Complete New "Jail" Map for MC-War

worked a hard bit on this u know..... hope its accepted

 

This is nice! I'd love to play this map +1

 

+1, but you said "Helpers"

We have JMods :
: )

 

In my opinion the map looks too open, and lacks some detail. Maybe add some coverage around the map. +0

 

+1 I love this map! I think it deserves to be added. There might be lack of detail. Other than that, this map is great!

 

Nice! I think that you could close it up a little with some cobwebs/leaves/fences, but its an awesome start!

 

Hello @xKevko_!
Welcome to Brawl Forums! Here you can discuss things and come up with ideas! Hope you will have a great time here!

Let's jump right into this;
It looks like a good map, but there are some things you need to improve:

• Details - The building itself are very flat and have the same textures on all walls. For example you could make windows, a fan, any type of pump. No flat walls, try to make some depth and try to add more textures.

• The shape of the map - It's quite boring to have a rectangle shaped map, try to fill it out, make more nature, lay down some time on the creations outside the map. It makes it much funnier to play on, add a lake, mountain, anything, don't have the 90˚ corners outside, have a shape that follows the nature.

• Too open - The map seems to be a bit too open, for example inside, try to add some walls, make more rooms. Maps with too wide open spaces ain't so fun to play on.

It takes time to build maps, and let it take that time, make it as good as possible, remake and remake - change the shapes and details over and over again. Nothing is perfect, and you can't get the best from the first try.

This map reminds me pretty much of my map Alcatraz, that map are a good example, I tried and tried to make it took as good as possible, and now I see things that I could have done much better.
- That I want to say with this is to calm down, take the time it takes to make a map, it won't be the best from the first time, work more on it, add or remake details - change shapes of buildings and make some hight changes, flat maps are usually pretty boring, unless it's a platform that needs to be flat.

My vote:
-1 for now. Improve those things and you have my +1!

Remember: This is only my opinion, I'm not a professional builder at any part, not even close.

It's always fun to see that many are building for MC-War. We're sure of one thing - We have many builders who wants to help!

~ Ellen