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Denied Fortified For WEPro!

Discussion in 'Denied' started by Fortified, Jun 12, 2015.

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Should I become WEPro?

  1. Yes

    15 vote(s)
    53.6%

  2. No

    13 vote(s)
    46.4%
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  1. Fortified

    Fortified Member

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    Brawl Creative Ranks Application:

    What is your in-game name? - Fortified

    What is your current rank? - WE 2
    What rank are you applying for? - WEPro
    Do you understand what this rank provides? - Yes -
    • WorldEdit anywhere
    • 4 total available plot claims
    Are you part of any Building Teams in our community? - Not yet, but I may join one or create one in the future.

    What is your experience with building in Minecraft? - I started minecraft when I was about 12 or so, and grew a love over it throughout the years. My building wasn't too great and I knew I could be better, I watched people build things through timelapses/tutorials, looked at pictures of amazing builds, experimented on my own, and I have unleashed my mind and inverted them into my very own builds, which has brought me up to this point. I have recently gained a love of building landscape's such as, and my strong point in building I would consider Nordic/Viking type houses and other various structures. I do believe that I could get better at all my hot spots and weakness', and strive for that goal as of today.
    Why do you need the rank? - I would like the rank for several reasons, of course the most important reason having WE anywhere, but also to have more small plots for large house building, and posting them on larger plots to form great communities. and to also be more of a go-to/trustworthy helper towards builders and up.

    Show us a picture of your current build - 2015-06-12_17.08.36.png
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    Show us pictures of your previous builds     -

    Do you realize if you abuse any commands or privileges rank will be taken away? - Of course

    Please insert a Yes / No poll below.
     
    #1 Fortified, Jun 12, 2015
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  2. nezzr

    nezzr ◃┆◉◡◉┆▷

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    #2 nezzr, Jun 12, 2015
  3. MinecraftBoydoMC

    MinecraftBoydoMC Member

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    I think the builds are amazing! +1
    Spelling +0.5
    Application +0.5
    You still need proof for 2 builds the ice one and the desert and ice one -1
    Over all I grade it +1 and I've seen proof on your plot of those builds except for the 2 I mentioned but I hope you get WEPro
     
    #3 MinecraftBoydoMC, Jun 12, 2015
  4. Fortified

    Fortified Member

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    This picture is proof for the whole plot 2015-06-12_17.08.36.png
     
    #4 Fortified, Jun 12, 2015
  5. LeeHerouiPower

    LeeHerouiPower Well-Known Member

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    Very good!
    I like your builds.
    And de theme background.
    +1.
     
    #5 LeeHerouiPower, Jun 12, 2015
  6. Fortified

    Fortified Member

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    Thank you for the feedback!
     
    #6 Fortified, Jun 12, 2015
  7. potatoesky

    potatoesky Well-Known Member

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    The whole build just looks a bit rushed and I think you can use a little help with the landscapes.
    The application looks alright, though. Good luck! +0
     
    #7 potatoesky, Jun 12, 2015
  8. Fortified

    Fortified Member

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    Thank you, I will try to improve any future builds I shall make
     
    #8 Fortified, Jun 12, 2015
  9. MisterHitNRun

    MisterHitNRun Member

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    I love them!! but yah the landscape just needs a bit little improvement. I still love it tho!!! +1
     
    #9 MisterHitNRun, Jun 12, 2015
  10. Andrwe

    Andrwe Well-Known Member

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    I like your map, it looks like it is for pvp, is it?
    Good luck on the rank, I voted yes :grinning:.
     
    #10 Andrwe, Jun 12, 2015
  11. Fortified

    Fortified Member

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    I could consider it becoming that...
     
    #11 Fortified, Jun 12, 2015
  12. EddKrumbs

    EddKrumbs Well-Known Member

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    IMO your builds could use some work. The terrain is really unnatural and it's there are signs of WE everywhere. The different climates also look weird when they're right next to each other. Everything else is fine but the builds drag down my vote.
     
    #12 EddKrumbs, Jun 12, 2015
  13. phillip0602

    phillip0602 Brawl Veteran

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    You used WE at most of it Gj at that. +1
    Details at the buildings -1
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    I go in a check the plot you Got maybe i change my mind.
     
    #13 phillip0602, Jun 13, 2015
  14. Gynamo

    Gynamo Well-Known Member

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    Nice looking builds man, good job! +1
     
    #14 Gynamo, Jun 13, 2015
  15. Fortified

    Fortified Member

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    I tried going for the `unnatural' look between the different biomes :wink:
     
    #15 Fortified, Jun 13, 2015
  16. Doges

    Doges Ex-Mod, Ex-Builder

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    I recommend you show that you are proficient in the three main areas of building for the highest rank on ANY creative server -- Detailing (house detail, etc), Terraforming(terrain), and Organics(custom trees, statues, etc).

    Right now, I see no organics, and mediocre terraforming/detailing. Also, work on making your map flow. Try to stick to one theme, instead of having different ones next to each other.

    Overall, I'd say work a little bit more on your builds.
     
    #16 Doges, Jun 13, 2015
  17. Fortified

    Fortified Member

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    Ok, I will keep that in mind
     
    #17 Fortified, Jun 13, 2015
  18. Xelasi

    Xelasi Well-Known Member

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    ^ Seconding what Doges said.

    It's easy to tell which things are world edited onto the map. The end goal should be for the terrain to flow naturally (even if it's a fantasy theme) and for builds to be detailed (and preferably realistic). It's still really visible where sphere and cylinder brushes were used and where block mixes (dirt,grass etc) were used.

    My favorite out of the terrains submitted was the ice one because you can see the extra detail put into the ice spikes by hand. Also, the mountain area near the waterfall is cool, I like that.

    Get extra detailed with builds as well by adding depth to walls, more layers, varying materials, and utilizing things like fences/trapdoors/stairs/buttons/slabs in creative ways. You're off to a good start, just be prepared to spend an obscene amount of time working on the little things.
     
    #18 Xelasi, Jun 13, 2015
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  19. turkeywing_999

    turkeywing_999 Well-Known Member

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    He is in my build team, And he built thoughs,
     
    #19 turkeywing_999, Jun 13, 2015
  20. schml1f

    schml1f Active Member

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    +1 c:
     
    #20 schml1f, Jun 13, 2015
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