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Denied My Application!

Discussion in 'Denied' started by averageteen, Dec 17, 2015.

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Should I be offered the AdvBuilder? ( Or WE1 would be nice hehe )

  1. Yes

    7 vote(s)
    70.0%

  2. No ( I won't be offended:D )

    3 vote(s)
    30.0%
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  1. averageteen

    averageteen Member

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    What is your in-game name? - averageteen ( on here it's still jasonryaan but I changed it )

    What is your current rank? - Builder
    What rank are you applying for? - AdvBuilder
    Do you understand what this rank provides? - Yes, I am fully aware of the requirements of this rank.
    Are you part of any Building Teams in our community? - No, however I would like to see some collaboration with some of you guys in the near future. :smile:

    What is your experience with building in Minecraft? - To simplify, a lot. I have a big history within the building communities, although I've never personally built with anyone as I prefer to build on my own, so usually all my work is done by myself only. I've built hunger games maps, skywars maps, survival games maps and just things in general.
    Why do you need the rank? - Personally, I'm looking to become more than just another builder on the server. I want to be part of this great community in the highest way possible, and I would love for you guys to see what I can provide, so I want the rank to begin my journey up the ladder to hopefully one day being a builder for you guys! ( I would like to apply for the WE ranks but the application formats said it would be preferred to start from the next rank from Builder )

    Show us a picture of your current build - I managed to build all this in under an hour as I'm fairly new to creative however I have been part of the server for a long time playing your other fantastic games ( also I bought a new minecraft account so activity might not be as high as it should :smile: ) 2015-12-17_18.34.18.png 2015-12-17_18.34.18.png 2015-12-17_18.33.59.png 2015-12-17_18.33.43.png 2015-12-17_18.33.35.png 2015-12-17_18.33.24.png
    Show us pictures of your previous builds - I do not have any, sorry. :frowning:

    Do you realize if you abuse any commands or privileges your rank will be taken away? - Of course! As previously said, I am fully aware of what the rank comes with, and in no way would I like to abuse the privileges.

    Please insert a Yes / No poll below.
     
    #1 averageteen, Dec 17, 2015
  2. NateTheDerp

    NateTheDerp Well-Known Member

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    +1 for Adv, -1 for WE1
     
    #2 NateTheDerp, Dec 17, 2015
  3. nezzr

    nezzr ◃┆◉◡◉┆▷

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    Looks nice, definitely worthy of Adv.
     
    #3 nezzr, Dec 17, 2015
  4. Yoplait

    Yoplait <3

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    Nice, just maybe a house to top it off +0.5 :smile: Good luck!
     
    #4 Yoplait, Dec 17, 2015
  5. Primeste

    Primeste Active Member

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    This is really nice, but, can you put some proof? It seems a little world editted to me no offense.
     
    #5 Primeste, Dec 17, 2015
  6. ItsAbbae

    ItsAbbae Active Member

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    +1 your builds are amazing and I saw the proof :smile:
     
    #6 ItsAbbae, Dec 18, 2015
  7. tehGabriel

    tehGabriel Member

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    Nice! you have my +1.
     
    #7 tehGabriel, Dec 18, 2015
  8. potatoesky

    potatoesky Well-Known Member

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    Application looks very good for an AdvBuilder application. However, I'm not seeing much from your builds. They are just tree saplings with bone meal. Terraforming looks fine, though I believe you could use more variety of blocks instead of just plain old grass. Building that in under an hour isn't that impressive either, to be honest. Sure, the rank application standards are a lot lower now, but I don't see much AdvBuilder worthy-ness from your whole application in general. The lamp post and the fountain isn't enough, in my opinion. Also, I don't think you really know what the rank provides considering you didn't mention anything about needing more plots, wanting the /item command, etc.
     
    #8 potatoesky, Dec 18, 2015
  9. PityPqrty

    PityPqrty Member

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    not to be rude but all you did was build a hill add trees and then bonemeal the floor , more detail would be nice. -1
     
    #9 PityPqrty, Dec 18, 2015
  10. November

    November november

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    -1 but ill give you some tips

    for the water stream, try to make the water flow with the landscape as opposed to just flowing over the top of it. when you see a river it has a riverbed and the water is generally at the same level as the landscape, whereas yours is elevated above the landscape. also maybe make it source from a small pond/stream. yours is just sourced from a 1 block area which makes it look a bit odd.

    also you can possibly try making some custom trees yourself as opposed to just saplings/bonemeal or whatever way you did it. they generally look a lot nicer. if you don't have any idea how to do them then youtube has plenty of videos, just dont copy them directly :stuck_out_tongue:

    if you can do the things i said and possibly add a couple more buildings then i'll happily +1 you

    also it'd be nice to see different styles of building. maybe i'm being too critical for an advbuilder app but if you really want to be part of the build team someday then you will need to demonstrate different building styles and starting early won't hurt. this build really only demonstrates terraforming but you can try houses, statues, landscapes, futuristic buildings, cities, arenas, etc.
     
    #10 November, Dec 18, 2015
  11. ItsAbbae

    ItsAbbae Active Member

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    guys this is just a AdvBuilder application cut some slack :/
     
    #11 ItsAbbae, Dec 18, 2015
  12. potatoesky

    potatoesky Well-Known Member

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    Tree saplings with bone meal is basic stuff that everyone can do.
     
    #12 potatoesky, Dec 18, 2015
  13. ItsAbbae

    ItsAbbae Active Member

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    true
     
    #13 ItsAbbae, Dec 18, 2015
  14. Cherrybea

    Cherrybea Active Member

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    hmm i would say +0.5 since building a decent hill isn't that easy, further more you should build some structure (like a house).
    +0.5
     
    #14 Cherrybea, Dec 20, 2015
  15. Doges

    Doges Ex-Mod, Ex-Builder

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    Denied, work on what was stated by @November
     
    #15 Doges, Dec 20, 2015
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