BlackPearl

This is a really pretty map :>

 

Nice map! I'm glad I got the opportunity to help you out

 

Nice map. ;o Id love to see it be implemented into the rotation. I bet it would be loads of fun to play on

(BTW you spelled your name wrong when you were tagging yourself. InfiniSTistus -> InfiniSTitus)

 

Thanks for submitting a map! Here's some things to work on:

• Make clumps of ores, instead of individual stray ones.
• Improve block variation! Try using other types of sandstone or venture outside of that to use another combination.

• I think it would look cooler if you made the water flow off the edge on this map. The glass looks awkward, unless you use JUST glass in my opinion.
• I don't think the vines fit on the tree.
• Try making use of the //setbiome command!
  • Use //setbiome jungle to make your leaves more vibrant in color!
• Make sure you check to make sure ALL trees have the block log:15. I found some spots where it is just a sideways one.

• I really like the bird! However, I don't think that one should be able to jump from the first island to the second island without using any blocks. I would move the bird islands closer inwards, and instead of it being possible to jump initial -> bird, maybe try making it possible to jump bird -> center.

• I think the leaves on this tower look awkward and out of place. Maybe try removing them?

• I like the ship's shape/initial design, however I think there should be some contrast between blocks. Also, try improving your block variation on the main island, as well as on the ship.
  • Contrast it maybe by replacing white wool with black? Just an idea.
  • Try out red sand along your shore maybe?
  • Note: When doing block variations, I'd avoid randomly setting it with worldedit. Instead, add some recursions by hand.
• Again, I'd make the water flow off here or just switch entirely to using glass.

Good luck!

P.S @InfiniSTistus - We will look at this section when we feel skywars needs more maps.

 

Maybe try converting fully to your glass mix? You can also make a cool "trickle"effect off the island (dripping water). Or, just use barriers.