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Complete Abandoned Old Building

Discussion in 'Building Submissions' started by dinotim05, Nov 4, 2014.

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  1. dinotim05

    dinotim05 Member

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    WarZ Building Submission

    Build Name: Broken Building
    Style: Building
    Creator(s): Dragonmatthew24
    Picture(s): Screenshot (101).png Screenshot (100).png Screenshot (102).png Screenshot (103).png
    Location: (on creative.mcbrawl.com)
     
    #1 dinotim05, Nov 4, 2014
  2. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    This needs a lot more work before it's truly complete. The building's theme is abandoned, but doesn't look abandoned to me. Include better block variety and add vines/leaf blocks jutting from the windows for that abandoned feeling. Redesign the entrance because a simple wooden door is ugly looking.
     
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    #2 F1r3tar, Nov 4, 2014
  3. dinotim05

    dinotim05 Member

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    Thank you
     
    #3 dinotim05, Nov 4, 2014
  4. phillip0602

    phillip0602 Brawl Veteran

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    DEATAILS!!!!
    I love it.
    Listen most of all builders in brawl doesn't work on details i Think that's a problem if u want to build warZ maps and other kind of maps

    It looks like a building that Got hitted by something
     
    #4 phillip0602, Nov 4, 2014
    Last edited: Nov 5, 2014
  5. algotsandin

    algotsandin Active Member

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    It really need some more block variation instead of quartz everywhere.
     
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    #5 algotsandin, Nov 5, 2014
  6. dragonxPxP

    dragonxPxP Well-Known Member

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    @dinotim05 possibly stick to one build, I've seen quite a few build and the one thing between them all is there needs to be detail :3 maybe try working on a whole city or a whole army camp, see in WarZ I would love to see a huge Abandoned Army camp maybe work on that, just an idea
    Make sure to tag me in your post so I can give my feedback :smile:
     
    #6 dragonxPxP, Nov 17, 2014
  7. Pinocio

    Pinocio Active Member

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    ehhm it should be more detailed
    -1 detailed inside
    -1 detailed outside
    -1 height
    -1 big
    ehhm im sorry this is not my cup tea
     
    #7 Pinocio, Nov 30, 2014
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