Story The birth of an Assassin

It was a horrible night outside. Sideways rain, and lightning every three seconds. A tired looking banner held on to it's pole helplessly, crackling in the wind. Jkzoom, the newest of the recruits here in titan (a military base five miles from HQ) was looking out of his window at the gale. Suddenly, his roommate, a high ranking officer by the name of joeymast99 came crashing into the room. Obviously tired, with a surprising degree of fear in his softly glowing eyes, he spoke in a raspy voice "zoom, get out here fast, there throwing everything they have at us". and with that, he pulled his prized antique skull crusher from the alpha years off the wall mount. Jkzoom was shocked. He never thought that he would ever see him using that gun, it was at least a year old and couldn't possibly still work properly. "come ON!" he was yelling this time "we need everyone out here now!". Zoom grabbed his m16 off the wall along with five clips of ammunition. He adjusted his helmet, and strode out of the room. Titan was no luxury palace, it was a military installation, each room had four bunks and a small space in between them. As jkzoom strode down the hall, he noticed that several people were coming out of there rooms. He stopped and saluted one of the sergeants, but wasn't saluted back. He understood why when the whole hallway shook violently. A voice crackled over the intercom "we need all non-active hands to the east side! the enemy has breached the main gates!". Jkzoom began to run.

As jkzoom finally reached the surface of the base, he was greeted by gunfire. The bullets went through his hair and struck another recruit in the face. Horrified, he turned and saw a hooded man, holding a smoking barret50c. The man smiled and aimed down his sights. Jkzoom ran, and as the man fired, he dropped into a puddle of mud that had formed in the rain. "get up zoom!" it was joey again "get up now!". he hauled jkzoom into a feeble standing position and ran to safer cover. There was a crack from jkzoom's right, and titan's best sniper fell at his feet, a bullet wound though his arm. he yelled though the wind for a medic as he started to drag the sniper away, he found none. There was a massive explosion from his left as titan's only tank became an inferno. The situation was becoming more desperate as HQ dropped care packages to the medics behind friendly lines and soldiers were being dragged back in the hundreds. Jkzoom looked back at the sniper. His hand came away from his arm and he griped jkzoom's solder. He stared into his eyes fiercely. Jkzoom knew what he had to do. he laid down the now dead sniper's head and closed his eyes. He took the sniper's eye piece, and fitted it to his own helmet. He lastly took the snipers gun, an l118a, and looked at his dog tags. Severin23:sergeant major. he griped severin's dog tags and stood. Jkzoom turned to face the battle and saw the sniper that had taken severin's life. A rage filled his body, and he shot that sniper though his own scope. He turned on his heel as the shouts of the enemy came closer, and ran into the shadows behind the burning tank.

Writer's note: feedback? I want to know if you guys want me to continue the titan saga (yes Im planing on making this a series about the base "titan" and the birth of the EST). Please use constructive feedback, I really don't like being flamed

 

yeah, this is a prototype of the actual story. Just me and joey along with unnamed characters. If I make another then it will have more characters

 

ok, ill start on the beginning of the titan saga. Thanks for the feedback guys!