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Discussion in 'Literature' started by Piky, Apr 15, 2015.

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  1. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    I got bored and made this x3
    And for the love of holy cheese... If you're going to be that 'guy' and post a 'grammar mistake' comment, leave now. Read the damn story...

    It begins on a faithful day in WarZ, a apartment house which was built by Senon. Senon was a very nice person, allowing people to live for free in his apartments to live on from the zombies. Some people question (nicely) why he twitches a lot when he talks or moves, it was a disorder he had. On one faithful sad day, he was murdered, his death was caused by a single shot to the heart from a Barrett shot by a bandit. A year later the place worn down a lot, but had chests lying around, the apartment room 4# was his death place. But after some deaths that occurred in that very room. The owner, becoming legendary to this day, always seeking his revenge on those who try to take his belongings..
    "You shouldn't of done that..."
    And I am making a map of this btw :stuck_out_tongue:
     
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  2. NathanDrake

    NathanDrake Well-Known Member

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    "You shouldn't of done that."
     
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    #2 NathanDrake, Apr 15, 2015
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  3. alleging

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    I cannot sleep.
     
    #3 alleging, Apr 15, 2015
  4. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    Please don't be that guy.
     
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  5. onepunchmeme

    onepunchmeme Well-Known Member

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    [​IMG]

    Pik what grade do you have in English
     
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    #5 onepunchmeme, Apr 16, 2015
  6. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    I'm not always the best at English (learning problem). And I didn't even think 'of' was that bad in grammar wise. Too bad my English isn't the best. (And for future people DON'T CALL OUT MY GRAMMAR..)
    However in the quote, he has a disorder, which doesn't always let him speak correctly when he twitches, so he can tend to not completely pronounce words correctly. I guess I'll 'fix' it since it's going to bug the hell out of everyone..
     
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  7. GlobalistCuck

    GlobalistCuck Well-Known Member

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    I should make a pie chart of how many comments to this thread were about the content and not the grammatical error.

    Spoiler alert: It's none of them.
     
    #7 GlobalistCuck, Apr 16, 2015
  8. MortalJE

    MortalJE Well-Known Member

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    I always love reading the things you write Pikmin. :smile:
     
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    #8 MortalJE, Apr 16, 2015
  9. BorN_Adderr

    BorN_Adderr Well-Known Member

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    Heh, I always love reading your stuff Pikmin c:

    Lol when I saw the title was like, "OMG is that a Ben Drowned reference?!?!?!"

    No one else thought that?

    No one else knows who Ben Drowned is?


    Oh

    Okay



    I'll just leave now
     
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    #9 BorN_Adderr, Apr 16, 2015
  10. MR_EVIL_OVERLORD

    MR_EVIL_OVERLORD Elite Legacy Legend | PRO | Genius Super Villain

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    I was thinking about him going Hulk.....

    You shouldn't have done that.......
     
    #10 MR_EVIL_OVERLORD, Apr 16, 2015
  11. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    It was indeed a 'Ben Drowned' reference c:
    That's what made me thought of this story.
     
    #11 Piky, Apr 16, 2015
  12. alleging

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    I feel like u don't know what Ben drowned was like ;-;
     
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  13. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    Ben drowned is a creepy pasta about a boy who drowned (obviously). A college person bought the game from an old man and found a file called 'Ben drowned', he deleted it and started a new game, when he got to the person, then came the famous quote "You've meet with a terrible faith." If I'm wrong, someone correct me.
     
    #13 Piky, Apr 16, 2015
  14. alleging

    alleging Well-Known Member

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    That's where u got the quote from I was talking about the storyline ;-;
     
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  15. Chopo

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    You shouldn't of have done that.
     
    #15 Chopo, Apr 16, 2015
  16. BorN_Adderr

    BorN_Adderr Well-Known Member

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    Wow... you actually know what it is :0 *is happy*
     
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  17. Scwushy

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    Am i the only one going through the messages and laughing at some of them cause their funny? :stuck_out_tongue::hilarious::cat: Guess i am ok i'll leave you guys alone..




    Bye:frowning:


    (Btw idc about the mistakes everyone makes them in life and idk why people make it a big deal bc someone cant spell a word and that person just becomes the dictionary)
     
    #17 Scwushy, Dec 20, 2015
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