Denied Turkeywings we pro application.

Try to include images of your builds. It's easier for us to judge.

 

Mmm okay. I'll try to look at them in-game later.

 

I thought you were quitting Creative?

 

Right, but you've already done that about 5 times so not that surprising.

Back on topic, it is mandatory for you to post pictures on your rank application. You can't just tell people to go check your plot to see your builds.

 

I've seen some pretty detailed WEPro apps get denied, leading me to think you should've put more effort into the overall application. For example you have various grammar/spelling errors, as well as capitalization.

Also take into consideration that most people don't have access to world 2, so pictures are a must in order for people to judge you.

I however have seen your plot, so it's a +0 from me. Fix up the application and it'll be a +1

 

Bro, Litarlly, K, I'm not even gonna start on your drama fest you start, even though you are WE2. First off, Litarlly no one is gonna want to go to your plot and see the builds, not everyone can have special treatment, There's No Pole, You cheated builds from perfectmilk before, you're quitting, so you're not gonna use it a lot, 1-

 

If you have too many builds, use imgur links.

 

-1 for now
I need pics.

 

Bruh why do you even bother *facepalm* you quit creative, and you obviously don't need and deserve this rank.

 

I can go on and ramble about how you ''quit'' creative, but I think that others have described that better than I could.

EVALUATION TIME!

App: It is mediocre. However, the grammar is pretty bad, making you look immature.
I also find the answer to ''What is your experience with building in Minecraft?'' very unspecific. Building spawns for very huge servers? What server is that ''huge server'' you are talking about, and do you have proof of you actually making it?

Overall: -0. You need to be more specific. also, given the fact that you stated that you have quit creative, some of these answers are literally a contradiction.

Builds: I have decided to take a look at it, and most of them do look nice. However, I noticed that you copied the helicopters on your map A LOT. Honestly, it is kind of lazy to keep the same design over and over, but I can't get mad at it.

Overall: +1. Your builds are very nice looking. They have some certain flaws, but that is to be expected.

You yourself: Now is the time to talk about WHO is getting this rank. I myself, believe that you are very immature, you have ignored some of my advice in the past. However, I will not judge your builds for how you act, neither give any points, positive or negative, to you for that.

I myself give you a 0 for the rank. However, it is leaning a little bit more to the -1, due to the fact that you ''quit'' the server, and now are stating that you have not quit 'yet'.

Good luck!

 

Then I wonder why you made that thread about you leaving. hmm... And if you're only coming back for a couple of weeks, then why didn't you make the thread about you leaving then?

 

Is every build in this application yours? It looks like some other people built some of these builds. Can you provide screenshots of what you made?

 

*English is NOT my first language. I apologize for any grammar/spelling error.

I took quite a lot of my time to gather these informations, so it would be great if you read all of the things. I actually thought that you've improved your attitude, building, application, etc. However, you have not yet showed any change over the large amount of time that has passed. I am a little disappointed that even after I helped you out with a lot of things, I realize that you haven't even been listening to me over that "talk" you chose to have. I tried my best to tell you how to improve on your attitude and gave you a chance to build with me because that's what you asked for. All of the things I've said to you didn't really mean anything, huh? Just a waste of my time. However, that is totally okay. This is just a game and people can choose to be who they are. Let me just say this. I will take this application judging very seriously.

-----Getting on with the rank application-----​

Application: -1
Come on. You didn't even put 0.1% effort into this application. There can't be any excuse to why your application is so vague and effortless. Not sure if you're paying attention to what you're applying for. Sure, it's a simple building rank, not a staff application. However, this is not an AdvBuilder application. Trying to get away with this short and subpar WEPro application is not acceptable. I usually do not enjoy comparing things to other things, but I want to point something out. Just keep in mind, I am not comparing the builds on the rank application, ONLY the whole written section of it in general. So if you see the comparison spoiler, you can very easily tell that the AdvBuilder Application is very well written with proper grammar, lots of detail, and effort. Comparing it with Turkey's WEPro application, it sure seems like Turkey's application is effortless, vague, with bad spelling and grammar. Well, that's because it's true. It's not just "seem like", it's just 'it is', because that's what it is. Turkey, you might have taken things a bit too easily. Showing that you put a lot of effort into a rank app is also a bonus.

