Can someone help me?

Sorry to bother yalls but I just made a moderator application and need some one to check it, I need someone to check grammar and spelling. I am trying to make it as depressing as can be... The stories that are provided in here all based on true stories, Thanks (Please No (-1), This is a sketch / rough draft)

Multiplayer Servers Mod Application:

Are you active and helpful on our servers, forums, and Teamspeak? - I would consider myself helpful to the community and friends of MC War, I help people who are new to the server and donate for people , I have given away 6 ray guns and 4 mini guns and 7 C4's. Thats how I would consider my self helpful, I am a very active person and have a ton of time for MC War and I am a active person on Team Speak and I love the forums, They can be a ugly place and a really happy place and I am happy and proud to be a memeber on the forums and I am very active and helpful
Which server are you applying for? - MC War / MC Warfare server
How old are you? - 16
What time zone are you in? - Mountain Time Zone
(UTC-07:00)
What is your experience and knowledge of Minecraft? - I am going to go into detail... I started minecraft when I was 12 or 13 and I loved it. I then started hearing a thing called ''Minecraft Multiplayer Servers'' I was super exited and my first server was maybe a server called 666 Craft 24/7'' It was cool and they hired me as admin and loved it then I heard of a thing called plugins 1 year later and wanted to make one and I have made a few that are pointless but I can make them and then some guy 1 year later named ''AntVenom'' and he did Mod reviews and I loved them so I then later did the right thing and made a mod for 1.3 and it was AWESOME, It had everything. It was mainly a potato gun and shooted a diamond pickaxe. It was so funny, Me and my friends were laughing so hard that day,We all got that mod and we decided all to make a huge mod together, Its been a year since that happened and we are still making the mod, It is top secret and one day.. My friend said I got an idea for the mod! We went to a server called MC Warfare and it was so awesome, This was in the 1.5.4 date and we became obsessed. We were playing everyday and we were pros, We reached level 56 until we got hacked. We got new accounts and returned in 1.6.4 and he went to a boarding school so I prommised him I will be a moderator for the server when he comes back, I kept that promise and I wont stop until I get there. My other friends are working on the mod while I am becoming a moderator. I can say I am a ver y experienced person for minecraft.
What is your experience with moderating servers? - Well, I can say I have been a good admin at 666 craft but it was only for 2 weeks and I also own a server but I cant keep up with all them bills :V so I stopped hosting my server. I can say I will make a good moderator and a nice person!
What will you provide to the community if you are provided moderator status? - I will provide to my community help and wisdom! I will help stop the hacking and discrimanation against those foolish members on out servers! I will also be a good moderator and stop Sexism and racism and will be active to help my community!!
How active do you consider yourself in-game? - I would say on weekends, 12 - 16 hours a day and on week days for school I will be on 4 - 10 hours a day
How active do you consider yourself on TS3? -
How active do you consider yourself on the forums? - Everyday, I check the forums in morning and night and day on my tablet and my 2 year old PC.
What do you consider your greatest strength? - My greatest strength? Well my greatest strength will be people who belive in them selves and others! Nothing in this world is impossible.My greatest second strength is too have power over my self and be the best in the world and no one can stop me!
What do you consider your greatest weakness? - The current issue over tallscot spamming almost all my everypost about mod, The oppresion we face in everyday lives and that iskilling us all slowly in this life.
How would you handle someone making a minor transgression for the first time? - I would solve this issue on my own and tell them they have a warning, Next time they do it, There will be consequenses.
How would you handle the same person doing it again a second time? - I will get the nearest witness and some screenshots and get a experienced admin / moderator to help me
How would you handle that person doing it again for the third time? - Temp ban or a kick or get the nearest admin to help me stop these acts of foolishness!
What is your reaction if someone publicly proves you wrong on the forums? - I would appoligise and ask them to forgive me for giving them the incorrect or mislead information on the forums
What would you do when someone breaks a rule on the forums? - (1) Give them a warning to stop (2) Get snipping tool and screen shot it and report it to admin (3) Have a admin solve the issue if it is too big for me
When would you lock a thread? - When a person has got there anwser, Off Topic, Spam, The creator of the thread has already posted it, Secret information that is given out, Everyone is having a turf war on that specific thread.
Describe yourself in 3 words: Intelligent, Smart, Respectful
Describe yourself in 1 sentence: I am Toby, The one who is going to become the king of the moderators!
Anything else we should know about you? - Not at all
Situation: A player is out of the map on MC-WAR. What are the steps that you would take to ensure that this player and situation is properly dealt with? - (1) Warning and tell them to play fairly (2) Send them back to spawn (3) Temp ban or kick (4) Get the nearest person taht can edit maps to remove the map glitch
Do you generally know how all the plugins and commands work? - Yes, Depending on which plugins you use.. I need a tutorial >-<
Do you realize that if you are disrespectful or abuse your power, your power will be taken away? - Yes, I understand

Multiplayer Servers Mod Application:

