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Complete Abandoned City

Discussion in 'Maps Submissions' started by KingFisher257, Feb 14, 2015.

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how is it?

  1. It's Great

    2 vote(s)
    16.7%

  2. It's Terrible

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%

  3. It needs works

    8 vote(s)
    66.7%

  4. its good

    2 vote(s)
    16.7%
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  1. KingFisher257

    KingFisher257 Member

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    2015-02-13_19.26.45.png 2015-02-13_19.25.59.png 2015-02-13_19.25.26.png 2015-02-14_11.45.09.png 2015-02-14_11.44.39.png This map is a city that had an earthquake. Everybody left the area. Military forces found suspicious behavior in the wreckage. They found out that a war was raging in the city and they came to finish it. Red spawn is in a business building. And blue spawn is on a giant garage. There are fallen buildings, abandoned cars, fallen and bent trees, etc. enjoy!

    download the map here \/

    http://www.mediafire.com/download/wcow6ri0c6t2krq/Abandoned+City(2).zip
     
    #1 KingFisher257, Feb 14, 2015
    Last edited: Feb 14, 2015
  2. Seal_Zebra

    Seal_Zebra Member

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    It's very good. I would like to see it in mc-war :smile:
     
    #2 Seal_Zebra, Feb 16, 2015
  3. Diamondf

    Diamondf Active Member

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    this build needs a lot more detail. It looks like its still inhabited. Add some more detail building up to show us that it truly has been abandoned. The Casino looks like a big block, like the other buildings. You should add some background detail so it isnt just empty space. If it looked like an earthquake that was strong enough to make people abandon the city, it should have fallen, or destroyed buildings. Also a this looks more like a town than a city, add some residential area, highrises, etc.

    -0
     
    #3 Diamondf, Feb 16, 2015
  4. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    The walls don't improve the map's appearance.
     
    #4 F1r3tar, Feb 16, 2015
  5. Dathamier

    Dathamier Well-Known Member

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    This map has some very real potential. All you need to do is add some "war zone" effects and maybe some more detailed or freshened up aspects of the map. Try to replicate other maps that have a "city center" if you will. Making the streets out of colored clay would be a good addition as well, adding a "solid" effect to the ground that isn't half purple like the obsidian
     
    #5 Dathamier, Feb 16, 2015
  6. AndyinaBEARsuit

    AndyinaBEARsuit Well-Known Member

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    Looks like spawn camping would be a major problem with such a simple map. I'll have to download it and check it out. :smile:
     
    #6 AndyinaBEARsuit, Feb 18, 2015
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