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Denied Toki_12 Builder Application (v3)

Discussion in 'Denied' started by Toki_12, Sep 1, 2016.

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Is toki fit for the builder rank?

  1. yes

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  2. no

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  3. mabye

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  1. Toki_12

    Toki_12 Well-Known Member

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    Minecraft Username - Toki_12
    Timezone - CEST

    Would you consider yourself experienced with WorldEdit? Why? - Yes, i consider myself confident with world edit, as i use it everyday on mcbuild.

    I also watch alot of vids on youtube. Altough i know alot about it im not a master (meaning that i dont know all the commands)
    Would you consider yourself experienced with VoxelSniper? Why? - No, I never use voxel, altough i know a few commands and watch a video now and then.

    How active would you be on Brawl's Build Team? (A couple hours per week, one hour per day, etc.) 5 hours a day. -
    Why do you want to join Brawl's Build Team? - The reason behind me applying for the build team is becouse simply i love creating stuff in minecraft and builder builds in general. I would love to interact with other builders and learn from them and see how they work. It would be awesome to see my work on a real server.

    What would you consider your greatest strength with building? (Detailing, Terraforming,
    Houses, Trees, Statues, etc.)     - Terraforming With word edit, detailing, maps
    What would you consider your greatest weakness with building? (Detailing, Terraforming, Houses, Trees, Statues, etc.) - Houses

    List any previous experience you have with building - Yes. I build with pretty much every single builder on the server and i was builder on small swedish servers long time ago.

    Pictures: (Include as many pictures of your builds as you can. If you do not include pictures, your application will be automatically denied. When possible, include proof that the builds are your own.)

    Me and @DeCasperr built this
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    2016-08-18_19.32.29.png

    2016-08-31_19.42.33.png

    (me and softwares built this)
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    2016-08-29_16.03.37.png


    Please insert a Yes / No poll below.
     
    #1 Toki_12, Sep 1, 2016
  2. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    You need to have some more pictures and build some things without a builders assistance. I would also suggest checking your application for grammar mistakes as there are quite a few.
     
    #2 Daveeeeeeeee, Sep 1, 2016
  3. Layyton

    Layyton New Member

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    -1 You're hobbit hole build is a Grian tutorial!
     
    #3 Layyton, Sep 1, 2016
  4. cityscaper

    cityscaper Well-Known Member

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    Your a rookie! I like you builds, but they are few and far in between. Go big! You can do this with your builds.
    Build 1. I suggest adding a bunch of large med-evil houses that surround your arena so much that you cant really escape it. You could put them up close to the stadium and allow people to run on the porches.

    Build 2. You can take that tree, build several new ones, add a stream, some tall 50+ block high mountains and a log cabin.

    Build 3. You can put in several other street and shop and what not around that modern.... uhh thingy mcjigger.

    Build 4. @Layyton 's post

    Build 5. Add a candy backdrop with giant gummy bears or something nifty. Really fill in the build and dont make it look like it was made for this application.

    Build 6/7 @sportyman56 's post
     
    #4 cityscaper, Sep 2, 2016
  5. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    Yea, I just realised.
     
    #5 Daveeeeeeeee, Sep 2, 2016
  6. Toki_12

    Toki_12 Well-Known Member

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    I didnt acually get it from Grian.
     
    #6 Toki_12, Sep 2, 2016
  7. Legolover

    Legolover Active Member

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    Your builds are small and lack detail. I kind of like the sand one, but all of the others just need to have... more. I also think you could work on your trees a bit more (the spruce one has an overwhelming amount of wood in it).

    Good Luck!
     
    #7 Legolover, Sep 2, 2016
  8. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    It is pretty much the exact same as his tutorial.
     
    #8 Daveeeeeeeee, Sep 2, 2016
  9. Toki_12

    Toki_12 Well-Known Member

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    Link me the tut, becouse i didnt get it from him.
     
    #9 Toki_12, Sep 2, 2016
  10. Pat_The_Trick

    Pat_The_Trick Well-Known Member

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    I believe you. It looks NOTHING like your build.

    I'ma give a -0.5, mainly for the other reasons stated above.
    Another thing I'd like to mention is that the hobbit hole is the same one you mentioned in your Creative app.

    Otherwise, okay app.
    Good luck in future!
     
    #10 Pat_The_Trick, Sep 2, 2016
  11. Doges

    Doges Ex-Mod, Ex-Builder

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    Denied, work on what was said above.
     
    #11 Doges, Sep 2, 2016
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