Merry Christmas! Event extended -

Is that rumia?

anyway: merry early christmas!

 

My story:

Santa was going to find his reindeer but then went to the children and was like ... YOU SEE ME STALKING, THEY HATIN IT.. He shot them with a rifle and blood drenched from them and he drank it like it was nothing but wine... Then he scooped out the brain and liver and ate it by putting a stick in there nose! Santa was happy
Dee END

 

I just did my story, if you wanna read:

So yeah, I hope I can win, I thought this out thoroughly:

One Christmas Eve, where every child was sitting with their parents in their living room, hoping to expect an extraordinary present from Santa. Santa's naughty list was very, very long this year, and he didn't know how many pages he would need, but there was an extremely short list of those melancholy kids who deserved the best of the best of presents.

That night, one very, very average child, not mean, nor good, was sitting with his family with joy filling up his body. As he was opening his present, he just thought, what have I done good this year, and what have I done horrific that would disappoint Santa, in the middle of opening his present, he felt a cold chill flow down his back, as if he has done something naughty, or something amazing. As soon as his present was opened, he had an extreme scream of excitement saying "Yes, yes!"
He was the happiest boy that lived on earth, he got his most wanted gift ever, a brand new remote control helicopter!

The next day, he used it not in a good way, he used it in a exasperating way, he was using it to maybe annoy people, or to show off, and he didn't care, not one bit, he was just making everyone around not wanna be next to him, and was being one of the naughtiest kids on Santa's list. That night, when he was sleeping, he was awoke albeit a tapping noise, from down stairs, as if someone was waiting for him, he crept slowly downstairs, and he opened the door to the living room, the door blue open with a loud creek.

As soon as it opened, Santa was there, waiting for him. And he said "Just because you got a present you wanted to get forever, doesn't mean you have to boast, or be extremely harmful to your friends about it, I will have to take this away from you, until you've learn't your lesson."
"No! Why! I'm sorry, I won't do it again, it's the best thing I've ever gotten for Christmas, ever!"
Santa replied back, with a demeaning face, "I am sorry, but wait till next year and think about what you've done."
Santa took the present and disappeared into a shadow which looked absolutely strange, that not even man could explain how it looked.

Every month, that very child counted all the days till next Christmas, and thought about what he'd done. And until the next Christmas, he sat there, once again with his family, thinking of how similar it was from before, he had a present with his name on it, from Santa, saying "You've deserved this :')!"
And the kid was happier then ever, with the biggest smile on face, that night in Christmas Eve.

 

So you say, Xmas Eve. I'm planning to give my dad a chocolate covered RAW egg.

 

I love this!
And,merry christmas to all of you!

 

Thank you.

 

yey. I need a life -=-

 

Did you guys like mine? :3

 

I want to enter... Just too lazy..

 

You say my story can't be violent. Can I mention WarZ / War?

 

One Christmas eve inside the house everything was quiet as a mouse. Little Susie was preparing for a Christmas eve feast. Her mother startlingly called her to set the table, she stomped in with a lousy attitude. Five minutes later Susie's stomach growled like a lion! She was very hungry, and tried to evade her mother to make it to the fine aroma of the turkey like a sitting duck on the kitchen counter, open for any beast to pounce on and make it it's dinner. She managed to get past her mother without being noticed. She then eagerly approached the turkey dinner, and dug her face into it then took a big chomp! The taste awoken her taste buds and flavor instantly burst into her mouth. Just at that moment, just at that time, just on that very day, her mother had to walk in! She gasped at what her daughter had done "Susan go to your room right this instant!" Just like she had before Susie stomped up to her room pouting, and mumbling unreadable words. She lay there in bed staring at the ceiling, a blank whiteness in her eyes imagining what she had done. So many times had she done bad but nothing this bad as to eating the Christmas dinner! Just then, an amazing plan popped into her fogged-up brain! She was going to run away. Far away someplace warm where she could live with another family, "but what about Christmas?" She thought. Then Susie knew she couldn't run away and not be able to celebrate Christmas, and feel the obnoxious thrill of shaking the box to get a peak on what was inside the well-wrapped presents from Santa Claus himself!

Susie had finally thought of an escape plan to run away until Christmas morning! She had it all figured out, her plan was brilliant, absolutely brilliant! First Susie would tie all of her skirts, dresses, pants, and shirts together forming a very long rope-type structure strong enough to support her weight (Hopefully). Then she would throw the rope over to her neighbor's tree, it was only about 10 feet away. After that she would shimmy herself across using just her bare arms to the tree. Once she arrives at the tree she will climb into her friend's window and stay there for the night! The whole plan of the tying clothes went pretty smooth, well until the rope um...kinda broke. She could feel the air like it was water, splashing at her face as she plunged to the ground. Susie hit the ground and went unconscious.

And that readers is how Little Susie spent her Christmas. In a hospital bed.
Lesson Learned: Don't trust a turkey.


