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Denied Toki_12 Builder application (v2)

Discussion in 'Denied' started by Toki_12, Jul 29, 2016.

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Is Toki_12 Fit For The Builder Rank?

  1. Yes (Tell me why)

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  2. No (Tell me why)

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  1. Toki_12

    Toki_12 Well-Known Member

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    Minecraft Username - Toki_12
    Timezone - CEST

    Would you consider yourself experienced with WorldEdit? Why? -Yes i consider myself experienced with WorldEdit. I have used it on a Swedish server called sharkpvp.tk (currently down) where i was a builder. I learn everyday about WorldEdit when i watch videos on youtube on how to use the plugin and build with it.

    Would you consider yourself experienced with VoxelSniper? Why? -I have never in my life used voxelsniper although i have watched a few tutorials and videos on how to use the plugin/mod.

    How active would you be on Brawl's Build Team? (A couple hours per week, one hour per day, etc.) - Im online on the brawl network 5-12 hours a day every day. If i get greeted the Builder rank i will be online 5-12 hours everyday (if im not on a vacation). I love building and taking my time out of my day to build new things.

    m not really sure how the build team works here on Brawl, but if you have a server to build on i will be very active on that server and can be online 3-8 hours a day.

    Why do you want to join Brawl's Build Team? - The reason behind me applying for the build team is becouse simply i love creating stuff in minecraft and builder builds in general. I would love to interact with other builders and learn from them and see how they work. It would be awesome to see my work on a real server.

    What would you consider your greatest strength with building? (Detailing, Terraforming, Houses, Trees, Statues, etc.) -
    consider my biggest strength's to be:

    1. Building houses
    2. Building big builds
    3. Going in to detail with all of my builds

    What would you consider your greatest weakness with building?     (Detailing, Terraforming, Houses, Trees, Statues, etc.) -1. Always building symmetrical, for example: I have built one side of a house perfect. Now i just got to build the other side symmetrical. This can take me a little bit of time to work out how i built the first side, although i dont consider this as a huge problem because in the end i get it right almost every time.

    List any previous experience you have with building -
    1. For a short period i was building on a single-player server with my sister almost every day (i dont have the world anymore)

    2. Being builder on a relatively small Swedish server called sharkpvp.tk which had almost up to 10 players playing constantly.


    Pictures: (Include as many pictures of your builds as you can. If you do not include pictures, your application will be automatically denied. When possible, include proof that the builds are your own.)
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    I took your advice @Doges ty.

    Please insert a Yes / No poll below.
     
    #1 Toki_12, Jul 29, 2016
  2. 13kss

    13kss Well-Known Member

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    The application itself is good, but I dont think your build skills are good enough yet.
    I can really see that you got the idea of how to build it, but you dont quite make the building perfect.

    Also you havent build a lot in those pictures. That might make your buildings look a bit worse than they actually are. It also shows that you just quickly build it (i think) and that makes it also a bit bad.

    Ill give you a +1 next time if you put a bit more time into it.

    Tbh I didnt put a lot of time in my application either :stuck_out_tongue:
     
    #2 13kss, Jul 29, 2016
  3. Toki_12

    Toki_12 Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for your reply. If i get denied i wont give up and i will put more time in to it ty <3
     
    #3 Toki_12, Jul 29, 2016
  4. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    I agree with @DeCasperr however I want to talk about your builds in more depth.
    1) Your first picture looks like it is modern, there isn't much detail but I do like the shape of the house, I think adding railings around he balcony would be good so people don't fall off, the trees are really small and don't look nice so either make nicer, bigger ones or remove them.

    2) Probably my favourite picture, I like the windmill and I sort of like the air balloon. The trees could do with more work (weird trunk and leaf placement).

    3) You have spammed a lot of banners and paintings, along wirh fences making it look really over detailed. I enjoy over detailing however this is a bit too far. The block pallette isn't very nice because there are so many different colours.

    4) I cant see this too well but I'm not a huge fan of it, the shape is good but the detailing could be better.

    5) Too many different blocks, the trunk of the mushroom is weird and the mushrooms have a weird shape. Pumpkins and melons stand out too much and look ugly in this setting.

    6) I like the pool but adding some other blocks as well as the cobble would be cool, making the lava glass with yellow in the middle, orange around it and red around that looks quite cool too though.

    7) I think the cobblestone should be another block but I like the house, the trees are ok as well i guess.

    I would suggest working on the things I suggested and making a CTF map or larger build. -0.5 for now although I see you have potential.
     
    #4 Daveeeeeeeee, Jul 29, 2016
  5. Doges

    Doges Ex-Mod, Ex-Builder

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    Denied, work on what was stated by @sportyman56. Your builds are getting better and better though, so don't be discouraged :smile:
     
    #5 Doges, Jul 29, 2016
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