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  1. Algelier

    Algelier Former Staff Member.

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    Before reading this story, please note that the following is based upon the survival horror game obviously called Outlast. I tried to write it in my own way:

    Get under the skin of Miles Upshur, an investigative reporter whose ambition is about to earn him an intimate tour of hell on earth. Always willing to risk digging into the stories no other journalist would dare investigate, you will seek out the dark secret at the heart of Mount Massive Asylum. One day, you receive an anonymous information revealing barbaric experimentations committed at Mount Massive Asylum, a mental hospital situated in Lake Country's mountains, Colorado which belongs to the Murkoff Corporation, also known for illegal corruptions. The Email is sent by Waylon Park, an engineer working at this asylum:

    "
    September 17, 2013
    From: [email protected]
    To: [email protected]
    Subject: TIP / Illegal activity at Murkoff Psychiatric System


    You don't know me. Have to make this quick, they may be monitoring.

    I did 2 weeks of software consult at Murkoff Psychiatric Systems' facilities in Mount Massive. All sort of NDA's I am very much breaking right now but seriously, **** those guys.

    Terrible things happening here. Don't understand it. Don't believe half the things I saw. Doctors talking about dream therapy going too deep, finding something that had been waiting for them in the mountains. People are being hurt and Murkoff is making money.

    It needs to be exposed.

    "

    Once inside the asylum, Upshur is horrified to see that the ground is scattered with dead bodies, including a dying SWAT officier who advises him to escape while there is still time. Upshur finds patients by examining a bit more where he came to investigate in, these latter are also knows as "Variants", in total freedom antagonistic with regards to him, especially a sadistic gangling fellow called Chris Walker:

    "

    MURKOFF PSYCHIATRIC SYSTEMS
    PROJECT WALRIDER
    Mount Massive CO
    Case Number: 136
    Patient Initials: CLW,"Walker"
    Consultations Dated: 2013.05.28
    Initial Date of Patient Consult: 2011.01.28
    Patient Age: 32
    Gender: Male
    Observing Physician: Dr. Rudolf Wernicke(notation by Dr. Walsh)

    Therapy Status:
    Morphogenic Engine activity plateaued at roughly 2000 ppm. Unsafe to progress beyond stage 3 hormone schedule.

    Diagnostics:
    Spirometry revealed light-to-medium bronchial accumulation. MRI scans consistant with parient's reported dreams.

    Interview Notes:
    Walker was interviewed in restraints, following his self-inflicted mutilations. Restraint has had to altered to accommodate his enormous size.


    Extensive dermal eruptions as consistent with failed Morphogenic Engine cellular activity. He claims the skin ripped from his forehead allows for a truer way of seeing, seems to have some boyhood experience with Tuatara Lizards and their parietal eyes. He has expressed anxiety about his flesh, specifically around his lips and nose. Attending orderlies should be advised to watch for further self-mutilation.

    The mental traumas he sustained while serving in Afghanistan seem to be retarding progression of the M.E Process. His predominant fixation, amplified by therapy, is a manic exaggeration of military security protocol. A continuation of both chemical and physical restraints is highly recommended.

    "

    Got in content with Martin Archimbaud, the leader of a cult who sees himself as being a priest, he tells Upshur that he was sent by God to become his personnal witness. Quickly, he understands that father Martin doesn't want him to escape, and that he idolizes an entity known as Walrider.

    "
    From: [email protected]
    To: [email protected]
    Subject: Patient Art Program / Patient "Father" Martin ARCHIMBAUD

    Helen-
    Dr. Zeichner gave me your info to contact regarding the cancelation of the arts program. My patient, Martin Archimbaud, has made enormous strides in his therapy on account of his finger painting. Just in a week since canceling the parts program, his schizoafective assertions of some "higher calling" have accelerated enormously. Please, het let the man finger paint. The few dollars you're saving on temper paint is more than swallowed the logic at play here, unless Murkoff WANTS our patients to become more disengaged from reality.

