Trailer for MCbrawl!

Cool trailer!

 

The video doesn't work for me. Is it just me?

 

Nope, it's not displaying for me either. It's saying, "An error occurred, please try again."

 

Wait! I found a solution. Ill put it here:

I went to his channel and found it on his channel.

 

Since viewing the trailer, I thought there could've been some parts that could've been improved. Everything else was fine.

• For Mc-War, I think you should've gotten footage of FFAs, TDMs, Gungames, or CTFs because they show off more action than Infect.
• Don't you think that it would've been better to show off a majority of the minigames in MCParty instead of playing just two?
• I think you could've showcased more of the kits for Kitbrawl, like Pyro for example.

 

Some improvement with the trail:

• Shorter clips: ex: You playing gungame for 10 seconds, and then CTF, and then infect, and then oic, and then FFA.
• More minigames (like in the suggestion above) showcased in McParty and MC-War.
• More action in WarZ (it could be a clip that LuckyPop gave permission to you to use).
• More kits in kitbrawl. You only showcased the Melee-Knight kit; try showcasing ninja, brute, pyro, etc.
• Cinematic view of creative - either you show a clip of you speed-building something, or cinematically show some of the best builds in creative.

 

Mhm, the music is okay and the trailer starts nice, but then it gets kinda boring.

1.) The video footage doesn't work together with the music, it makes it look like you just put the music and then placed the clips somewhere.
2.) Showing a round of Minecraftparty or Mc-War in full length is getting really boring, you should cut a lot more, show different minigames for party and all the gamemodes and more weapons for Mc-War.
3.) The WarZ clip is really boring, you are just running around, looting and getting killed in the end.
4.) KitPvP is okay, could need some more action
5.) In the creative Clip you show pretty much nothing you can DO on there, you just fly a bit around showing random buildings.
6.) The PvP Survival part.... just running around at spawn and doing really nothing is not showing off the servers, sorry.
7.) The Transitions between the different server are kind of hard to notice, you only have that small text somewhere on the screen.
8.) The music is okay, but it never changes and through this it also gets boring fast.
9.) The beginning is good, but you should better show gameplay of the server after showing each of it portals.

Sorry, but overall your trailer just looks like random, thrown together scenes of gameplay or walking around on McBrawl Servers.
Its nice that you try to make something for all servers, but in my opinion a trailer should be with more action and also shorter. I'm sure you can improve that and make something good!