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Story WarZ Part 3

Discussion in 'Literature' started by iEBKN, Aug 11, 2014.

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  1. iEBKN

    iEBKN Well-Known Member

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    As we left off last time Srg had come to this mysterious island. It wuz both a curse and a blessing. It wuz a blessing because there were people , supplies , and food. It wuz a curse because there wuz constant killing. Srg had to do something he would never forget , he had to kill someone...
    The blood of his enemy made his sorrow even worse. "Why would I do this?!" Srg yelled. A zombie seen him in sight while Srg didn't know. @BrawlerAce_ saw the zombie coming towards Srg. Brawler looked at D Eagle. "I think he would be a good team member. Also look it at his ammo supply." Brawler said to his mic. "Don't add him to the team!" Mokolee exclaimed. "He is a noob! Just look at him!" Mokolee said. "I am adding him to the team." Brawler said while turning off his mic. "Brawler?! Damnit! Guys we got a new team member..." Brawler threw his Mtn Dew on the floor and grabbed his Desert Eagle. Brawler aimed "BOOM HEADSHOT!" He yelled. Srg got up and aimed "Woah there solider! Watch where you're aiming that thing!" Brawler said. "Who are you and why did you save me?" Srg yelled. Brawler looked at him and took Srg down. "Cause that is why. Get your a** up solider!" Brawler yelled. "How did you do that?" Srg asked. "Lets say, if you team with me I will show!" Brawler smirked. "Fine." Srg said. "Good thinking. Now let me take you to my base." Brawler said. Srg saw someone running to Brawler. "WATCH OUT!" Srg yelled. Brawler took out his D Eagle and shot "S***! Not a headshot!" Brawler exclaimed. "Anyways let me type in the code." Brawler said. As soon as Brawler entered the code Srg jaw dropped. He had supplies , Food , Ammo , and Guns. "It is like being in the Pentagon again!" Srg said with joy. "Wait , you have been in the Pentagon?" Brawler asked. "Yep I am Srg for Alpha Squad. Name is EBKN." EBKN Said. "Anyways EBKN , this is our team!" Brawler said. "We have @ehvahn on the offense , @LukenDan on the defense , @cuddlemonster09 on the supplies with @Mokolee and Me the leader. This is Team Dead." I do not own Team Dead it is own by ehvahn and Co-Owned by LukenDan. Brawler and Cuddles are not in this team. So that's it for today guys! I am really sorry I had to end it here! Shout out @BrawlerAce_ and @LukenDan for inspiring me to write this!
     
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  2. BrawlerAce

    BrawlerAce Well-Known Member

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    Me iz vewy disapoyinted
    I like it, but it needs to go a bit more slowly. Most issues with stories that I read is that they just go too fast.
     
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  3. iEBKN

    iEBKN Well-Known Member

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    Okie dokie what do you want me to change
     
  4. BrawlerAce

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    I don't look at myself as the person who'd be like "oh, another noob that I have to save."
    In addition, the story progresses too quickly. Add some detail about what's happening!
     
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  6. BrawlerAce

    BrawlerAce Well-Known Member

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    GOD DAMMIT MOKOLEE. YOU HAD ONE JOB. JUST ONE JOBBBB
     
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  7. ObamaTheReptile

    ObamaTheReptile Well-Known Member

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    My 1337 h4x will make it so no one gets to the defense scroobs
     
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