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Complete Bludshedra (Awesome Town submission)

Discussion in 'Building Submissions' started by Elkus, Oct 13, 2014.

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Do you want this on Mc-WarZ?

  1. Yes! It's awesome! (+1)

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  2. I don't really care if it's in there or not. :D (+0)

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  3. Most certainly not! This sucks! (-1)

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  1. Elkus

    Elkus Active Member

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    WarZ Building Submission

    Build Name:Bludshedra

    Style: Bludshedra is a seemingly basic town, but it is really very cool. Complete with a city-lamp system that is fully power-toggleable, a gun and ammo store, and a Gang hideout underground, it very great place to go to collect good weapons and be a bandit. Also, the terrain is now very rugged and the place looks a bit more run-down. I think that this is a good town to be put in WarZ

    Creator(s): Elkus.

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    Location: (on creative.mcbrawl.com) Here are the coordinates and the ID:
    (Small Plot World)
    Coordinates: X= -9892, Y= 110, Z= 5958
    Plot ID: -113;69
     

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    #1 Elkus, Oct 13, 2014
    Last edited: Oct 16, 2014
  2. YeezyLaces

    YeezyLaces Well-Known Member

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    Nice work, Maybe you should use that to apply for Advanced builder for the bigger pot.
     
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    #2 YeezyLaces, Oct 13, 2014
  3. Murloc212

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    Looks good, needs a bit more detail and try to rise up the environment a bit rather than just flat style towns to make it more ruined.
     
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    #3 Murloc212, Oct 13, 2014
  4. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    To be quite honest, I'm not liking the town so far.
    • The roads are very straight, plain, and symmetrical. That doesn't fit WarZ's theme that much.
    • Many of the town buildings should have a lot more detail and complexity. From what I'm looking at, those houses appear as if they've been built in a few minutes. Same thing applies with the McDonalds sign.
    • The town has a poor use of blocks. For example, the redstone lamps next to the roads don't seem appealing; same with the rails.
    • If I were you, I'd take away the perimeter fencing and the gold blocks in the top left quadrant. They make your build appear tacky.
     
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    #4 F1r3tar, Oct 13, 2014
  5. Serine1002

    Serine1002 A shadow in the night

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    This is to plain. The surface levelling is all the same, the block variation is none, this is not fit for WarZ.
    Vary the blocks, make the terrain look rough, don't have straights roads/walk ways, add some detail to the buildings.
    -1
     
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    #5 Serine1002, Oct 13, 2014
  6. Elkus

    Elkus Active Member

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    Thanks for the feedback guys. :smile: I will use it to make my town better. :grinning:
    It's my first build so I new I'd have to improve it somehow. :stuck_out_tongue:
     
    #6 Elkus, Oct 14, 2014
    Last edited: Oct 15, 2014
  7. MrDasky

    MrDasky Veteran

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    I'm sorry but this build needs a bit more detail.
    I suggest that you put more detail in:
    • The floor, try to use some other blocks than just grass. Example: dirt, stone. You can also put some grass on the top.
    • The houses need some more detail. Try to use more block variations.
    • The roads. They are too straight. I'm sure you could fix that. :smile:
    • Terrain, it's very flat.
    Good luck!
     
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    #7 MrDasky, Oct 14, 2014
  8. Elkus

    Elkus Active Member

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    Thanks for the feedback. :grinning:

    Thanks for the feedback.
     
    #8 Elkus, Oct 14, 2014
    Last edited: Oct 30, 2014
  9. Choci

    Choci Well-Known Member

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    Copy & paste because I am lazy :C

    Tips & Tricks
    - Add some hills etc.
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    - This is supposed to be a city why do you use gravel paths?
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    - Use different shapes.
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    - Do not use Diamond blocks etc. for the floor.
    - ✘ Cobblestone + wood = Medival / ✔ stained clay+ glass = Modern
     
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    #9 Choci, Oct 14, 2014
  10. Murloc212

    Murloc212 Member

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    That is exactly what I am talking about
     
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    #10 Murloc212, Oct 14, 2014
  11. Canned_Pasta

    Canned_Pasta Well-Known Member

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    Fantastic! Its really nice. I hope they will come in warZ
     
    #11 Canned_Pasta, Oct 15, 2014
  12. Elkus

    Elkus Active Member

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    All right, I went through and edited it quite a bit. I think it looks a lot better now. Thanks for your informative direction and suggestions. :grinning:
     
    #12 Elkus, Oct 15, 2014
  13. MrDasky

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    No problem. :smile:
     
    #13 MrDasky, Oct 16, 2014
  14. Elkus

    Elkus Active Member

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    K. I like my fence but I took apart the gold blocks. I see what you mean about "tacky" :smile:
    I also made the roads less straight.
     
    #14 Elkus, Oct 16, 2014
  15. Serine1002

    Serine1002 A shadow in the night

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    This has become a lot better, however the colourful wool still doesn't real look nice with WarZ make the building similar. Overall this is very detailed and better now. +1
     
    #15 Serine1002, Oct 16, 2014
  16. Elkus

    Elkus Active Member

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    Oh. :stuck_out_tongue:

    The wool is actually market booths. Like little tents? yep. :stuck_out_tongue:
     
    #16 Elkus, Oct 16, 2014
  17. Murloc212

    Murloc212 Member

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    Here's a tip: Make the build not look like minecraft :wink:
     
    #17 Murloc212, Oct 16, 2014
  18. Elkus

    Elkus Active Member

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    heh. :grinning: I suppose this is a valid tip. :stuck_out_tongue: I plan on trying for more submissions in the future. I have actually made plenty of amazing things in the past, but I tried to smush a lot of different ideas into a small plot. Hopefully in the future I will have bigger plots and such. :grinning:

    So, do I get a notification if this gets accepted or what?
     
    #18 Elkus, Oct 24, 2014
  19. BDP

    BDP Active Member

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    Really good work. Loving it. Hope to see it out on the battle field some day.
     
    #19 BDP, Oct 25, 2014
  20. Elkus

    Elkus Active Member

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    Thanks. :grinning: I hope so too. I'm an ADV builder now so imma going to work on some more submissions soon.
     
    #20 Elkus, Oct 25, 2014
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