    Please advise.
    Dr. Neil Wolfram.
    "

    Fallen into the trap inside, Upshur must investigate the asylum seeking for a way out, and escaping from the Variants. After being saved by a freight elevator, he's caught by his so-called savior, a going wild patient called Richard Trager. Trager is a "doctor" who experiments abominations on patients. He ties Upshur on a wheelchair and amputates two of his fingers. Left for a short time, Miles succeeds in escaping Trager owing to an elevator. Grabbed by Triger while the elevator is still in motion, a struggle ensues which finally comes out as the doctor's death, crushed between the elevator and the upper floor blocking the cubicle. Upshur meets again father Martin but this time with The Walrider. Miles can only see this latter when the camcorder's night vision is up. After that, he reaches an auditorium where there is a film. There, he learns that The Walrider has been created by Dr. Rudolf Gustav Wernicke, a german scientist who was in charge by the Paperclip Operation.

    "

    Obituary from
    www.denvereagle.com/obituaries/obituary.aspx?page=lifestory&pd=17827364905

    Rudolf G. Wernicke

    Dr. Rudolf G. Wernicke, age 90, passed away doing the work he loved on February 28th, 2009. He was born in 1918 in Munich, Germany, and achieved fame in the mathematic and scientific communities pioneer Alan Turning. After a cloudy history with the German war effort, he emigrated to the United States in 1949 with a visa from the State Department. Several decades of government research in Los Alamos led to New Mexico, where Dr. Wernicke retired to pursue landscape photography and care for his cats. He came to Colorado shortly after the turn if the millennium to pursue charitable work for the Murkoff Corporation. A Statement from the company calls Dr. Wernicke "a true humanitarian with a generous spirit". He leaves no survivors.
    "


    "

    Project Paperclip, Joint Intelligence Objective Agency (JIOA) document number 8 of 186, location 230/86/46/5.
    <excerpt>

    REF: Nazi War Crimes Disclosure Act.

    a. The first, PAPERCLIP, provides a means of obtaining services of foreign specialists for specific assignments within the technical services of the Departments of Army, Navy and Air Force.

    b. Project 63 is primarily a denial program with utilization as a desirable feature. The am of this program is to secure employment in the United States of certain preeminent of GERMAN and AUSTRIAN SPECIALISTS, thus denying their services to potential enemies.
    "


    There, he is told by a neutral Variant that he can find father Martin in the church. He goes to the church to witness Martin's death by self-immolation. In front of Martin's body, Miles finds the key for the elevator that he has previously fixed in order to get out of this place. However, things don't turn out as expected as he descends into a underground laboratory. Tracked by Chris Walker again, Upshur witnesses Walker's own death by The Walrider. After that, he finds Dr. Wernicke who is supposed to be dead:

    "
    Please find attached a copy of the death certificate for Rudolf G. Wernicke, Murkoff Psychiatric Systems subcontractor no. 148616. No surviving family.


    STATE OF COLORADO
    hold to light to view watermark
    File No. 8732
    Place: Colorado
    Town or City: Mount Massive Preserve
    Full Name: Rudolf Gustav Wernicke
    Length of residence in city or town where death
    occurred: 0 Years, 7 months
    How long in U.S., if of foreign birth: 55 years
    Sex: Male
    Color or Race: White
    Single, Married, Widowed, or Divorced (write
    the word): Single.
    Date of Birth: October 20, 1918
    Birthplace: Germany
    Date of Death: February 28, 2009

    I hereby certify:
    that I attended deceased from June 4, 2003 to
    February 28, 2009
    that I saw him alive on February 27, 2009, that
    death occurred on the date stated above at 4:11
    AM.

    The principal cause of death and related
    causes of importance were as follows:
    "Heart failure due to advanced age."
    THIS IS TO CERTIFY THAT THIS IS A TRUE AND
    CORRECT COPY OF THE OFFICIAL RECORD"


    "

    Owing to Wenricke, Upshur learns that The Walrider has been created by nanotechnology, and that he's "hosted" by the catatonic patient Billy Hope.

