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W.I.P. Snow City

Discussion in 'Building Submissions' started by Japan, Jun 4, 2014.

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  1. Japan

    Japan Member

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    WarZ Building Submission

    Build Name: Snowy Pagoda
    Style: City or Town, I build this and want share with McBrawl. It is not finish because I plan to add more of the building and houses later on and more to detail.
    Creator(s): Zeterax
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    Location: Single Player Server
     
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  2. wezzard13

    wezzard13 Well-Known Member

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    This looks like a ver, very good build and I can see that you put a lot of time into making this.
     
  3. SkapeYin

    SkapeYin Well-Known Member

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    That looks pretty good but I suggest adding a little more :V
     
  4. Japan

    Japan Member

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    Yes I plan add more building to city but take time and thank you.
     
  5. LallierQc

    LallierQc Active Member

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    This seems nice so far. As you just said you would need to add more building and also you could vary with the wood types you're using. Maybe use different one than always the normal one :wink: It would look nicer.
     
  6. cowmoo1

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    HI
     
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  7. RottenCorn

    RottenCorn Well-Known Member

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    It would be a great addition to the map if their were more detail!
     
  8. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    It's a cool build, but it's a little small with only two temples. Maybe add a giant Buddha room?
     
  9. Usp45

    Usp45 Well-Known Member

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    I actually really like this!
    You might want to expand it with more buildings and maybe a temple like @F1r3tar said.
    Add more detail, expand, and it's have good chances of being accepted I bet!
     
  10. Japan

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    what all mean by detail, does more buildings count?
     
  11. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    Detail is how good a build looks to us. Your pagodas have a good amount of detail in them, but we're asking you to include some more buildings since the area looks small. I bet you're working on that right now since this is a W.I.P after all.
     
  12. lcfboy

    lcfboy Well-Known Member

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    Once you finish it this will look great. Try to include some of your own building style to make it stand out
     
  13. Japan

    Japan Member

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    ok I am to add more, and this is my own build style.
     
  14. Parkman1221

    Parkman1221 Well-Known Member

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    The exterior design looks really nice.
    I like the stair art.

    But the inside looks a bit blank, but it doesn't take away from the outside.
    Nice job.
     
  15. bob8is8cool

    bob8is8cool Well-Known Member

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    I really like the way these buildings look, especial with snow. It reminds me of some Japanese town in the winter.
     
  16. Japan

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    Well I add more to town and need some sugest from warz player for more to add. Here is what have so far...
     
  17. SkapeYin

    SkapeYin Well-Known Member

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    This looks really neat and I think that is perfect for a small little town itself. Good job . Once it's done I think it will look fabulous!
     
  18. Begett

    Begett Well-Known Member

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    Great Bulid!
     
  19. Japan

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    thx I am finish up now with city soon.
     
  20. specknav

    specknav Well-Known Member

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    Looks nice, it would be a nice add to the exterior of the snow selection of the map
     
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