Denied BlueDotPuppy's 2nd Advanced builder application

The application isn't brilliant, but nor does it need to be for an AdvBuilder app. In the future, try to make it more professional and formal to look as if you're serious about wanting to get the rank. +0 with the application.

Your builds aren't brilliant either, even to AdvBuilder standards. The house has no depth and the doors are right next to glass, which doesn't look good and makes no sense. Also, triple doors don't make any sense and in Minecraft they just don't work. There's hardly any detail here.

The terraforming on "tree island" isn't outstanding, but its good enough for AdvBuilder. Try using custom trees though, as the ones Minecraft have don't look good. Also, islands like that should be bigger. "Sckyle island" has very poor terraforming, as its all dirt and its all flat. It could also do with some custom trees. Your beach is just a tiny lake with sand around it - try making it bigger and deeper and have some beach chairs/umbrellas or a volleyball net or something to make it look more like a beach.

The diving board makes no sense whatsoever either - its just a 1x1 pillar with a row of blocks sticking out at the top. The pool is decent, but more detail around the outside (pool chairs for example) would definitely improve it. -1 with the builds.

Overall, its a -1. The application isn't brilliant and, as I said, it looks as if you're not applying seriously. The builds look very poor and it doesn't look like a lot of time has been put into them, either. Spend more time on builds and add more detail - try to make things bigger too. Make sure there's logic behind things either; you don't see door hinges on glass in real life houses so don't put door hinges on glass in Minecraft builds.