Accepted Application

These are amazing! If you have proof, it's a +1 from me!

 

just need the proof do /plotme i before you take the screenshot :0 0+
from me try to change my mind ^_^

 

thats good well you deserve 1+ just add better proof k?

 

No Poll

 

Great build's i'll trust you and give a +1

 

In my opinion your builds are amazing! very well detailed and more then enough for Adv.Builder. Your application is also very well written and detailed. You definitely have my +1 best of luck.

 

+1 From me! I was just applying for this rank and got it, and if I can do it I am pretty sure you can! Best of luck!!

 

1+ Just You didn't add a poll

 

Okay, prior to what I am about to say, I am one of the little amount of people who look at everything on an application and try my best to help you in anyway.
I don't think you know what the rank provides therefore you will need to read this: https://www.brawl.com/threads/9824/

You also said that you do not have any rank. That is incorrect because you are currently the rank "builder".

"Why do you need the rank? - Becoming an Advanced Builder would help me by providing commands. Thus allowing me to build even larger and more complex builds."

This does not answer the question, especially the part with "becoming an Advanced Builder would help me by providing commands." If you really knew what commands advbuilder provides you, you would know that those only commands are /warp world2 , /item and shout (!). I suggest you edit that part as it is confusing and doesn't really state why you NEED the rank.
Eg: "I need the rank because the it provides the command /warp world2, I would be able to own a bigger plot meaning that I will be able to build much bigger and complex builds"

The only picture that would be valid and taken into consideration is the first 2 images you have provided because of the proof that comes along with it. The remaining images from the single player worlds do not contain proof therefore not being valid.
Although adding a poll on an advbuilder application is not necessary I would still suggest adding a poll because I guess it's just the way people have become used to it and it does annoy some people when there isn't one. (I'm not bothered about polls on advbuilder apps to be honest.) If you do not know how to do that then please do ask unless you do not want to add a poll which is understandable and I respect that.

The images that are valid are beautiful and it is obvious that you have spent quite a bit of time on it. The detail is alright but overall for the AdvBuilder rank this is a really good build!

I would give you a +1 BUT the "Why do you need the rank?" question is important and I do not think you have answered it well enough therefore it is a +0 because it's 50/50, the build is good but the answer to that question is not.

https://www.brawl.com/threads/20522/
https://www.brawl.com/threads/11637/
These are also important threads which I do not know if you have read or not but I recommend that you do.

Good luck!

 

Oh christ it's an AdvBuilder app, not a history paper. I think it answers the question well enough for a rank that gives you permissions that most creative servers already give people. :V

Onto the app, you have good builds. And despite not having proof for the single player world builds, I believe you. Because if you were lying, I think it would be obvious. ;P

+1

 

I felt like writing, so what. Plus, a lot was needed to be said which others did not realise or be bothered to explain.
Everyones entitled to their opinion but the creative managers do take that question seriously, lets be honest thats the only question they take seriously on an advbuilder app.

 

I do agree that it's an important question, however, I do not believe it needs to be that specific. What you suggested he change his answer to isn't all that different from his first answer, except that it explains specifically what commands would help him build more complex builds. It's not a bad suggestion, and in fact I might do something like that on a Worldedit app to add some length, but it's not really necessary because there is already a question about understanding commands. I guess it's your opinion how strict you think the process should be, but I've always seen AdvBuilder as nothing more than a spammer-weed rank so I don't have very high expectations for this rank's apps.

 

+1

 

UR BUILDS ARE FANTABULOUS +100000000 (jk +1 but i would totally give you a +1000000000!)

 

I'm not here to argue over an AdvBuilder application but may I just add that the points I have stated above have also helped you and some others. These comments don't always necessarily have to only be targeted at the applicant. If people are reading these comments then most of the time their just looking for tips and ideas anyway. I will not be replying to you further than this.

 

Accepted.