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Story A friend in need

Discussion in 'Literature' started by YOURADMAN, Jul 21, 2014.

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  1. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

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    To celebrate 300 positive ratings. I would like to share a true story of mine. It is actually a secret that I never let anyone knew, including my best friends. But I would let to show my secret to you guys. As I truly love this server so much. tears ran down my cheek as I created the thread.

    A friend in need

    I stand on the wooden dock. The sunset looming over me. I see myself on the crystal water. I stand there, staring at the water. Memories flood into my mind.

    I remember.
    I remember when I first met my first friend.
    Back at the playground.
    Where the kids were screaming in delight when they came down the slide.
    Where the adults were relaxed on green benches, laughing.
    I was trying to get down the ladder.
    I fell, my leg was sore.
    I whimpered, as I saw the scratch on my leg.
    Suddenly a girl came up to me. She helped me get up.
    But I quickly scurried to my parents forgetting the girl.

    I remember.
    I remember the first day when I went to school.
    I was lost, lonely, shy.
    Then I see the girl.
    A blonde girl, with blue eyes
    She came up to me.
    With her cute, high voice.
    She asked me to be her friend.
    Not knowing to say, I nodded
    She introduced a couple of her friends.
    Then she asked my name
    Finally with the courage to speak, I said aaron
    Her name was Emily.
    Emily. A name i will treasure.

    I remember.
    I remember in year 6.
    We had a graduation dance.
    Emily asked me if I could dance we her.
    I was blushing, sweating, as my friends went oooooooooo!
    Finally I told her yes. She got excited.
    At that night, she wore a fine blue dress
    That dress was beautiful, delicate as well
    The dance was really fun, lots of food and drinks
    But the best thing was. It was the dance with her.

    I remember.
    I remember last year, in year 8.
    I organized a day at the city with a bunch of friends.
    Emily was there.
    Her image sparkled me.
    I had favored her a long time.
    But my personality interfered.
    The day was entertaining.
    At the end, me and Emily were on a wooden dock. Looking out towards the sunset.
    She held my hand, and thanked me for the day.
    I blushed, and was about to say no prob-
    She quickly kissed me.
    Her lips were so smooth.
    That feeling was one of the best of my life.
    And that's how we started our relationship together.

    But...

    A car accident.
    My parents drop me at the hospital.
    I see Emily's mum weeping as the rest of Emily's family and friends cry and grief.
    It was too late.

    My rooms a mess.
    I couldn't sleep.
    I stare at a picture of me and Emily on the dock.
    My eyes are full of tears.

    I see the wooden coffin surrounded by flowers.
    I see a portrait of Emily on top of the coffin.
    The priest and Emily's mum made a few words.
    After that, everyone left to eat.

    I still stare at Emily's portrait.
    Trying to hold back the tears.
    But I can't. The pain is too strong.
    I run, I run to the wooden dock.

    As the memories soon are gone.
    Tears plummeted the still,calm water like bombs.
    I stand there. I suddenly see Emily on the water.
    She smiles. Then my mind if flooded with memories again.

    I realize.
    That Emily will still always be with me.
    She will still guide me through hard times.
    She will always be a part of me.

    So from this day on.
    I do my best. Even if it is hard.
    Because Emily is always with me.
    She is the strength that keeps me going.

    And I hope all if you have friends to keep you going.

    -Aaron
     
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  2. daniellazer2902

    daniellazer2902 Well-Known Member

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    it's very brave of you, I can not imagine what you must endure.
    But you know, Emily is not dead, Emily is living in your heart as well as in that of your friends and of his family.
    PS: GG for 300 likes ( my 300th message YEAH )
     
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  3. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

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    Thanks.. It was a very hard decision whether I should have posted this or not.... I m glad to have a good friend like u Daniel. Thanks for cheering me up..
     
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  4. RezIsStupid

    RezIsStupid Well-Known Member

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    Well its quite amazing that you managed yo write all this and its Brave aswell. I have never lost someone that close to me that I can remember. And Scince the closest ive ever been to a girl is when she kicks me or calls me an idiotic moron I cant really imagine how it is for you and hopefully I never will. Anyway on to better and happier things: GG with your 300th positive rating. Now u have a few more too.

    PS: you are a really nice person :grinning:
     
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  5. daniellazer2902

    daniellazer2902 Well-Known Member

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    you were wrong too at the end :grinning: , 300 positive ratings *
     
  6. RezIsStupid

    RezIsStupid Well-Known Member

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    Yeah well done for spotting that. Edited now. :grinning:
     
  7. whitemagnum

    whitemagnum Well-Known Member

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    I feel your pain dude.. I lost my father when i was 4..
     
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    This made go up in tears... a lot of tears. I know how you feel of losing somebody really close to you. I can't imagine how much pain you had to endure from this. All I can say is, stay strong my friend. Stay strong.
     
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  10. camo_unicorn

    camo_unicorn Well-Known Member

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    The feels ;-; man, stay strong buddy, she'll always be there. Good job on all those positive ratings ^.^
     
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  11. C9_Mango

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    It's... It's okay... I'm fine... My eyes sweat like this all the time... I swear... Is, is it hot out here? My eyes seem to be sweating a lot... Aw gawd this story... I wanna give you a hug right now...
     
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  12. BuddyCroooock

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    This made me cry. This story is touching. I lost allot of people in my life. Stay strong!
     
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  13. patrickdemooij9

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    I honestly don't know how to respond to this. It kinda made me cry... I am sorry for you man but like you said, she will always be in your heart no matter where you are. She is there right now looking over you, being proud :smile: *hugs*
     
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  14. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

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    Thank you all for this support you guys have been given me. This makes me feel more better and I thank all of you
     
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  15. daddyc0012

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    :frowning: I am sad that Emily has passed away. This story is so heart breaking. Imagine waht the pain will be like for me.
     
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    Jesus, i'm not a big poem reader, but this actually made me cry. I don't even know what to say ;-; But if you ever have any problems, feel free to talk to me. Stay strong.
     
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  17. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

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    Thank you, the support you guys have given me is helpful. I think it was the right choice to spread my feelings to my secret to everyone.
     
  18. 18kss

    18kss All is within

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    That was really touching. I feel for you. I'm almost in tears.
    Stay strong, dude.

    Good job on 300 positive ratings! :smile:
     
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  19. YOURADMAN

    YOURADMAN Well-Known Member

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    Thank you for the support, and thank you for even reading my secret
     
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  20. JaydenChadd

    JaydenChadd Former SMod / Community Manager

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    I read this a second time and stared crying, this is really touching. Stay strong and don't lose hope.
     
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