Showcase Party_rainbowParkour

+1 : )

 

Nice! I like the map alot ^^

 

It's a cool map but the rainbow is weird.

 

If you make a square then just round the corner it's not that hard.

 

Map is a bit small and the rainbow looks odd, but other then that its a nice map!

 

Heyaa ^-^

Overall, I love the build. The colors are fantastic, and the pixel art gives it a great feel. (Especially cause it's mario c At a gameplay standpoint, it looks equally challenging as it looks to be fun and enjoyable.

However, trying to be original with my critiques, I do see some small problems. If you notice, at the beginning it's slightly over-terraformed. In every build, you want to go away from the look of world-edit or voxel sniper, making it appear more natural. For that, I'd either remove the white chunk, or smooth it out a bit more.

That's all I'm really gonna say for critiques. It's really a wonderful map, and even though my party playing is limited, I would love to play on it.

Good job and great effort ^-^

~Owli​

 

Yea, I meant the thing at the beginning. I just feel as if it slightly out of place, and a bit "forced" into the map. I think you could possibly make it smaller, or replace it with another pixel art. It's just my opinion, but you can do whatever you want ^-^