Denied ThroughSpace's Builder Application pt 2

Just want to take about a few things. Main point, of you get denied, you must wait 2 weeks to reapply unless you have been yold by a mod.

'average builder's what's an average builder? Is it someone on mcbuild who makes a load of role plays, I would call an average builder someone who over details/under details, has no theme, uses no block pallette and makes badly shaped houses (square).

'the way my last application as denied was incredible, I had gotten 4 replies in under 5 hours while on other servers take 5 days to reply'
Ok, just because people commented quickly doesn't mean they want you accepted, all the comments were either negative or neutral which shows that you aren't up to the job.

You actually got 2 comments in under 5 hours, both were negative/neutral.

The amount of time other servers take to reply has nothing to do with your application or denial, you are applying for builder on this server. Not another server. Like I said, time doesn't matter, some times people who usually reply quickly may be just, other teams not so.

'i have built for 14 servers'
From what I can tell, you were either just building maps for the server because you like the gamemodes there. Or you were building for your friends server or tiny 2 player servers. You might want to give more information about these '14 servers' because it looks like you're exaggerating or lying.

When posting pictures please give examples of your strengths and don't use texture packs or shaders. Not going to waste more of my life commenting on this application.

 

Wow, harsh.

I'll try to give you some constructive criticism. First of all, you need to wait 2 week. Here is my actual thoughts in your application.

Application - First, don't do that weird thing with the colors. Hard to read and really annoying. Also, as sporty said you mentioned an "average" player a little too much. -1.

Builds - First, please turn down your FOV. Here is the actual builds though. The first one is midevil with barely any detail around it (In terms of terraforming) as Roske said in his guide, most people can do midevil and when it doesn't look that amazing, you start to wonder his building style. The second picture I don't have that much to criticize. Add terraforming and more detail (And maybe some pictures of the inside.). For the third picture you need to stop using a texture pack. From what I can see the map has bad terraforming, and the buildings are midevil and plain.

For the fourth picture again, you need to stop with the texture pack. (It's fine to have, but when the main chunk of your application is relying on a texture pack that isn't good.) The rest of the city is O.K, but it seems empty.

For the fifth, your FOV is waaaaay to high to see what it is. But, I can make out poor terraforming and some over-detailed ground.

And for the last picture, the style is wonkey only and there is no surrounding terraforming. -1 for the building.

Maturity - Based on the way you took your denial, I'm going with you're not mature. -1.

Overall: -3, and 3 < 1, so your rating is NO [-1]

How to improve:

Application - First, get rid of the colors and use just bold and underline at most. Also, please show me the 14 IP's via PM.

Builds - Work on terraforming. To correctly terraform, make natural flowing mountains. Have stone, then 2 layers of dirt and 1 layer of grass. Add actual grass (From bonemeal / inventory) to make it pop. Add custom trees that fit the area. Even for normal builds, add a few layer differences to spice up the map. Do another style that isn't midevil, but make sure that it actually looks good. (Modern is not good either, and don't over-detail). If you want a texture pack, use a 32x32.

Maturity - Can't give any tips, you have to improve that on your own.

Denied.

 

It may be harsh but I just wanted to make some things clear, I'm sorry if it overcame a little bit aggressive

 

Denied, work on what was stated above.