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Poem Perplexing Pool

Discussion in 'Literature' started by Piky, Jan 18, 2017.

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  1. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    Perplexing Pool

    Trickles of Summer light, gazing blight into water
    Perplexed of water, dazzled into sparkles of calming mist
    Tree-stumps surrounded of a cold pool, grown into submission
    Submerged terror beneath soft trickling waves subjects Delirium
    Ever so calmly lit of sunlight to purify blighted Delirium
    Soft soft noises, trickles of water abundance in harmony by gazing sunlight
    Ambiance of perplexing bodies of water surrounding secrets baffled by all
    Astonishment in surprise of relaxation
    Ever so gentle pool of surprises...

    @_featherpaw_​
     
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    #1 Piky, Jan 18, 2017
  2. featherpaw

    featherpaw Your friendly neighborhood kitten! :3

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    <3 I wrote one today with almost the exact same theme. Thank you for sharing with me!
     
    #2 featherpaw, Jan 18, 2017
  3. Piky

    Piky Well-Known Member

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    I would love to read yours!
     
    #3 Piky, Jan 19, 2017
  4. featherpaw

    featherpaw Your friendly neighborhood kitten! :3

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    Heh. I don't publish poetry on here. I'll skype you it later
     
    #4 featherpaw, Jan 19, 2017
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