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  1. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    >BUILD CONTEST IV ENTRY
    >Build Name: Forgotten Islands
    >Builder(s): GoToBed, Fawely did half of the trees.
    >Map ID: 370684
    >Pictures:
    Click to view imgur album!
     
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    #1 Daveeeeeeeee, Jun 11, 2017
  2. xGhale

    xGhale HG‘s Doom guy

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    It looks like you made 3 islands - imo this is pretty small, might just be me.
     
    #2 xGhale, Jun 11, 2017
  3. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    1) Ok so what if I made 3 islands?
    2) Quality > Quantity, I'd rather have a smaller, nice looking build than a huge underdetailed build.
    3) Also, it's actually not that small. It's a 100x100 area I think, please look at it in-game as well.
     
    #3 Daveeeeeeeee, Jun 11, 2017
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  4. Spades_

    Spades_ Former CTF Mod

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    I don't really involve myself very much with build, but this is a solid 8.5-9/10. I think it's gorgeous
     
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    #4 Spades_, Jun 11, 2017
  5. Toki_12

    Toki_12 Well-Known Member

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    I absolutely love everything but the beaches are a bit small imo
     
    #5 Toki_12, Jun 12, 2017
  6. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    Slightly but that's because the island is too small, originally the islands were all sandy but when I added the rocks it looked weird so I added grass and stuff.
     
    #6 Daveeeeeeeee, Jun 12, 2017
  7. Toki_12

    Toki_12 Well-Known Member

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    I see what you mean
     
    #7 Toki_12, Jun 12, 2017
  8. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    Technically this isn't the theme but it's very similar as it includes a beach even though it isn't the main aspect.
     
    #8 Daveeeeeeeee, Jun 12, 2017
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    #9 muslim_vin, Jun 14, 2017
  10. NickManEA

    NickManEA Build JMOD

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    I don't know why everyone thinks this is small. In my opinion this is a great map, good detail, it matches the theme even if it's just islands (because islands have beaches too).

    Good luck with the contest!
     
    #10 NickManEA, Jun 15, 2017
  11. redslime

    redslime Lead Developer

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    trash lul


    haha just kidding xDDD
    amazing map sportyman56 much wow
    good job
    looks nice
     
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  12. Xelasi

    Xelasi Well-Known Member

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    I really like how this looks. Your build style has gotten super clean, all of the details you've added look well thought out and intentional. It's really cool to see how people's building styles progress, and I'm really liking this.
     
    #12 Xelasi, Jun 18, 2017
  13. Ceyll

    Ceyll Well-Known Member

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    needs more dank trees "make it like a firework" -Vin P.S @Fawely use the advice
     
    #13 Ceyll, Jun 18, 2017
  14. muslim_vin

    muslim_vin Well-Known Member

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    yes you branch out the palm leaves in all directions like a firework but a bit more droopy
     
    #14 muslim_vin, Jun 19, 2017
  15. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    I understand but to make it nice like that, you have to make the tree really big. I don't really like them like that anyway, also it's ****ing Minecraft, not everything is realistic. Do you really think there'd be a random temple on a tiny island like that?

    Also shut up, she was the one that made the trees where there is the firework shape. She is a much better builder than you so don't tell her what to do.
     
    #15 Daveeeeeeeee, Jun 19, 2017
  16. Ceyll

    Ceyll Well-Known Member

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    I'm giving constructive criticism, if you're to blinded to see that. If you can't take constructive criticism, get off the internet. Everyone somewhere will challenge your opinions GoToBed you're not safe from opinions just think about that please.
     
    #16 Ceyll, Jun 19, 2017
  17. Daveeeeeeeee

    Daveeeeeeeee Well-Known Member

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    You are assuming which trees were hers, I made the ones that "weren't so good" yet you told her that she was the one that needed to improve when it was actually my trees.

    Also I don't really like how people are able to comment on contest entries, if I wanted feedback I would ask for it. I want the judges to decide, not random people like you.

    Final thing, how is this constructive criticism at all?

     
    #17 Daveeeeeeeee, Jun 19, 2017
  18. Ceyll

    Ceyll Well-Known Member

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    It was both, it's a team effort GoToBed, I only said it because you said earlier, "Fawely made most of the trees" and I heard Fawely made the trees at spawn so I assumed those were hers. I guess sorry that I didn't know "who's trees are who" but honestly again it's a team effort I don't look to the one who is the better builder I just look to who builds good together, and teamwork.

    It's constructive critism because think about it, I'm telling you to make it like a firework, and why didn't you just say before, lol you think that you can keep random people like me away from your post? This is a accessibly by everyone on this website I don't see your problem.

    No offense, but how would I know who made the trees? Honestly you have no clue, so why use that as a point? Then why do they let us comment on contest entries, why don't you like it because we can shut you up about being "so good". You're honestly idiotic if you think I'm going against you, I'm just trying to give constructive criticism and nothing is wrong with that.
     
    #18 Ceyll, Jun 19, 2017
  19. NateTheDerp

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    I love how the structure looks in the middle. Although the build is small, the detail all around really makes up for it. +1, looks amazing.
     
    #19 NateTheDerp, Jun 23, 2017
  20. Mr_BlueSheep

    Mr_BlueSheep [Professional Sheep since 2012]

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    Very nice build!
    Love the temple,
    Love the terrain,
    Love the trees.

    But the shaders doesn't let me see if the water is stained-glass or water. (Ill make sure to check it out in-game)
    Overall a solid 9/10 (imo)!
     
    #20 Mr_BlueSheep, Jun 28, 2017
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