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Complete Rapid_fire - MC-WAR map

Discussion in 'Maps Submissions' started by pAggYDaRP, Sep 12, 2015.

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Should this be added?

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  2. Maybe

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  1. pAggYDaRP

    pAggYDaRP Well-Known Member

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    NOTE: I did a HUUUUUUUUGE edit and fixed all the issues. Please review this thread again even if you have already, because things have changed...

    Hey guys

    This is my first mc-war map i have made. I made it on build, map id is 252422 (/play build 1 > /map 252422). I made this map on my own, so it took a looong time to be made. (Although it looks the same as before, I have basically redone every single part of it)

    Gamemodes:

    TDM -     Duh. This was what this map was made for. Good cover spots from vehicles and explosions. uneven land so those are also good. There are some holes through explosions, so you can shoot people through them as well. Not so many camping spots, and most rooms have 2 entrances to flank.

    CTF - ^^^     plus flag poles arent too close to spawns.

    INF -     I dont think this would work for infect, it would be very hard for the root as the humans could go to the back of the map and because of all the explosions, theres alot of parkouring and while the zombies are parkouring they are exposed to the humans to shoot.

    FFA -     Probably not suitable for ffa or anyone non-team games as there are lots of explosion parkour so people will pretty much be parkouring the whole time, and not killing. Also, there are alot of unfair spawnpoints.

    GUNGAME - ^^^

    ONEIN - ^^^

    Here are the screenshots:

    Also, if you're wondering where the blue spawn is, its in that building thing in the bottom left-hand corner of the 2nd screenshot.

    Click to view imgur album!


    This was the very first time using WorldEdit, and the very first time building an mc-war map, so im pretty proud of myself.

    Please tell me what you like or don't like, and what should be changed. Criticism is accepted, as long as you explain why you dont like it.

    This map may look small, but it is very easy to get onto the sand mounds, so they are also part of the battlefield. Before the remake, I also found lots of ooms, I fixed those.

    IMPORTANT: Where there looks like ooms, there are barrier blocks, so dont worry! :grinning:

    EDIT:     I added random blocks or sand on the edges of the sand to create cover.
     
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    #1 pAggYDaRP, Sep 12, 2015
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  2. imsevenyearsold

    imsevenyearsold Well-Known Member

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    Love it, but i can see several OOMs already...
     
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    #2 imsevenyearsold, Sep 12, 2015
  3. Romkelolol

    Romkelolol Well-Known Member

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    This map looks kinda small. It also looks like a carbon copy of Blowout/Dday. And as stated by peter, there seem to be a lot of OOM spots, unless if you placed barrier blocks on them.
     
    #3 Romkelolol, Sep 12, 2015
  4. KarpatMan

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    This is good map for begginer but it is too small.Keep making new maps!
     
    #4 KarpatMan, Sep 12, 2015
  5. pAggYDaRP

    pAggYDaRP Well-Known Member

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    there are barrier blocks on where it looks like ooms, ill put that in the thread :smile:
    Thank you for the feedback!
     
    #5 pAggYDaRP, Sep 12, 2015
  6. DenMik122

    DenMik122 Well-Known Member

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    I think it seems very small, and alot ways to go oom. Spoderman agrees that it looks great!
     
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    #6 DenMik122, Sep 12, 2015
  7. pAggYDaRP

    pAggYDaRP Well-Known Member

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    read the previous comments before commenting please
     
    #7 pAggYDaRP, Sep 12, 2015
  8. MR_EVIL_OVERLORD

    MR_EVIL_OVERLORD Elite Legacy Legend | PRO | Genius Super Villain

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    I like the pictures and the time lapse.

    @DenMik122 refers to things in the 3rd person because he is just too awesome.
     
    #8 MR_EVIL_OVERLORD, Sep 12, 2015
  9. Xavier1974

    Xavier1974 I cream scarecrows

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    Are there barriers?
    If there aren't then a lot of OOMs are possible and you'll be denied. Add some barriers (if there aren't some)
     
    #9 Xavier1974, Sep 12, 2015
  10. pAggYDaRP

    pAggYDaRP Well-Known Member

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    FREAKING READ THE WHOLE THING BEFORE COMMENTING INCLUDING THE BIT IN BOLD THAT SAYS IMPORTANT! JEEZ
     
    #10 pAggYDaRP, Sep 12, 2015
  11. Intincrui

    Intincrui Well-Known Member

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    It looks nice, but it's way to small.
     
    #11 Intincrui, Sep 12, 2015
  12. pAggYDaRP

    pAggYDaRP Well-Known Member

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    ok, ill work on that for my next map maybe.:grinning:
     
    #12 pAggYDaRP, Sep 12, 2015
  13. Trevorsleeping

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    I wish people knew how to read the bottom of forum posts *giant bold letters* THERE ARE BARRIER BLOCKS WHERE OOM SPOTS ARE!!!
     
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    #13 Trevorsleeping, Sep 12, 2015
  14. pAggYDaRP

    pAggYDaRP Well-Known Member

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    ikr. people these dayz...
     
    #14 pAggYDaRP, Sep 12, 2015
  15. NateTheDerp

    NateTheDerp Well-Known Member

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    i think the map is to small and needs elevation. Also make the other side not be half water.
     
    #15 NateTheDerp, Sep 20, 2015
  16. Lekosa1

    Lekosa1 mineman

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    All these peeps who don't even read the thread :/
    Nice map.
     
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    #16 Lekosa1, Sep 20, 2015
  17. pAggYDaRP

    pAggYDaRP Well-Known Member

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    Thanks

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    OK. I know this will get denied because of the size and half of the map is like just water. I am working on a remake right now.
     
    #17 pAggYDaRP, Sep 23, 2015
  18. NateTheDerp

    NateTheDerp Well-Known Member

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    You don't have to remake the map! In the water part you could just put tiny boats like in Dday. (Maps can't get denied either).
     
    #18 NateTheDerp, Sep 23, 2015
  19. Flaming_Alpaca

    Flaming_Alpaca Well-Known Member

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    To be completely honest, it looks like you took aspect from dday1, dday2, and blowout. Its your first map and usually first maps are a test and an opporunity to iprove based on community but I'm gonna have to be a bit harsh. If you want this nap to get accepted, you got to put hours and hours of dedicated work into it. Not many custom maps get accepted. You got to think about the level of detail, where there be any buildings, choke points, flank routes, sniping positions, etc. Now just a tip, I recommend posting this mpa instead in the creative build section justo show what u did and how you can improve on it. Once you get that feedback, then you can improve on your nest map and post it on the mc war map suggestions page. Nice first map. Keep it up and you will get better. Think outside the box.
     
    #19 Flaming_Alpaca, Sep 23, 2015
  20. pAggYDaRP

    pAggYDaRP Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for the feedback and tips! I'll try make sure i include these things for my next one!
     
    #20 pAggYDaRP, Sep 24, 2015
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