1. Welcome to the Brawl website! Feel free to look around our forums. Join our growing community by typing /register in-game!

Poem The mc-war community

Discussion in 'Literature' started by YOURADMAN, Jul 6, 2014.

Thread Status:
Please be aware that this thread is more than 30 days old. Do not post unless the topic can still be discussed. Read more...
  1. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    May 10, 2014
    Messages:
    645
    Ratings:
    +266
    Hello guys, I made this poem regarding the mc-war community.
    For the past few weeks, I have encountered relentless raging, noob/hacker accusing, spamming.
    I hope this poem really makes people reconsider their actions of what they have done wrong in mc-war.
    I hope this poem has a good impact to the mc-war community.

    We can change:

    Mcbrawl, a fine MINECRAFT community, an adventure
    With servers filled with tons of joy and fun
    Amazing game plays, detailed builds, good creativity
    Especially mc-war where you play with a gun

    The prestiges dominate the servers
    Many of them brag, and boast and act cool
    Call people noobs whenever they get killed
    Rage and complain and act like playschool

    The under prestiges cower in the corner
    They are instantly obliterated by the prestige's power
    They are relentlessly called noobs all over again
    They need some equality, don't treat them so sour

    And everyone thinks the staff can solve this problem
    The staff are trying everything they can to stop this
    But we cannot let the staff fight on its own
    We can also fight, we cannot be the piss

    The darkness and hatred have spreaded a disease
    Making this community into servers of evil
    But we can change, if we stop our bad actions
    We can change the servers, less bad and more equal


    Because of this community, the old generation is leaving
    Well known players have left because of this disease
    But we have the cure, we all have it
    So how about we use it to destroy the disease at ease

    Do not call people noobs when they kill you
    Stay calm, it is just a game, everyone gets killed
    Do not call people noobs if they use a weapon
    Stay calm, remember maturity is better than skill


    So please if you read this
    Reconsider your actions, think boy
    If we all stopped our evil
    There will be more joy

    Please guys, if you read this spread this out throughout the whole community, my goal is improve the mc-war community, and I need people to read this poem so we can stop the noob calling and raging!

    Sincerely YOURADMAN
     
    • Like Like x 18
    • Agree Agree x 1
    #1 YOURADMAN, Jul 6, 2014
    Last edited: Jul 6, 2014
  2. UnknownIdentity

    UnknownIdentity Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Jan 29, 2014
    Messages:
    528
    Ratings:
    +201
    *claps the f*** out of this* * and cries*

    CLAPS CLAPS CLAPS this IS THE POEM OF MCBRAWL
     
    • Like Like x 2
    • Dislike Dislike x 1
    • Neutral Neutral x 1
  3. NMHRODMAN1SBEST

    NMHRODMAN1SBEST WarZ | Ex Staff

    Joined:
    Feb 1, 2014
    Messages:
    743
    Ratings:
    +342
    Absoulutely amazing.
     
  4. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    May 10, 2014
    Messages:
    645
    Ratings:
    +266
    Thanks! Can you please spread this out, I want everyone to read this so we can top the noob calling and raging!

    Thanks lord_roke for reading this! :grinning:
     
    • Like Like x 1
  5. randomcitizen1

    randomcitizen1 The schizophrenic swagmoneymillionaire

    Joined:
    Sep 12, 2013
    Messages:
    2,556
    Ratings:
    +2,556
    This was very creative. I liked it a lot. It was both witty, yet quite serious. It has a good message in it. Excellent work Adman.
     
  6. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    May 10, 2014
    Messages:
    645
    Ratings:
    +266
    Thank you man
     
  7. __Quay__

    __Quay__ Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Aug 6, 2013
    Messages:
    1,258
    Ratings:
    +524
    Discord:
    Quay#5263
    *ssnniiff* *clapclapclap* *crowd roar*
    That was just. . .beautiful. . .
     
  8. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    May 10, 2014
    Messages:
    645
    Ratings:
    +266
    Thank you man :smile:
     
  9. tippertopper

    tippertopper Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Aug 31, 2013
    Messages:
    883
    Ratings:
    +166
  10. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    May 10, 2014
    Messages:
    645
    Ratings:
    +266
    Thank you :smile:
     
    • Neutral Neutral x 1
  11. AcpSoldier

    AcpSoldier Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 15, 2013
    Messages:
    263
    Ratings:
    +99
    Well that pretty much washes out the poem I made yesterday about the WarZ community...
     
  12. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    May 10, 2014
    Messages:
    645
    Ratings:
    +266
    Well did not get why a thank you deserved me a neutral :V

    Your poem was great! It was humorous.!
     
    • Agree Agree x 1
  13. congamonky

    congamonky Active Member

    Joined:
    Feb 18, 2014
    Messages:
    271
    Ratings:
    +22
    ITS SO BEAUTIFUL! IMACRY!!!!!!!!!!!!111!!
     
  14. AcpSoldier

    AcpSoldier Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Dec 15, 2013
    Messages:
    263
    Ratings:
    +99
    Thanks, but there's this thing about poems. They are supposed to be poetic. Mine was kinda a joke poem. Yours is a real poem.
     
  15. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    May 10, 2014
    Messages:
    645
    Ratings:
    +266
    Thank you :smile:
    thanks man! :smile:
     
  16. Gynamo

    Gynamo Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Aug 8, 2013
    Messages:
    3,004
    Ratings:
    +796
    *Claps until i bleed*
     
  17. BrawlerAce

    BrawlerAce Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Aug 4, 2013
    Messages:
    6,616
    Ratings:
    +2,113
    Sums up MC-War perfectly.
    Now you need to do the old days when no one raged.
     
    • Agree Agree x 1
  18. booflame

    booflame Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Aug 5, 2013
    Messages:
    2,502
    Ratings:
    +557
    Be optimistic.
     
  19. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    May 10, 2014
    Messages:
    645
    Ratings:
    +266
    Thanks!
    Oh yea, thanks for the idea
    I am optimistic, I hope someday that the community in mc-war will improve on maturity
     
  20. daddyc0012

    daddyc0012 Member

    Joined:
    Jul 6, 2014
    Messages:
    30
    Ratings:
    +3
    Wow, this poem is really touching, it gives out the message clearly
     
    • Like Like x 1
    • Agree Agree x 1
Loading...
Similar Threads Forum Date
The Mc-Warz Community MC-WarZ Apr 20, 2016
Which MC-War Community player are you? Discussion Dec 17, 2014
Community Survey: Should McBrawl do another MC-War monthly contest? Discussion Nov 25, 2014
less tolerance of disrespect in the mc-war community Discussion Nov 11, 2014
Mc-WarZ Community Montage Videos Oct 4, 2014
Thread Status:
Please be aware that this thread is more than 30 days old. Do not post unless the topic can still be discussed. Read more...