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Discussion in 'Photos' started by Aribunnii, Sep 12, 2015.

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  1. Aribunnii

    Aribunnii Well-Known Member

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    I did this for a ych but I genuinely feel like my coloring is going downhill. I'm trying to do more of an anime coloring style (resisting the urge to paint) but it's... not as good as It could be.
    Would you guys mind critiquing my art but mainly the coloring?

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    #1 Aribunnii, Sep 12, 2015
  2. Subjugating

    Subjugating Well-Known Member

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    Nice art! I like the shading throughout the uniform.
     
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    #2 Subjugating, Sep 12, 2015
  3. GetShadowRealmed

    GetShadowRealmed What do I put here

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    All those people who are like it could be better. BE HAPPY YOU CAN EVEN DRAW. I can barely draw stick figures. I think it looks great. nice job
     
    #3 GetShadowRealmed, Sep 12, 2015
  4. potatoesky

    potatoesky Well-Known Member

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    Whaa are you kidding... It's perfection! I love everything about it. The colouring looks amazing. I love what you did with the eyes too, it looks great c:

    Oh btw, I can't look at your profile ;-; Are you ever thinking of changing the settings back to where any member can view it? Uh, not that I want to stalk you or anything.. Pfft c;
     
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    #4 potatoesky, Sep 12, 2015
  5. Aribunnii

    Aribunnii Well-Known Member

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    thanks guys but I'm being super serious. I think I'm going to work on a style more like this http://sta.sh/01aufe9r3wwv- http://sta.sh/01aufe9r3wwvhttp://sta.sh/01aufe9r3wwvhttp://sta.sh/01aufe9r3wwv

    i fixed it btw
     
    #5 Aribunnii, Sep 12, 2015
  6. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    If you're going for more of the stereotypical anime girl appearance, expand the size of the eyes more (not too much). The body proportions look right, but the eyes are slightly too small.

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    #6 F1r3tar, Sep 12, 2015
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  7. Aribunnii

    Aribunnii Well-Known Member

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    uh.. I genuinely appreciate it but I can't stand a lot of anime's where the girls have shoujo eyes like that.
    You're totally right though. I'll try it later thanks.
     
    #7 Aribunnii, Sep 12, 2015
  8. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    I edited my post. When I meant expand the pupils, I meant increase the overall size of the eyes slightly.
     
    #8 F1r3tar, Sep 12, 2015
  9. Aribunnii

    Aribunnii Well-Known Member

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    ah you were right

    http://sta.sh/010h0ltu10i3
     
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    #9 Aribunnii, Sep 12, 2015
  10. BuddyCroooock

    BuddyCroooock Well-Known Member

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    Great work! I'm sure you're able to make a great future with this! Keep going!
     
    #10 BuddyCroooock, Sep 25, 2015
  11. amazingallen234

    amazingallen234 Former Jmod | Wild West

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    Its very nice. I never even try to draw, since all I can make is stick figures and a weird, deformed Kirby.
     
    #11 amazingallen234, Sep 25, 2015
  12. Aribunnii

    Aribunnii Well-Known Member

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    thanks ^^''
     
    #12 Aribunnii, Sep 28, 2015
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