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Poem Poetry

Discussion in 'Literature' started by 420quickscoper, Sep 5, 2014.

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Which did you like best?

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  1. 420quickscoper

    420quickscoper Well-Known Member

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    Hoho. Should've posted this earlier!
    Anywho, about a week ago I wrote 3 poems. Here's two:

    Don't Play with That (Title)


    The scissors open and close,
    So don't cut your hairy toes.
    The knife is not a harp,
    don't touch it, it's really sharp!
    Warning: protect your nose!



    Rivers (Title)

    Rio means river
    I look in and see my dog
    his name is Rio.

    I forgot the third one, so I'll edit this tommorow.
     
    #1 420quickscoper, Sep 5, 2014
  2. Murloc212

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    I have poetry of my own...

    Demons run when good men go to war.
    Night will fall and drown in sun.
    When good men go to war.
    Friendship dies and true battle lies.
    Night will fall and the dark will rise.
    When good men go to war.
    Demons run but count the cost.
    The battle is won but the Creator is lost
     
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    #2 Murloc212, Sep 5, 2014
  3. 420quickscoper

    420quickscoper Well-Known Member

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    What kind of poem is this?
     
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    #3 420quickscoper, Sep 5, 2014
  4. stork12345678

    stork12345678 Well-Known Member

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    this poem isnt even properly written WHAT IS THIS
     
    #4 stork12345678, Oct 1, 2014
  5. Phanta

    Phanta Well-Known Member

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    Ladies and scrubs, you just witnessed REAL poetry.
     
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    #5 Phanta, Oct 7, 2014
  6. tkdtorii

    tkdtorii Well-Known Member

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    This is great :grinning:.
    Took a class about poetry last year.
    So why these peeps think this is not a poem?
    Ehh we just witnesses great art.
     
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    #6 tkdtorii, Oct 7, 2014
  7. 420quickscoper

    420quickscoper Well-Known Member

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    I understand that you like his. But you're getting really off topic. This was not a place to put your own poetry after I post mine. There's a reason why we post threads. I posted this thread clearly to make people judge my own, and not his...
     
    #7 420quickscoper, Oct 8, 2014
  8. LegalSkateboards

    LegalSkateboards Well-Known Member

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    A good one.
     
    #8 LegalSkateboards, Dec 24, 2014
  9. Phanta

    Phanta Well-Known Member

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    Erm.
    Laaaaaaate...
     
    #9 Phanta, Dec 24, 2014
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