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Complete Futuristic Cafe/Port Area

Discussion in 'Building Submissions' started by Neptunide, Mar 20, 2015.

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  1. Neptunide

    Neptunide This is my Smurf Account

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    WarZ Building Submission

    Name: Futuristic Cafe/Port Area
    Style: Futuristic, industrial, restaurant
    Creator(s): ZippyClutch
    Picture(s):
    Exterior:
    http://gyazo.com/3963a3c5ea607609a3b25ac87f051cf9
    http://gyazo.com/196691f8effb3ddfe51af914bf63c1c2
    http://gyazo.com/ce0b54a099f00391056a9128de9feb8c
    http://gyazo.com/6f24b4c3c77b22aa256b7b6375162647

    Top:
    http://gyazo.com/ac02ab6a04571e4269007e60853c2914

    Interior:
    http://gyazo.com/034f1a936691c1421a7ffd5cef38bc35
    http://gyazo.com/5dfb78c116a2aa8b6ec062f5c46a465b
    http://gyazo.com/7af12b0f7581ef429721c745923f05ad
    http://gyazo.com/7e6301aadb4403eb06ba1de6e1b279a0
    http://gyazo.com/aaf4b84ec254f43dfaececb47307280d
    http://gyazo.com/80e8b514363e75592b988fcacbaebe16
    http://gyazo.com/1410c6118a6509364f0c48d4e3babdcd

    Location: Creative World in Single Player

    Hope you enjoy!!
     
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    #1 Neptunide, Mar 20, 2015
  2. GlobalistCuck

    GlobalistCuck Well-Known Member

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    It looks very nice! I like that you took the time to take so many screenshots, it really helps paint a picture of your build. I would love to see this in WarZ :smile:
     
    #2 GlobalistCuck, Mar 20, 2015
  3. Neptunide

    Neptunide This is my Smurf Account

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    Thank you!! As you read my post I read your mod app. Good luck!

    I felt that putting a lot of screenshots adds to the work I put into actually building... Uploading to Gyazo takes a while. x)
     
    #3 Neptunide, Mar 20, 2015
  4. Skilled_Builder

    Skilled_Builder Active Member

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    Zippy, the build is pretty decent, and it is aesthetically pleasing to some degree. That being said, however, it doesn't match the dilapidation and abandonment of the WarZ theme. Furthermore, the tones used in this build are too bright to match with other WarZ, and barely match the
    apocalyptic hue. I recommend you make the colors darker (quartz to wool, gold to yellow wool) and texture it a little more. Besides that, the structuring is pretty good, but to insure your chances of getting accepted, you should adjust your palette accordingly.
     
    #4 Skilled_Builder, Mar 25, 2015
  5. Neptunide

    Neptunide This is my Smurf Account

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    Thank you for the suggestions!

    I understand what you mean completely. You're right, it is too bright and happy to fit in with the other apocalyptic style buildings in WarZ.
    Great idea. I appreciate the help!!
    :smile:
     
    #5 Neptunide, Mar 25, 2015
  6. 19kss

    19kss 18kss

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    Nice.
     
    #6 19kss, Mar 27, 2015
  7. Healing

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    Nice build
     
    #7 Healing, Mar 27, 2015
    Last edited: Mar 27, 2015
  8. Algelier

    Algelier Former Staff Member.

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    Nice pack dude! It's very worked. I think you passed a lot of time on it.

    Good job!
     
    #8 Algelier, Mar 27, 2015
  9. dragonxPxP

    dragonxPxP Well-Known Member

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    Very nice building! Do you plan on making a town out of this or is his the whole project? :stuck_out_tongue:
     
    #9 dragonxPxP, Apr 2, 2015
  10. Neptunide

    Neptunide This is my Smurf Account

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    Not sure! That sounds like a cool idea.
    My first objective was for it just to be one single building, maybe it could fit with another build.
    But using the same style to make more buildings to add on sounds super cool! I'm super busy at the moment with school so I might not get to it for a while.
    Thanks!

    Also, check out my other build. That's the build of this that fits WarZ better...
    https://www.brawl.com/threads/36409/
     
    #10 Neptunide, Apr 2, 2015
  11. WillBine

    WillBine Well-Known Member

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    Looks great I should say.
     
    #11 WillBine, May 23, 2015
  12. Neptunide

    Neptunide This is my Smurf Account

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    Thanks everyone! If you haven't already, check out version 2 of this build. It clicks with WarZ more than V1...meaning that it isn't as fancy and is more apocalyptic.
    https://www.brawl.com/threads/36409/
     
    #12 Neptunide, May 23, 2015
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