Are you active and helpful on our servers, forums, and Teamspeak? - I would consider myself helpful to the community and friends of MC War, I help people who are new to the server and donate for people , I have given away 6 ray guns and 4 mini guns and 7 C4's. Thats how I would consider my self helpful, I am a very active person and have a ton of time for MC War and I am a active person on Team Speak and I love the forums, They can be a ugly place and a really happy place and I am happy and proud to be a memeber on the forums and I am very active and helpful
Which server are you applying for? - MC War / MC Warfare server
How old are you? - 16
What time zone are you in? - Mountain Time Zone
(UTC-07:00)
What is your experience and knowledge of Minecraft? - I am going to go into detail... I started minecraft when I was 12 or 13 and I loved it. I then started hearing a thing called ''Minecraft Multiplayer Servers'' I was super exited and my first server was maybe a server called 666 Craft 24/7'' It was cool and they hired me as admin and loved it then I heard of a thing called plugins 1 year later and wanted to make one and I have made a few that are pointless but I can make them and then some guy 1 year later named ''AntVenom'' and he did Mod reviews and I loved them so I then later did the right thing and made a mod for 1.3 and it was AWESOME, It had everything. It was mainly a potato gun and shooted a diamond pickaxe. It was so funny, Me and my friends were laughing so hard that day,We all got that mod and we decided all to make a huge mod together, Its been a year since that happened and we are still making the mod, It is top secret and one day.. My friend said I got an idea for the mod! We went to a server called MC Warfare and it was so awesome, This was in the 1.5.4 date and we became obsessed. We were playing everyday and we were pros, We reached level 56 until we got hacked. We got new accounts and returned in 1.6.4 and he went to a boarding school so I prommised him I will be a moderator for the server when he comes back, I kept that promise and I wont stop until I get there. My other friends are working on the mod while I am becoming a moderator. I can say I am a ver y experienced person for minecraft.
What is your experience with moderating servers? - Well, I can say I have been a good admin at 666 craft but it was only for 2 weeks and I also own a server but I cant keep up with all them bills :V so I stopped hosting my server. I can say I will make a good moderator and a nice person!
What will you provide to the community if you are provided moderator status? - I will provide to my community help and wisdom! I will help stop the hacking and discrimanation against those foolish members on out servers! I will also be a good moderator and stop Sexism and racism and will be active to help my community!!
How active do you consider yourself in-game? - I would say on weekends, 12 - 16 hours a day and on week days for school I will be on 4 - 10 hours a day
How active do you consider yourself on TS3? -
How active do you consider yourself on the forums? - Everyday, I check the forums in morning and night and day on my tablet and my 2 year old PC.
What do you consider your greatest strength? - My greatest strength? Well my greatest strength will be people who belive in them selves and others! Nothing in this world is impossible.My greatest second strength is too have power over my self and be the best in the world and no one can stop me!
What do you consider your greatest weakness? - The current issue over tallscot spamming almost all my everypost about mod, The oppresion we face in everyday lives and that iskilling us all slowly in this life.
How would you handle someone making a minor transgression for the first time? - I would solve this issue on my own and tell them they have a warning, Next time they do it, There will be consequenses.
How would you handle the same person doing it again a second time? - I will get the nearest witness and some screenshots and get a experienced admin / moderator to help me
How would you handle that person doing it again for the third time? - Temp ban or a kick or get the nearest admin to help me stop these acts of foolishness!
What is your reaction if someone publicly proves you wrong on the forums? - I would appoligise and ask them to forgive me for giving them the incorrect or mislead information on the forums
What would you do when someone breaks a rule on the forums? - (1) Give them a warning to stop (2) Get snipping tool and screen shot it and report it to admin (3) Have a admin solve the issu if it is too big for me
When would you lock a thread? - When a person has got there anwser, Off Topic, Spam, The creator of the thread has already posted it, Secret information that is given out, Everyone is having a turf war on that specific thread.
Describe yourself in 3 words: Intelligent, Smart, Respectful
Describe yourself in 1 sentence: I am Toby, The one who is going to become the king of the moderators!
Anything else we should know about you? - Not at all
Situation: A player is out of the map on MC-WAR. What are the steps that you would take to ensure that this player and situation is properly dealt with? - (1) Warning and tell them to play fairly (2) Send them back to spawn (3) Temp ban or kick (4) Get the nearest person taht can edit maps to remove the map glitch
Do you generally know how all the plugins and commands work? - Yes, Depending on which plugins you use.. I need a tutorial >-<
Do you realize that if you are disrespectful or abuse your power, your power will be taken away? - Yes, I understand

 

Sorry, Wrote this on tablet

What am I spamming? I just need some help. I only made 3 post on the topic ''Moderator'' (4th one was hacked and was removed)

 

That makes alot of sence. Sorry for spamming, I talk way too much :V

 

Please be respectful of others.

I am a 16 year old and I am not a murderer or rapist

 

I about to kick you from our group... You guys cant even have the chance to read and stuff. You just make assumptions and request locks