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Story Just a little time - Chapter 2

Discussion in 'Literature' started by Deppuccino, Nov 25, 2015.

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  1. Deppuccino

    Deppuccino Well-Known Member

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    It's been a month, wow.

    Ender had been walking along a mountain range for what seemed like an eternity, when he finally found the end of the mountains. That's when he saw one of the most fantastic sights a person could ever behold: The majestic River Reklen, a great river feeding some of Vanalva's greatest cities: Depsor and Clayfish, to name a few, and the Sun's reflections on the transparent waters shined like stars made in a lab by Zompigzan amateurs, and on the horizon, he could see the Great city of Clayfish, home to a unique culture and one of Depsoria's biggest cities. And in the near distance, he could see the Zombozian city of Ftar, the capital of the Ftar region (yes ik very original region name). Then he realised that he did a big mistake: he was walking 45 degrees to the right, so the mountain range he just passed was actually the Central Val'Hallan Crater, and it isn't many who know that Val'Halla was a HUMUNGIGANTUHUGEOUS volcano 5 babillion years ago, but it was.
    Ender needed food and water. So, like anyone else would do, he gone to Ftar. And Ftar was surprisingly neat and clean for a Zombozian city. After that, Ender looked up where he had to go, and ofc, it was back over the mountains. Well luckily for him, a guy that called himself John Smith offered him a ride, as he was going there too.
    When they arrived, the first thing Ender gone to was a jet fuel station. He loaded up with jet fuel, enough to take him to Slivakia.
    When he arrived at the airport, he was still with John Smith, who was going to CTF as well, apparently, as well as a guy named Jack Harkness.
    They arrived at Slivakia, at the Slivaku airport, and found that CTF was... not there. According to officials, CTF had just finished it's migration to Capaflag, and island that split from Slivakia a month before, and it's geological position on the globe had been sped up by time manipulators. But, Slivakia was in the process of a war in between all of it's neighboors, as well as Capaflag, so they had to walk to Panland, which was the nearest place from there that wasn't at war, but the officials interveined, pointing out the fact that both Blueslem, Magmasus and Sheepland had their borders with Slivakia cut off, so they couldn't get there by land, and the Slivakia-Blueslem war also covered the inner Panland Gulf, so travelling by sea was also not advised, adding to that with the fact that the Kuaku ridge was there, so the only port in all of the Panland gulf who would and could accept them was Kuaku, in Koalatia, and that's past the naval battles and the Kuaku ridge, so they literally only had Kuaku and a tiny bit of land in between it and the Panland border to dock at (bcuz, ofc, Panland was inaccessible by sea bcuz of the naval battles which were extremely dense in that region). The only place the officials recommended that they gone was to the Hevelen Islands, territory of Welliway, which was at the other side of the Slivakian Peninsula. And they also strongly advised staying away from the northen borders. Thus another long journey begun, a journey that Ender, John Smith and Jack Harkness had to face together...
     
  2. pandanielxd

    pandanielxd its panda daniel

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  3. Deppuccino

    Deppuccino Well-Known Member

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    Quite a lot of countries named after diferent stuff, tbh.
    Depsoria - Deplicasus
    Skeleta - Skeleton
    Zombozia - Zombie
    Porkeria - Pig
    Coweria - Cow
    Slivakia - Slime
    Blueslem - Blue Slime
    Magmasus - Magma Cube
    Sheepland - Sheep
    Spidatia - Spider
    Caveland - Cave Spider
    Panland - You
    Koalatia - Koala
    Uniland - Unicorn
    North Zompigza - North Korea, but with Zombie Pigmen
    South Zompigza - South Korea, but with Zombie Pigmen
    Endurion - Enderman
    Wintraria - Winter
    Welliway - Norway, but Welli (west in Slivakian, because Slivakia once dominated the land) instead.
     
  4. Wiktionary

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    Koalatia is where @SpiffingKoala lives and Uniland is where @Unifier lives, i live in Norway tho actually O u O and Sheepland is where @xxMineSheepxx lives c:

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    I got the proof that MineSheep lives in sheepland too!
     

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  5. Deppuccino

    Deppuccino Well-Known Member

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    HOW DID YOU KNOW?????!!!!!!!!!
    And there might be a reason why it looks like Uniland is a turtle and Koalatia is it's shelll... probably because Uniland decided to choose an extremely inconvenient place to declare as Uniland territory on it's independence day (like srsly, did it really have to be right in the middle of Koalatia?)...
     
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    So childish... however it rapes reality. I like the idea, but it's not the right time for me...
     
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    HUMUNGIGANTUHUGEOUsssssruasdsffsfuwnds.... wut kinda word is that? xD.
     
  8. koalajpg

    koalajpg skrrr

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    Controversial.
     
  9. xxMineSheepxx

    xxMineSheepxx baaaahh

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    Very original names =D

    Tag me when you release another chapter, it's great :smile:
     
  10. Deppuccino

    Deppuccino Well-Known Member

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    Don't worry Uni, you'll only have to wait just a little time (ha ha ha)

    My attempt at making Humungous, Gigantic and Huge 1 word.

    No u.

    Yes ik very original names. And I'll make sure to tag you.
     
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  12. Wiktionary

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    Funny thing is i found this right now and you posted it for like 1 year ago. Sorry lol
     
  13. deppresso

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    sounds like deppresso not deplicasus smh
     
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  14. Deppuccino

    Deppuccino Well-Known Member

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    This was made before you were a thing.

    Also, did we HAVE to necro bump this? This is a dead story, would like to kinda not bring it up again.
     
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