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Story My First Love

Discussion in 'Literature' started by iMacro, Aug 12, 2015.

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Does this sound like something out of an anime? Being reunited with your long lost friend is unreal.

  1. Yes (That kind of reality is rare)

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  2. No (It can occur) I made a friend that I have't seen for 6 years from the school. I was reunited.

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  3. Makes me cry to think about it again

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  1. iMacro

    iMacro An Essential Meme Maker (^:

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    Hi, I just wanted to update the WarZ story but, to slightly make up for it. I'm writing a story about my first true love. How should I start this, oh I know.
    Once upon a time, in a country far South. It's name is Australia, there was once a little boy who was moving into 1st grade after finishing Pre-Primary. I think, I a first person point of view would be better for this so let's change this up. I was excited about entering year 1 but I had to move schools, as devastated as I was, I forgot about it shortly. I was a class clown, figuring it's the only way I got attention. I even had a small fetish of licking the glue, I still remember it. The taste was bitter but sweet at the same time, I managed to make it into a small group with just five of us. A months have past since I started this school, it was time for show and tell... The girl, that was just in the centre of every boy's attention in our year, had come up and presented a picture of herself in a pure white dress, similar to that of an angel's clothing. The girl and I didn't talk much at all, but I liked her. I decided the only way to become friend's with her is to talk to her, my mind and heart had already set what I should say to her. After the show and tell, once she was finally alone I came and sat next to her on the ground and said "You look pretty in that picture". She had misunderstood what I said so she replies with "I know my cousin took the photo". She thought I said that the picture was nicely taken but I said "No, I mean you look pretty in the picture". She became extremely uncomfortable with what I said, blushing red. Though she managed to say "Aw, thanks you're so sweet." I didn't understand the feelings I had for her back then. I didn't understand the concept of love and to be loved. Though the next day, my friend's told me that she put something on my desk. There it was a cute little pink envelope with a cake drawn ontop of it. I slowly read what it said,
    Dear, (My name)
    Thanks, for calling me pretty yesterday.
    I'm not sure how to thank you so I decided
    to write this letter thanking you.
    You're a nice person, I hope to get along with you.
    I like you.
    (A drawing of a heart)
    (My first love's name).
    Well that's basically it, even though we were seperated for 7 painful years after that, she had stayed in my heart forever. We were reunited in year 8, and yeah... You know what happens after.
    Alright this is just to make up for the WarZ story. This is not made up, I used the old letter I still have in my locked box after refinding it. I never thought I would keep something for over 10 years now, I showed her, her own letter. Writing this makes me think back when I was just a little clown back then. Till this day, we have not been seperated. (I'm in grade 10 now).
    Alright if I don't write the WarZ story by today, I will slap myself. @JuanIsDead remind me, you are one of the main side characters remember.
     
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  2. CapzMC

    CapzMC Well-Known Member

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    It's name was Australia
    It's name is Australia. Just saying, correct me if I'm wrong.

    Awesome story doe.
     
  3. iMacro

    iMacro An Essential Meme Maker (^:

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    Sounds better than was and more logical thanks.
     
  4. Sir_Inge

    Sir_Inge Well-Known Member

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    Amazing story. Makes me a little jealous.

    Mine is like the plot of some crappy romantic comedy.
    :facepalm:
    She liked this guy but she couldn't talk to him. I said I'd help her out. I talked to the guy about her and he was really quite rude. I told her, but she never believed me. We became friends, and I kept telling her that this guy was trouble, but she never believed it. I guess I started having feelings for her. I guess she also started having feelings for me. At some point, she started feeling more strongly about me than him. The rest is obvious.
     
  5. onepunchmeme

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    From the title I thought you were talking about Hatsune Miku lol
    Very good story, though. There's some grammar disrepancies here and there, but overall the composition is very well done.
     
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  6. Romkelolol

    Romkelolol Well-Known Member

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    My first love story ends very awkwardly.

    And yes, I did think it was about miku. In fact, I thought it was a fan fic of you in an anime school with all the vocaloids. :V
     
  7. Xavier1974

    Xavier1974 I cream scarecrows

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    Quite off topic, but everyone has their own story.
     
  8. FairyBlossom03

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    :open_mouth: That's a cool story!
     
  9. BuddyCroooock

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    Hue, how comes I come up in every story of yours :3
     
  10. iMacro

    iMacro An Essential Meme Maker (^:

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    Cause you dont
     
  11. Mokolee

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    Finding a long-term relationship is like catching a saltwater fish with a short thread and using a crumb of bread as bait.

    What I'm saying is, fishermen get all the ladies.
     
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  12. MR_EVIL_OVERLORD

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    I was waiting for his first love to chew his face off....
     
  13. iMacro

    iMacro An Essential Meme Maker (^:

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    Well I didn't recognise her again after we were reunited. I was physically harmed :V
     
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