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  1. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    These stories are here for those who want to read them.

    Please Note: Some of these stories may be based off of WarZ, War, PvP-Survival, Party, etc. They aren't fully 100% based on them so don't ask if they're completely off. They're mostly based off my own creativity. Have fun reading. :stuck_out_tongue:

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    The Endless Value
    Chapter 1: The Beginning
    What is 'Value'? That is something that is worth-while to get. Anything can be valuable, but under this gem, it's more than you think. During one cold morning, a regular construction worker was going to work and design part of the new house that was going to be made. When he designed the house, he started to dig out the spots where to dig, he found something shiny in the dirt. He picked it up and saw it was really clear, yet shiny. The shiny object held colors inside that change any time to what the temperature was. He find this very odd to have since he didn't know what to do with it. Soon later he talked to a friend that was studying about gems and how their properties worked. When his friend examined the gem, he thought at first thinking it was just a regular blue diamond, than suddenly it changed to a teal. "I can't believe this. You know how rare this is? It's the legendary diamond that was thought to be gone forever before. This could be worth millions! No not millions, even billions!" said Ryan in excitement, "Really!? It's worth that much? Wait a second, if we sell this... Wouldn't we be hunted down by robbers?" Houth insisted. "Good point, the Government will be happy to see this." cheerfully said by Ryan. What these two lucky people don't know is... that there is a dark past secret to this. One that'll effect these two for the rest of their coming lives.

    Chapter 2: Coming Soon

    A Hidden Dreadful Legend
    Chapter 1: The Beginning
    There was once a legend, a legend that was feared among most people. Everybody thought this legend died was never to be brought back from his curse... 1586, April 24th. The time was dark and foggy, everyone went to their homes, lit up candles, and went to bed. Those who stayed outside, were to be forgotten if they got lost during the foggy event... If lucky to be spared by the unknown creature lurking through the shadows of the night. No one ever lived to tell the tale of what this creature looked like. All but one person, lived to tell his story. During one night, at a bar, everyone was drinking and having fun. Suddenly, a mysterious fog rolled in, everyone went to their homes and the bar door was locked up. "Ah looks like were're staying here for the night". There was some knocking on the door, than came banging on it. It was loud, everyone was gasping and cringing. Then the noise stopped. There was blood coming through under the door. "Aye laddies, that is what happens when you don't get in before the fog rolls in..." said Guro sitting in the back holding his beer and cigar in his mouth. "What do you mean?" one person replied, "I guess you don't know this legend. A long time ago, this creature was once a man, now a soulless creature that can't even be described as a human decedent." The thunder was starting. "I... I saw this creature with my very own eyes. This thing looked horrifying." *loud thunder* "Deadly. Capable of chasing you down without even having any eyes!" *the thunder became louder* "Bones! No flesh! Only the bones and moss that grew on it! It took my daughter and gave me this scar!" *lightening comes down* *the beast screams a mighty roar through the town and holds up a human heart* As everyone gets up and gets scared from the screaming roar and the story, the story goes on. "This beast will never be gone... the curse it was once given can not be undone. Only the caster that did this can stop it..."

    Chapter 2: Soulless...
    As the thunder settled down and the fog cleared, the people in the bar went outside to see if it was safe. They found the remains of the fellow traveler, his heart was taken out, he had huge scratch marks that went deep down to the bones. A reminder of never go outside alone when it's dark and foggy... Most travelers don't know this. Those who don't know and fail to listen to the elders will suffer a horrifying death. "Never go out alone..." "The creature..." "Can't run..." "Will find you..." Guro said. When you're attacked by this thing, for a split second, you'll see Death itself before your heart gets ripped out, still seeing it being taken out and still feeling pain as it takes your heart out faster then you can blink and disappears... No one can tell where you go. Your soul is trapped forever inside this monster... with all the others that have been killed... To ones knowing, you can only kill this demon by using a weapon created by the caster. Any other object won't effect it. "My steel sword was crafted by the caster, do you think I'll be able to kill it?" said one guy in the tavern. "Yes, but it won't be easy." Guro said. "How so?" asked by the guy, "Though your steel sword can destroy this beast, you'll need to find a way to stab it in it's soulless and never ending darkness heart... This thing can be one hundred times faster than any other living human being. You'll get your spine ripped out before you can even make a move..." Both of them fell silent when they heard a spine chilling sound coming from the mountains. They saw a dark figure, its sharp looking eyes glowed red and when the light of the lightning came down, it showed the dark creature. It looked just as the tale told by Guro. Than when the light disappeared, the creature disappeared as-well.

