Denied Turkeys application

Andy just told you less than two weeks ago that there's no need for you to be WEpro.

Source: https://www.brawl.com/threads/39316/

 

The reason you put for needing the rank is also not very valid. You shouldn't use bets as a validation to why you need a rank.

 

-1 -- Builds could use a little more texturing and detailing for this rank. Additionally, make your builds flow, instead of them just being random houses/structures.

 

No they aren't. They are separate structures that don't fit together.
Additionally, For WEpro (or any high rank on any creative server) , I'd also try to show that you are proficient in the 3 main areas of building: Terraforming (ps: proficient in terraforming doesn't mean using spheres) , Organics (Custom structures), and Detailing. So far, I only see mediocre detailing (Screenshot #1) and organics (The tree), and no terraforming.

To improve, I recommend staying away from using any worldedit for organics, and add depth with stairs/slabs/fences/etc into your buildings to detail them. For terraforming, you could try making a basic outline with worledit //set, and then custom editing it.


ps: showing off isn't a good reason for the rank.

 

Couldn't you just use //be sphere (ID) (Size) than //brush smooth it?

 

Yes, but that wouldn't be proficient in terraforming since almost every average joe that's been on a creative server knows how to do that.

@turkeywing_999 -- If you need some inspiration with some detailed builds, I recommend watching this guy: https://www.youtube.com/user/Madnes64/videos . But please, don't copy the builds block by block, and use them as an inspiration.

 

• Application: Your application looks lengthy and seems like it has good amount of detail, but when you actually read it, it's all just same sentences worded differently.

For "Do you understand what this rank provides?", you wrote that you do understand, but I don't think you do. There is no specific warp for a WEPro world. Also, you're missing the main reason why people may need WEPro. It provides 4 plot claims in all the plot worlds, and world edit in all worlds. WEPro rank is (usually) for people who need more plot space. However, I don't think you really need it.

For the Building Teams question, you did not need to say "We have tons of WEPros and AdvBuilders+", because most Build Teams are like that. It may seem like it's a good build team and you've built many maps, but from what I know, the team Aztecs has not done any work yet.

For "What is your experience with building in Minecraft?", you wrote a lot of sentences to make it seem like you put a lot of effort in it, but it looks like you didn't know what you were writing down.

So, let me list down the reasons why you "need" the rank:
-To build in WEPro world
-To have more responsibility
-To become more mature
-To look like you tried and worked hard
Basically, sums up saying that you WANT the rank just for the status. That's what I got from reading what you wrote.

I don't understand why you want the rank to build in WEPro world since you already have lots of empty plots. You do not get more "responsibility" when you get the rank WEPro. It's not that different from WE2. Also, getting WEPro won't just magically make you more mature. You need to do that yourself even before getting the WEPro rank. Seriously, "To look like I really tried and did work". I don't even know why you would write that. The words "To look like" is really just not needed when writing applications like this. I suggest not using those words too often.

• Builds: I don't see much difference from your past rank applications. You have improved a little, but not enough for WEPro.

The first picture should not be in the "Current builds" section. That was from way back. You keep using the same pictures for your rank applications. Please don't do that, I suggest adding NEW pictures that show you have significantly improved. Using pictures from last application shows that you have not worked on anything during the period of time after getting denied. You also need to give credits to people who help you with the builds. The 2nd picture, I'm pretty sure @ExtrinsicAlien helped you with it.

Most of your builds are very bland and could use a lot more detailing in them. A lot of them are just repeated patterns/builds. For the "Previous builds" part, you posted pictures of WorldEdited trees. I'm guessing you used //brush sphere for them. They look very chunky and rushed. I suggest taking time to smooth it out a little using hand. It could use a lot more work.

• Maturity: From what you write on your profile page, how you answered the questions on the rank applications, the way you act on shout, I think you are still very immature. You haven't changed at all since the last time you applied.

Overall: -1

I suggest working on your builds, attitude, and application. If you want help with answering questions more "properly" and terraforming, ask higher ranked players to help you out. I'm sure they won't mind helping you if you ask nicely. You may ask me any queries if you'd like. Either PM me or message me in-game. Best of luck.

 

So you go and reapply for WEPRO after less than a week... You realize you are loosing your chances of being accepted every time you spam a new app? Be patient, and show improvement on your quite lacking building skill.
-1
Also, you guys should note that he used these same builds for his WE1 and WE2 applications.

 

-1 Me & many other people think you are disrespectful in chat. You are not mature enough for WEPro. A 13 year old is telling a 16 year old that he isn't mature...

 

I agree with this. One thing that stands out to me is he told me he was 18 before and now your saying 16, that is very immature.

 

+1 i loved the city!!!

and wow potato u can type XD

 

You have probably been given the wrong information about WEPro. There is no "WEPro private world". WEPro only gets 4 extra plots in all worlds. So you do not know what this rank provides.
I don't see a good reason to why you need the rank. WEPro don't really give you more responsibility or make you more mature. I get the feeling that you just want the rank for the status.
For the buildings, some could have a bit more detail.

Next time: Have a good reason to why you need the rank. Show us more detailed buildings.

Denied.