Spoiler: Comparison

Someone's AdvBuilder App:
Turkey's WEPro App:Someone's AdvBuilder App:
Turkey's WEPro App:
Someone's AdvBuilder App:
Turkey's WEPro App:

Builds: -1
How am I not surprised that you would do these things? Turkey, you are a great builder, you truly are. However, you do not accept you for you. You try too hard, and that doesn't help at all. "Your" builds on the plot 3 that you told us to look at... Let me ask you a question. Are all of the builds actually yours? Did you really build them? The bridges, the helicopters, the castles, the medieval houses, the windmill, and etc.

This windmill on your 3rd plot looks very nice. I really like the-- Oh, wait a minute. It looks really familiar. I think my friend @TheRedEngineer has the same build on his plot. Let me go check.

Oh! Oh, hmm. I'm pretty sure that Red built it first. Wait, to make sure that he actually built it, let me find a video he uploaded ages ago. I think I found it. Unfortunately, Turkey, you've made a huge noticeable mistake. If you look at the bottom of the windmill that "you" built on your plot, you can see that it was copied using //pos1 & //pos2. I can tell by the placement of the grass at the bottom. You cannot make an excuse that you did not copy & paste it unless you have a good proof that you actually built it. Otherwise, I think I've showed a pretty good proof that this was built by someone else.

You told us to make sure we go to your 3rd plot in world3, but I also visited your other plots in that world. I found another interesting thing. There's a really nice looking plane on that plot. I really like it. Honestly, I really do like it.

Doesn't it look really cool? It's really really cool in my opinion. I have a question, though. Why so many? You have about 15 of them on your plot. I didn't really count, but there's that many. A lot of planes and some of them look a bit odd (like that one on the right side in the middle). I actually went like "Oh what a nice plane! or planes in this case" but then realized that my other friend @TheUnseenArmy who helped me build for the Abandoned Earth Project, built that plane. Again, you used the //pos1 & //pos2 command. Keep doing this, and we lose trust in ya, buddy. Everything that are on your plots seem like they were copied and pasted since I've seen so many of the same builds on my friends' plots in the past. However, I think I've done enough with this proof thing.

I think I've mentioned this before. Yeah, I've definitely mentioned it bunch of times on your past rank applications. The repetitive patterns on your builds. Well, that's only for the builds that YOU have actually built by yourself. Such as this castle from a very long time ago.

You are using this on your 3rd plot as a "current" build, but you haven't really worked on any new builds recently. I know this because you've made so many "I quit Creative" threads, and you've been pretty inactive lately. I doubt that your 3rd plot is actually a current build. However, continuing with the pattern. I personally dislike very repetitive patterns and most of the builds you actually build are like this. You probably already know this, since I've mentioned it so many times. You haven't improved on building and you never will if you don't practice. Well, the pattern thing is personal preference, so it's not that much of a big deal.

Maturity/Attitude: -1
Starting with the fact that you create so many immature threads such as:

• https://www.brawl.com/threads/41519/
  
• https://www.brawl.com/threads/42140/
  
• https://www.brawl.com/threads/42880/
  
• https://www.brawl.com/threads/43012/
  
• https://www.brawl.com/threads/43283/
  
• https://www.brawl.com/threads/43285/

Spoiler: Also, let me quote some of the things you've said.

Many builders and AdvBuilders I know are way more mature than you are. I don't think you're the right one to point that out since you're pretty immature yourself.

So did you really leave? No.

You know you won't.

You said that already, yet you never left.

Oh really.

You don't say.

Last day, huh? Alright.

You said you will be quitting creative about, I don't know, maybe a few millions of times. It's obvious that you created the threads for attention, which seems pretty immature to me.

You do not get a special treatment. You need to post screenshots of your builds on your own just like everyone else. Telling us that you have too many cannot be an excuse. A lot of people have "too many" screenshots to post, but they actually take their time posting them so it's easier for the judges to look at. Making things easier for the judges is actually a bonus. Posting screenshots of your builds on a rank application is not optional, it's mandatory.

Take time to consider what you're doing wrong, instead of considering how to make people like you and how to get attention. I think fixing the mistakes first would be pretty helpful for you.

 

Whoa Potato put 10x more effort in his reply than your application. Bro this whole thing sums it up. You have copied builds and unless it was a while back this shows you aren't ready. You are also very immature and TromboneSupreme said that people insulted him which made him leave Brawl and you were one of those people. Sorry, -1.

 

lol I'm not a guy