Complete Ruins (Tdm, gungame, one in, FFA)

Serine, you need to stop starting all these projects. Focus on one at a time .-.

 

I completely agree with DrZRG on this one. The amount of maps you have created in the past few weeks is crazy. They have all been good, but you have a much better chance of getting your map accepted if you just focus on one and put all of your effort into that.

One thing to say is that, if it is in the 'middle of a jungle', if you have lots of vegetation and trees, the map has a very loew chance of being accepted. Call of Duty maps never really tend to have a lot of vegetation as they are based of cities and towns. Your map has a much better chance of being accepted if you were to remove the vegetation. I really do like the idea of the old buildings though. Good luck!

 

Now that I have seen the screenshots, I have some constructive criticism for you.

Things that I like:

• I like the amount of structures and builds in there
• I like how you have tried to make it look like it's in a jungle. It works well.
• I like the vegetation you have added, it makes it look very natural.

Things I don't like:

• The amount of trees overtime could get very irritating.
• The sky islands look completely pointless and slightly stupid to be honest.
• The water stream through the middle of the map looks pointless and doesn't add anything special.
• The tunnels seem pointless too, I have never personally liked small tunnels in maps.

Things I am neutral on:

• The block variation. There could be more, but at least you added a bit.
• You could use a wider range of blocks for the structures. I know you have used different stone brick type.

Overall, it's a -1 from me.

However, I am sure if you take on the idea that people give you, your next map would have a good chance of being added into War.

 

I would suggest completely removing the water stream and the sky islands. If this were to be accepted, all the water stream would be an easy way to kill people. It is very easy to kill an enemy swimming up a stream slowly.

 

Make ur screesnhots with F1, the bar blocks all the good look, anyway kind of small, but good luck!

1+ from me

 

your probably gonna get hit with an iso before you even climb up the floating island i suggest making more ways to get up there

 

So many maps serine... But I like them all! Great job! +1

 

You could connect the sky islands to the ground some how but make it impossible to get to it on the ground. Seems like there would be good sniping spots and no OOM glitches, good luck. +1

 

Congratulations, you should update the pictures I want to see the finished product.

 

Sure thing, after I'm done with class.

 

The map is too linear, it needs more pathways so that you don't get mowed down by some crazy dude wielding a M4A1. Next off, sky islands aren't that realistic and it just isn't "special" for me in practicular. If you could put more effort, I'd have a more positive review.