Denied Build Team App.

They work now

 

Yeah, my bad. Must not have been working for me.

 

The one large castle build with the rainbow thing is alright, but everything else needs work imo. +0

 

Hey Reduced, I feel like you're not far away from getting trial builder.

Your builds are really cool, especially the organics and the steampunk ship, (which is the best piece you got in my opinion). You have a good grasp of fantasy building and you seem to be a cool person overall. Also, wanting to learn more from the other guys of Brawl's build team is a really good motivation to join!

But nevertheless, I still see things you can work on, firstly, the details and the coloring I see on your structures are kinda repetitive (I.e your large castle which is mainly made of stonebrick arrangement over cyan clay, or the smaller castle which has a simple layout, basic materials and repetitive detailing)

Secondly, I don't see any realistic or urban structures (except the modern house which isn't that great imo), and it's something I'd like to see from you, as it's what we mainly do in this build team.

Thirdly, looking at your player history you haven't played Brawl's PVP gamemodes a lot, only Party and a bit of KitBrawl, it's a flaw in my opinion, because it will be hard for you to design or fix gameplay aspects of a Gun pvp map for example.

Fourthly, read over your work; you've missed a lot of mistakes (but maybe English isn't your mother language?), it looks like your app has been rushed and just thrown away! Also your activity isn't precise, 1-2 hours per week? Per day? Per day I guess, but you see it's a little detail that makes the difference...

Lol I said everything I had to say, but yeah there's room for improvement ^^

Good luck!

 

It's nice to hear that you're willing to learn which is important!

Theo already touched on an important point - you'll need some more PvP experience. There are 4 main old-school PvP gamemodes on Brawl and unless my phone is bugging, you have very little playtime on some of them. Building CTF maps takes a LOT of skill and time. The KitBrawl map was a long build from what I heard, and while Raid and HG only have their spawns/pregame arenas, HG's arena especially is massive and takes a certain style.
Additionally, as Theo also mentioned, you'll need to have gun gamemode experience for War and WarZ. This is vital - I remember a trial builder once making a War map which had such unbalancing that it was legitimately unplayable (don't ask which - I can't remember ).

Despite all this negative criticism, I'm still giving you a +1 because of your past builds and probable improvement.

 

You seem ready. +1. Your build are nice and detailed

 

Agh your builds are amazing and even though what some of the people above are saying is true, you still get a +1 from me

 

Ey Reduced/Freakachoo!

Unfortunately, we have decided to deny your application. While your organics are nice, your structures could use some work. They do not really have much shape going on, which is surprising considering your nice organics. They also have pretty repetitive patterns and don't flow very well with the rest of the structure. I would also like to see a larger array of builds so we have a larger grasp on what you are capable of.

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