THE END

That was absolutely beautiful! It almost made me cry . Bravo! Bravo! 10/10!

 

Can you answer my question please?

 

Loved reading that

 

No one liked mine

 

Dammit... I had a perfect story and then he had to put up the things we weren't supposed to use....

 

I'm sorry for any mistakes, I was writing this since four am for three hours straight. I really hope you guys enjoy my story

Far and deep into the white glistening snow of the North Pole, there lived a family of 3: Jimmy Claus, Catherine Claus, and little Santa Claus. As Santa started dreaming off into the distance while staring at the white snow. Today wasn't just any other day, today was going to be momentous day, just like every year, Santa thought to himself. This small family enjoyed every moment of being together and always thankful. This was perfection. No, today is going to be extra perfect, Santa thought. He grabbed his red jacket and placed it over his shoulders.

"Santa, please come down for some breakfast." The tenderness of his mother called.

"Alrighty, coming! I can't wait for today!" Santa mentioned.

Little Santa scurried down the stairs to see his parents cooking a huge meal. The scent of fresh bacon, eggs, and bread filled the house of the Claus's. As he stood at the stair steps, he inhaled the flavour, as you can only smell this once a year for the Claus's situation. Today was a special day, indeed.

"Darling, hurry and eat before your food gets cold." Santa's father warned.

He laughed at his father, just caring parents. Perfection was the only way to describe the function of this family. Santa had loving parents who would do everything to keep him safe, everything in their power and abilities. Santa joined his family in eating this rare and delicious meal. Smiles and laughters filled the tablet with so simple conversations. For every bite Santa took, he closed his eyes and ate slowly savouring the flavour. His parents couldn't help but laugh every time silly Santa did this.

Time passed as the Claus's eventually finished the meal. Everyone went back upstairs and prepared for the great day of wonders.

"Today is going to be great, I just can't wait for the snow." His mother continued as she placed on Santa's hat on him.

As everyone was at the front door, all prepared for the cold. Jimmy opened the door. The cold rush of breeze flew into the Claus's faces. A shiver continued through the family. Santa was the first one out of the door, no one could keep him away from the snow. He loved it more and more each year he touched it.

Santa reached his hands out and he could see the tiny snowflakes begin to appear on his green mittens. Each unique and individual snowflake, this icey effect tremble Santa's hands. This was only the 5th time Santa's been outside in the gorgeous snow. There's a day, a very special day, each year, the Claus's head outside in the snow. Today is the day, December 25.

The Claus's had a very short time to spend their day outside doing all sorts of activities. Firstly, Santa laid on the snow, making snow angel with his arms and legs moving back and forth.

"Come join me! We did this last year! We could make so many of these angels, mom and dad!" The happiness of Santa's voice said.

Catherine laid right next to Santa, she could stop laughing how silly this was. Jimmy suddenly fall back next to his wife and was making snow angels with the family. After laughter, they all got up and saw their creations of angels.

Jimmy had another idea to do. He bent down and grab some of the snow and started to compact it into a small snowball. More and more the snow he added into that tiny small ball. Santa and his mother started to make their own small ball. Larger the snow balls got, His father had the biggest snowball which reached up to 6 year old Santa's waists. His mother had a bit of a smaller snowball, his father started to lift her and placed it right over his. Lastly, Santa's little snowball that couldn't have been bigger than his head.

"Dad, what's this? I've never seen or heard of something like this." Santa questioned with a curious look.

"This would be a snowman. Now it's time to find some button and rocks. Oh- how can I forget the a carrot too!" His father exclaim with excitement.

Everyone went off and got something off the list: Santa ran off and got the carrot, his father got the rocks, and his mother ran into the house to find some of her buttons. Soon the family was finished gathering all the items. His father started to place the buttons on the middle snowball in a vertical row. The rocks were the eyes and mouth of this creature. Lastly, Santa did the honours and placed the carrot as the nose of him.

"Hmm, something's missing." Santa said,

He ran back into the house and came out with his favourite scarf and jet-black hat. His father placed the scarf between the middle and last snowball. Also, the hat right onto of the high snowman.

"What's is this creature, dad?" Santa questioned, tilting his head to the side.

"This would be a snowman, it's a man creating out of snow. That we all made together!" His father replied with happiness in his voice.

"What should we call him?"

A moment of silence appeared, until a name popped into Santa's head.

"Frosty."

Hours felt like minutes, minutes felt like second. The fun the entire Claus family was having is incomparable. In the last event, Jimmy planned to do is play hide in seek with the snow forts they've built. Catherine was it, she had to count to thirty seconds. Santa went to hide on his own, he ran and ran until he found this wooden cabin. It was wasn't big as his house, it was big as one room. There's a very small stove and a little bed on the floor. There wasn't any heating in the room, Santa noticed.

Soon, Santa waiting after 15 minutes, he started feeling a wave of tiredness over come him. He laid down into the small and dirty bed. His head resting on the rough pillow, his eyes started to close as he drifted to sleep.