    Chapter 3: The Legend is not mistaken
    To whom that finds these beast, will never live to tell the tale of it. But those who live it and face the endless horror and suffering of others being massacred right in-front of their eyes will know the truth of everything they will have to say later in their life times. After this had happened again, it suddenly stopped. The death rates stopped and there were no more blood and the screams of terror coming within this village... 3 years had passed, the worst had stopped, snow started and it was Winter season again. All dangers was prepared, all but one... One that had though to be gone, forever... When it snowed, the fog was a lot harder to see since the snow was covering it. In the bar, everyone was waiting for this beast. They waited and waited, to surprise it and end it once and for all. They heard massive bangs on the door, it sounded like the door was about to break. Everyone was sweating, their sweat dripped down from their chins towards the ground. *gulp* Shivers from them covered the sound in the room. The banging stopped. Everyone stopped to wonder if it was gone. Soon the door opened. Slowly. The fire from the candles went out as the chilling wind came inside. There it was, the beast itself. Its face was covered by the mask. It was walking towards to the middle table all the way in the back. "Aye, you're looking for me laddie? I guess my time is up. But what do you want from me before my death?" The beast got closer to him, it started to speak very softly in a bone chiller breath. "East... 26 miles from here..." The beast than stopped speaking and started to head out the door without killing nobody. What was this? Is this a sign or some-sort? Death did want him, but only to speak with him. Than suddenly, a guy came out with a steel axe, it shined for a split second, he had hit the beast! Right in the skull! But it didn't affect it. The beast shoved the guy away and take the axe out of its head. Growling with its chilling breath, "Any last words?..." "I know your past... You're Ky..." his voice breaks off as the beast threw the fifty-seven pound axe faster than he could blink. The axe was thrown right into his heart. He had his last final breath and died without saying the last word he could of said. The beast went outside and disappeared. The people picked up the axe from the dead body, his hands left a cold mark, the words that the mark said "Death"... Mentioning the horrifying chill to everybody kept bring up "How are we going to kill this thing?". "We don't kill it. We'll find the caster that put this curse on us..."

    Chapter 4: Coming Soon


    Wistful Wild
    Coming Soon


    The Murderer...
    I just had to do this. This is a special kind of story that relates around the new server that is coming out (still in beta).

    Chapter 1: House Guest

    "Today's day is no normal day. I'll be telling you a story about the how one fancy party turned into a crime solving mystery... There's betrayal, mysteries of the house itself and the 'who's the murderer?..', you'll have to find out for yourself in this story..." -Introduction Person
    (More to come)

    Some feedback would be really nice :3
     
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  2. TheBoyGenius510

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  3. BrawlerAce

    BrawlerAce Well-Known Member

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    9/10
    Not done yet
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    They aren't perfect, but the stories are pretty good. Shame no one bothers with the Literature section though...
     
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  4. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for that comment c:
     
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    Simply amazing. These stories had me hooked all the way through - 10/10
     
  6. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    Thank you for your complement! c:

    I'm really good at making love or suspense stories for some reason :stuck_out_tongue:
     
  7. NyanCat4901

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    I like the stories! 9/10. I think that your word choice could be more advanced though.

    Here's a story I just wrote up as an example of what I think is good word choice to help:

    Since the beginning of middle school, Calvin had been mercilessly bullied. Money was stolen from him. Classmates aimed insults and punches, each devastating what little dignity he had left. Teachers, unprepared to deal with the consequences of chastising an iPhone wielding, curse word-spewing teenager, ignorantly looked on. Throughout his long periods of torture, Calvin would be subjugated to vile whips of contempt, each flaying off another piece of his sanity. Educators and school superintendents will claim that “words cannot hurt you, and that you should just ignore the bully”, but how can you ignore them when the tormentors consist of the entire class? To Calvin, the words hurt the most. Over the painful years he had learned to block out the pain, to ignore the kicks, dodge the punches and slaps. But the words, the insults barraging his ears, the endless name calling, that was what he never got used to. Eventually, he couldn’t take it anymore. On one dreary Science period, his main tormentor, Justin, called him a spineless f*g and slapped him in the face while the class cackled and the teacher looked on. That was when Calvin’s last strip of sanity, of morality, of logic, flayed away, revealing his soul’s raw interior. Rage. Pure contempt. Animalistic ballistic power. Adrenaline coursing. Heart beating triple time. He grabbed a black tuft of Justin’s dandruff laden hair, ignoring the yelling emanating from his putrid mouth, and cracked his skull upon the shiny steel rims of his desk. Calvin couldn’t stop. He just kept smashing Justin’s head onto the desk, eventually hearing the defiant yells turn to screams, and then to silence.
     
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  8. TheBoyGenius510

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    That escalated quickly.
     
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  9. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for your advice! I'm not so good with words like that but I'll try my best. Also, nice story, that escalated really quickly. o.o
     
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    I HAVE A STORY

    Once, there was an ugly barnacle. He was SO UGLY, EVERYONE DIED.
    the end.

    Also, Pik, 10/10
     
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  11. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    Update: 2 Chapters for the 'A Hidden Dreadful Legend' have been made:
    - Soulless
    - The Legend is not mistaken

    New things have also been added in.
    I'll get to making more soon but a writer has to take some breaks too, so there'll be more soon :3
     
  12. TheBoyGenius510

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    2nd story 2scurry4me
     
  13. ObamaTheReptile

    ObamaTheReptile Well-Known Member

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    Well wait whut.
    If they're short stories, they shouldn't have chapters >:l
    Also I'll mention that I may be posting some of the REAL short stories I've written, unrelated to McBrawl :v
    Also, plz use paragraphs.
     
  14. BrawlerAce

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    9.5/10
    Still not completr

    Keep it up, I enjoy these stories. They're always a good read, except for when they end...
     
  15. NyanCat4901

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    Post em please :grinning:
     
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    The Box? I have a feeling this is based off of league. Anyways this guy is Stephen King too good.
     
  17. TheBoyGenius510

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    How is a box based off of league :I
     
  18. ZapCrusher

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    This is too swaggy
    I must take my shades off to view this
     
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    It's one of Thresh's abilities, 99% slow and 100% scaling Ap damage. (I main support don't ask me how i memorize all the ap ratios.)
     
  20. Piky

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    I'll make sure to add paragraphs and change the title to "Stories" :stuck_out_tongue:
     
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