Story GSG vs HACK - Rewritten - 1

https://www.brawl.com/threads/9336/
Remember this? The story was decent, but it really didn't have too much of a purpose or actual story. It also had several grammar errors. So I decided to rewrite it, changing some things around. Some names have been changed. GSG remains the same, but HACK is now the UAFE. However, I will keep Minecraft IGNs in instead of using real names.
@Bobaddie @Lord_Roke

This story will be longer than a typical 2 or 3 part story. Don't expect to understand the point right away. All will become clear as the story progresses. And no, GSG won't be the terrorist organization of all CoD campaigns.

20:50. It will come. And it will devastate. Something the world has never seen before. And the last thing the world ever will see.

"Remember when GSG was Germany? When they were part of the EU, when Russia and China were the threats of the world?"
"Oh yeah, but that's all gone now. Along with the planet we knew before. Remember when there was grass, and trees, and life? It was so beautiful... but then the war took it all away...."
"Hey, focus soldiers! We're five mikes out, get your gear ready!" tdaddy14 interrupted.
"Sorry," Bobaddie and ZapCrusher said. "Alright, let's get our gear. Good luck on the battlefield." They patted each other's backs, and left to grab gear.

~5 minutes later~

"Where the hell are our reinforcements?!" a soldier screamed over the radio to the CO, tdaddy14. "We are Oscar Mike. Repeat, we are Oscar Mike. Out." Turning to the group of soldiers inside the dropship, he ordered one to press the button that would open the hatch. As the hatch opened, wind suddenly blew in, and the sun glared into the dropship. "Alright men, let's move. Go go go!" He was the first one to jump out, quickly followed by the rest. They fell through the skies for several seconds, before tdaddy's altitude indicator began beeping. "Chutes out!" he shouted, before pulling the ripcord on his parachute. The group of soldiers, after landing on one of the many glaciers in the sea, looked up as several more dropships dropped their soldiers. The sight had the soldiers in awe for a bit, before a nearby explosion knocked them back into focus. "That way! Follow me soldiers!" tdaddy14 shouted as he pulled out his M27. Bobaddie pulled out his Galil and quickly screwed on a heavy barrel before charging. They ran all the way to a cliff, and looking down they saw two forces clashing with each other. Fire and explosions were everywhere, as vehicles were destroyed and grenades exploded.
"Holy...." a soldier said. Hearing the roar of multiple jet engines, they looked up to see a friendly F-35 shot down by a GF2000. That jet quickly spun around, before a homing missile struck it. The damaged stealth fighter spiraled down to the ground, exploding on impact. "Alright, let's move," tdaddy told the other soldiers, before hopping off the cliff and sliding down a nearby hill into the battle. Bobaddie and Zap followed. As they landed, airdropped tanks and IFVs were landing, ready to fight. Zap ran over to a wounded UAFE soldier, and pulled him into cover. "You'll be good mate," he told the soldier. "God damn," he replied. "We thought we were going to get slaughtered here."
Zap summoned nearby medics to evacuate the wounded soldier, then loaded his M4A1. Entering an AMTRAC with Bobaddie and other soldiers, he sat down and manned the Mk 19. As the vehicle pushed its way to the front lines, Bobaddie fired the grenade launcher at engineers equipped with ERYX launchers, as well as other vehicles. Soon though, he noticed the lack of vehicles. "Hey wait... where are the vehicles?" Then seeing a dark gray object next to the wreckage of a vehicle they were about to push out of the way, he realized where they were. "Oh sh*t, minefi-"
The AMTRAC was engulfed in a huge fireball of an explosion, and Bobaddie's head was knocked into the stock of the Mk 19. He quickly lost conciousness.

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His head throbbing like crazy, Bobaddie crawled out of the burning hatch of the AMTRAC. He knew that he was wounded, and that his regenerative armor hadn't been able to withstand the explosion of multiple landmines. As he pulled off his armor, which was now useless, he heard static coming from his hand radio. "bzzt - Attack aircraft is destroying key - fzz - defensive positions, losing advan-" The radio ceased to function after. However, through his blurred vision, he was able to see a ground attack jet harassing ground forces. Shoot, we didn't bring AA rockets, we thought the jets would destroy all resistance in the beginning... But then he noticed a wall that was now being used as cover for a few GSG soldiers with launchers. Sneaking up behind them, Bobaddie stabbed the nearest person with a knife. However, the others noticed. Quickly grabbing the MP7 of the fallen soldier, he quickly gunned down the rest. Bobaddie shakily picked up the launcher of one of the dead soldiers afterwards. Slowly standing up, he shouldered the launcher, which was a LAW. However, the attack jet had noticed him and was circling around to gun him down. No! I'll get slaughtered! Unless I make a lucky shot.... Carefully aiming the rocket, he waited for the aircraft to turn at him. As it quickly approached, Bobaddie aimed carefully and led his target before firing and then dropping to the ground. The pilot, noticing the missile, tried to swerve out of the way but it was too late, with the missile striking one of the fuel tanks of the attack jet. It burst into flames. Soon after, Bobaddie fell into unconsciousness....

~~~~

Soon after....

"Commander, our defenses have fallen. They are in a position to assault France." a soldier said.
"What!? How did our defenses fall?" the angry commander replied.
"I don't know sir, but we need to fall back to the city."
The commander sat in silence, then stood up. "Prepare our forces for retreat," he said firmly.
As the soldier walked out of the room, the commander watched a live view of the current battle from a satellite in space. "We will get revenge for this loss," Lord_Roke quietly said, before turning off the screen and leaving the room.

 

1. You usually use Skullcrusher, correct? Well that gun doesn't exist in real life, or even in CoD MP. I decided the M4A1 would be fine.
2. I had to make you British because you be wearing dem shades
3. Yes, because there are no "hearts" in warfare. You get shot? You're okay, out of the action, or dead. Pretty sure that if someone was shot IRL, you'd help them. So yeah... besides you're a soldier of the UAFE in this anyways, you aren't a heartless soldier who leaves people to die... right?

 

No, in warfare there is no joking.
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Yes, the M4 is quite effective. Especially in CoD, Battlefield, other FPS games, and of course real life. c:

 

gl.

 

Will edit and add in part 2 maybe

For anyone who is still interested in this, I'm not doing a PoV type of thing. It's more like, a general story.

 

The army didn't have any spare USPs. Sorry

 

Yes
wuld r8 8/8, was gr8

what typo are you referring to?
"mike" is a military term for "minute"