Santa woke up to a little girl sitting at the edge of the bed. He was quite afraid, until he saw her face. She had a very dirty face, dirt and mud smeared all over his body. She didn't even have a jacket or coat. Santa had so many questions, he tried to sit up so he could give her bed back.

"It's okay, you can lay back, you seem very tired." She stated quieting.

Santa assumed this little girl couldn't have been older than him. She had really pretty long brown hair, besides the things in her tangled hair. She had those memorizing brown eyes, she hadn't looked direct at Santa , but he could see the side of her glazing eyes.

Near the front door of the cabin, he noticed 3 things. He started to get all nervous and scared around new people. He raised the blanket up to cover his mouth.

"Oh- I'm sorry. These are my family. Rudolph, he's the rain deer. Then we have the two elfs, Mellie and Charlie." She smiled.

"I forgot to mention my name, whoops. My name is Lily."

"Hi.. my name is Santa." Santa stated frightfully.

"It's okay, you don't need to be scared. They won't hurt you, I won't hurt you." Lily reassured him.

Santa started to notice all of them started to shiver crazily. The teeth chattering and nonstop shaking. Lilly rushed over to her family, she pulled another blacker out of the draw and placed it right over them. All Lily was wearing tear and ripped clothes, there's holes all throughout her outfit. Santa started to pull off his coat, he got up, and handed his favourite thick coat to her.

"Oh- no, no, no. I couldn't accept this, you'll be freezing. Please take it back." A frown appeared on Lily's.

"It's okay, I still have 2 coats and jacks under this one, I think I'll be fine without one jacket. Plus, it's something I can do, thank you for reassuring me." Santa thanked.

Conversations went on and on, just an endless talk with Lily and her family. Santa started to think, families are with parents and brothers and sisters, but Lily didn't meant ion her parents or anyone else.

"How to think about it, where are your parents, Lily?" Santa questions.

"I-I don't have parents.." Her enchanting voice started to tone down, lower and lower.

"What happened to them?"

"Five years ago, to this day.. we were so happy. One day, a man came and took my mother away. Since my father was madly in love with her, he couldn't stop himself from following that man. They promised they'd come back... I'm just waiting for my parents to come back. It's been awhile now, but I know they'll be back for me."

Lily always looked on the brighter side of things in situations. That was one of the very things Santa admired about her, how she could still stay positive in the worse situation. Also, Santa thought about what could've happened to her parents, Santa knew an answer because fearing he might hurt Lily. The thought haven't crossed his mind about his parents until he brought up Lily's parents.

"I have to go back, my parents are looking for me. Wait- how long have I been sleeping? What time is it?" Santa said frantic as he threw all these questions at Lily.

"It's been 3 hours since you woke up... plus, I'm sorry, but you can't go outside, there's a huge blizzard happening to tonight. If you get caught in the blizzard, you'll never come out. I want to see you again, so.. please stay tonight with us." Lily begged with pleading eyes.

Santa decided to stay with Lily for the night, only until the blizzard clears up. Santa had to share the bed with Mellie, Charlie, and Rudolph. While Lily slept on the cold hard wooden floor. He crawled off the bed ever so carefully, trying not to wake up the rest of the family, he held Lily in his shivering arms and carried her in the bed. He placed the blanket over her and tucked her ever quietly in bed. In the mid of the night, Santa couldn't sleep, he tried thinking about his parents safety. As he laid on the floor, he felt a tingle. This gave him a feeling that extremely unsettling him. Santa started it form tears in his dark brown eyes. His heart dropped down to the ends of his stomach, drowning in his own stomach acid. He had a thought in his head. No, he knew he lost his parents. Today, December 25, was the day he knew he lost his parents.

Days passed as he had fun with Lily, she seemed to brighten his mornings and nights. However, the lost of his parents always struck the back of his mind, he didn't want to bring it up, having the thought roam around would've caused negative emotions for everyone.

Over the years, they found more elfs abandoned in the freezing snow, all doomed to their deaths. Nonetheless, Santa and Lily accepted every single one of them into their loving and caring arms. There were days that they would adventure out to try to find their parents together, but that was all for Lily's sake, Santa already knew the truth.

One day, they stumbled across Santa's old house. It's been years and ages since he's since this place. Well over 10 years since he's been to this place.

"Hey, should we move all our stuff into your old house and everyone too? There's much more space and room into there, it won't be so crowded and cluttered." 15 year old Lily questions.

Santa just gave a little nod, he through maybe it would bring back memories to move back in his old house. Plus, it's better for the goods of everyone, right? They had a tradition and custom to give presents to everyone on December 25. Even though, the tragic of Santa's family happened. He's happy that he came across another loving, caring, and accepting family.

As this tradition went on, Santa decided besides giving to everyone on December. How about he gives to everyone in the world? He wanted to give out the message that. even though you've lost something dearly to you, the kindness of your heart will warm back your withered heart.