    "

    MURKOFF PSYCHIATRIC SYSTEMS
    PROJECT WALRIDER
    Mount Massive CO
    Case Number: 174
    Patient Initials: WPH, "Billy"
    Consultation Dated: 2012.10.14
    Initial Date of Patient Consult: 2009.04.12
    Patient Age: 19
    Gender: Male
    Observing Physician: Dr. Carl Houston (DBNR)

    THERAPY STATUS:
    Patient claims to have progressed to self-directed lucid dream states.MORPHOGENIC ENGINE activity observed at unprecedented scale. Continuing stage 4 hormone schedule.

    DIAGNOSTICS:
    Spirometry revealed no bronchial accumulation.
    Hematocrit centrifuge again failed to separate erythrocytes. Highly worrisome.
    MRI revealed arhythmic REM/NREM cycle. Laughter in NREM state.

    INTERVIEW NOTES:
    Billy asked about the status of his mother's lawsuit against Murkoff and the asylum. This represents a catastrophic breach in security, despite Billy's claims that he discovered the truth 'in the blood dreams of Doctor Trager.' (Note: the only Trager on company records, one Richard Trager, is an executive from M.R.D.) All orderlies and security personnel must be questioned and video security improved to include analytical biometrics.

    MURKOFF PSYCHIATRIC SYSTEMS PROJECT WALRIDER
    Mount Massive CO"
    "

    Receiving orders to stop Billy's life support. Upshur succeeds, but he's grabbed by The Walrider, weak and without any host, The Walrider therefore enters in Miles' body. About to die, he stumbles towards the exit where a military party led by Wernicke shoots on him. Miles falls on the ground, and Wernicke points out that Miles Upshur has become the host, killing patients and terrorizing Mont Massive Asylum.

    The end.

    This was my first story, so there may be mistakes or inconsistencies.
     
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  2. Snowleak14

    Snowleak14 Well-Known Member

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    Did you write this yourself o:
    Looks pretty good
     
  3. MrDasky

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    I've played this horror game and it's absolutely amazing. Nice that you made a story based on it!
     
  4. Algelier

    Algelier Former Staff Member.

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    "Before reading this story, please note that the following is based upon the survival horror game obviously called Outlast. I tried to write it in my own way". The documents are obviously taken from this website. And by the bye, I have never said that this story was self-written.
     
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  5. Snowleak14

    Snowleak14 Well-Known Member

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    What is the point of copying stuff and posting it here.
     
  6. SoullessAngel_

    SoullessAngel_ Ayo why you lookin

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    Before you say this, check out @Serine1002 's Native American legend. Not a word of that was self written, yet Algelier here does the same thing, and gets a much more negative reaction?

    The literature section shouldn't be a staging area for flame posts on literature provided to the community by other members.
     
  7. Snowleak14

    Snowleak14 Well-Known Member

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    But it's the third time Algelier has done this.
     
  8. November

    November november

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    but plagiarism is not a good thing??? he didnt even reference his sources
     
  9. SoullessAngel_

    SoullessAngel_ Ayo why you lookin

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    Did he say it was his? No. He clearly stated that it was someone else's work that he made an effort to put into his own words.
    Does it really matter? This is a piece of writing, not a scientific discovery. It doesn't matter who's it is.
     
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  10. Algelier

    Algelier Former Staff Member.

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    I have made a big mistake the first time, as I shared an idea for Brawl which was not mine, I'm aware of that. But the "other" forums section has nothing to do with Brawl's ideas, suggestions, gamemodes etc. So I don't know why I should be blamed for copyrighting the documents from the website which @YumKaax previously wrote. This forums section is a part of the "off-topic", so I believe everyone should be allowed to copy and paste things, as it won't affect Brawl in general, unlike the first copyrighted thread which make me shameful.
     
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