it's 3 to 4 Bandits sir and I'm just trying to get away, that's all!

    As he finished his sentence, McRing and the man hear some running steps a bit behind them.

    Hero(1): Follow.

    The man takes him into a Gas Station, while he's speaking to McRing he sets up a barbed wire trap, only a waist bit high, it's like it isn't even there beside the shelf in the two aisles. He opens the door to a glass door that used to hold soft drinks and water and shoves him inside.

    Hero(1): Stay here.
    McRing: Why, this is crazy! They can easily see me!
    Hero(1): Trust me, stay here.
    McRing: I'm sorry mister, but I'm not staying here.
    Hero(1): If you move one more time, I'll shoot you right here, stay there.

    The man shuts the door on McRing, McRing is nervous and pulls the CZ75 from his back pocket, even though it has no ammo...

    McRing: I'm so screwed...

    He tries to get more into the dark but notices the Bandits are now in the Gas Station, the man he was talking to was standing on the sturdy part of the barbed wire, doing god knows what...

    Bandit(1): Where is he...
    Bandit(2): I swear, I heard someone talking in here.
    Bandit(3): Well if you didn't, it's coming out of your food tonight.
    Bandit(4): What food, we won't have any food!!!
    Bandit(2): Who says we won't find him in the first place!
    Bandit(1): Aye guys! Quiet...look right here, I think we found him.

    They all gather up in the aisle where the glass door McRing was behind, inside the closet like room was at. All they had to do was walk down that aisle and McRing and his friend are doomed...

    Bandit(2): Well look what we got here! He thought he could hide from us boys!
    McRing: Wait, if I give you my food will you let me live!
    Bandit(4): What's that boy? We can't hear you through that glass door?

    Bandit(4) smirks and they're laughing, slowly Bandit(4) and Bandit(2) start walking down aisle 1, they tell Bandit(3) to take the right aisle in-case he tries to run and for Bandit(1) to stay back if he tries to run. Once Bandit(4) and Bandit(2) are close enough to barely hear McRing through the door but not see the man helping McRing, they stop to talk.

    Bandit(4): Well I think I know what he's saying now boys!
    Bandit(2): Boy, we don't just want your food, we want you!
    McRing: What?
    Bandit(4): You sound so stuffy, let's get you out of there.
    Bandit(2): Hah, I understand him still, he said "what", boy we're canniba--

    He's cut off, as Bandit(4) is reaching to open the door, he see's the man helping McRing, but it's too late, the man opens a spray of AA-12 rounds all over the both of them, they're dead in seconds. Bandit(3) hears them and runs up through the right side aisle only to find him running into barbed wire and cutting his legs up, stuck in it..the Bandit(1) shoots at the man but barely misses and hits a empty bottle that the glass cuts into the mans upper left hand shoulder, the man quickly shoots the Bandit(1) and turns around.

    McRing: HELP!

    Still sounding stuffy through the Glass door, the man understand, he steps onto the rusty shelf to see the Bandit(3) raising his AK47 to shoot McRing, he quickly shoots him along with the others he had shot and McRing steps out the door.

    McRing: Holy, you're incredible!
    Hero(1): Calm down kid, calm down, take the Iron armor off these bodies and switch into it.
    McRing: What about you? You're not even wearing Leather armor.
    Hero(1): Just do as I said and change, we need to move.

    The man starts picking up the guns and ammo and McRing changes into the Iron armor, they then set off on foot down the road.

    McRing: That was so cool! You have to teach me how to do that!
    Hero(1): Unless you want more people on our backs, I suggest you quiet down.
    McRing: Alright alright, but teach me how you did all that.
    Hero(1): I will, but for now we need to move.
    McRing: Alright.

    As they continue to walk, the man notices McRing's CZ75.

    Hero(1): Do you have any ammo for that?
    McRing: Sadly, no...but I like to keep it for looks mister.
    Hero(1): Hand it here.

    McRing gives him the gun, he throws it down and hands him his AA-12 along with some ammo, food and blood bags to heal each other.

    Hero(1): Hold some food just in-case I die, and hold those blood bags for healing each other, and keep those 12 rounds safe cause it's all we got for now.
    McRing: Thanks a lot Mister.
    Hero(1): We need to stop soon, I don't want to waste a blood bag on this tiny wound, so we'll stop here up in town. And find a house to stay at for the night.
    McRing: Alright, well...what's your name mister?


    - To be Continued! -
     
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  2. Sonicluke2000

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    That.
    Was quite epic.
    YOU TOTALLY SHOULDN'T MAKE THEM GET HUNTED BY A PACK OF WILD OCELOTS THOUGH *coughcough*
     
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  3. McRing

    McRing Active Member

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    Thanks, and lol.
    Bump!
     
  4. soSTARLY

    soSTARLY Well-Known Member

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    nice, can i be the arch villian of the story? or maybe i can be the rescuer :grinning:
     
  5. McRing

    McRing Active Member

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    I'll make ya a bad guy next chapter lol, I'll be sure to link it in this thread when it's done.
     
  6. Sonicluke2000

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    Hey McRing, wouldn't be it cool if your story had something to do with being hunted by animals? Not necessarily Ocelots, but Ocelots'd be pretty cool. *COUGH* MAKE IT HAVE OCELOTS DAMNIT *COUGH*
     
  7. Colonel_Chris

    Colonel_Chris Well-Known Member

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    Great story! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter c:
     
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  8. etano

    etano Well-Known Member

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    Can i be your kick ass sidekick?
     
  9. Z7Socrates

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    Sounds like a fairy tale. {putty}
     
  10. McRing

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    No sidekick's for this story! Lol, but you can be a Hero we come across. And thanks Colonel.
     
  11. ca7777

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    Nice story Good job :grinning:

    Can i be a long hero sniper that helps you guys out, from eg zombies or bandits.
    -ca7777 :grinning:
     
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  12. VforVenom

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    Pretty good, I like that it's new.. Haven't seen this before. Good job
     
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  13. will_soph

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    Sad.... but its a great story! looking forward to the next chapter!
     
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  14. McRing

    McRing Active Member

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    Great idea! Yeah, I'll be adding that, appreciated, you'll be the Sniper Hero as well.
    Thanks, make sure to read Chapter 2 once it's done, and I'm just a original person :3?
     
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    Good job, nice story!
     
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  16. McRing

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    I plan on making the second Chapter today or tomorrow.
     
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    Can I be a mysterious figure who randomly saves you guys from a horde if zombies then dissapears?
     
  18. McRing

    McRing Active Member

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    I think it's a little to mysterious for my story:open_mouth:
     
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  20. Erader1498

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    Good job on the first chapter, I'm curious to see where you go with this.
     
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