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Story Of Hackers & Pros (Episode 1)

Discussion in 'Literature' started by xXBearPvPXx, Feb 13, 2014.

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  1. xXBearPvPXx

    xXBearPvPXx Well-Known Member

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    Of Hackers & Pros Episode 1: Frozen.

    xXBearPvPXx

    As he walked through the great training camp of War, he felt like he was about to die. He slumped to the floor. He just went through three hours straight of training, and had almost accomplished nothing. At least he got his KDR to 0.1. He felt so bad that he wanted to quit, until he remembered what his coach Pikmin_Hunter told him, always stay positive, and never quit! xXBearPvPXx, was a MCWar pro in training, and he was just playing ffa_dome. He got 1 kill, and 12 deaths. He had been training for 3 hours straight, and his eyes were bloodshot. As he was lying on the ground, Joeymast99 walked past him. He was a very skilled player, and had over 100,000 kills. Bear envied him. He always wanted a good KDR, but would never get one. He was never very good at War, and he wished he could quit the camp. Unfortunately, his father and his coach would not let him. GreenPeas_, Bear's father, who was now in the Hall of Mods, would not let him quit training. "You are going to keep training, until your heart stops." those were the exact words Bear's father had said, and Bear believed him. Bear wished he could join his father in WarZ, but his father wouldn't let him until he got a KDR of 2. He always had a soft spot for WarZ, but Green said he would have to get some skill in War training, until he could move on to surviving. Then, there was Bear's coach, Pikmin_Hunter. He is a very friendly guy, but he also was very strict about Bear staying in War camp. He would kill him if he quit, and he believed his words. Lately, Bear didn't get to see his coach that much anymore. It was probably because he moved to the Hall of Staff, so he didn't have time to train Bear. Bear got up, ready for his next match of training. The game started, and immediately he was dying. A bullet came out of nowhere, and shot him in the face. He respawned, and a guy with a model ran at him. He only had a AWP, so he ran away, like the speed of sound. He went into a dark corridor, not knowing the map very well (it was beaver, ffa). He hid for a little, until a enemy ran into the room. He saw Bear, and took out a Deagle. The bullet hit Bear in the chest, sending him to half a heart. The next bullet aimed for his head, and Bear didn't have any time to move. It was 5 inches away from his head, and everything went black. When Bear opened his eyes, he was in a massive open area. There was lava everywhere, and 5 paths. Down every path, was a portal. Above the portal, were different titles. There was War, WarZ, MinecraftParty, Team-HG, and PVP. At first, he thought it was some sort of work in progress build for a War training map, until a disembodied voice started talking. "Hello, xXBearPvPXx." the voice said, eerily.
    "Hello? Who are you? How do you know my name?" Bear asked, scared.
    "I am chickenputty, talking through the voice of the console."
    "Chickenputty? It is a honor! I am so pleased to see you!"
    "Yes, yes. I wasn't here to get fanboyed on, I need your help on something."
    "What? It would be a pleasure to help you, all might one!"
    "For some reason, when you died in War, you were tped here, in the Hub. I am not sure why, but that is another matter. Since you are the only player here, I need your help. Everyone has been locked in there game, and can't leave training. No one can join, unless in a game. The servers memory is slowly erasing, and we are not sure why. We think someone has got hold of our host, and using it to break our console. We need you to get to our host, and turn it off."
    "Uh... where is the host?" Bear said, shocked by what was happening.
    "I am not sure anymore. As I said, my memory is erasing. Walk out of the hub, and try to find the forums."
    "Ok, I will try. Goodbye Putty!"
    "Goodbye, and good luck."

    DrZRG

    The bullet was frozen in midair. The enemy was confused, and tried to shoot there Ak. The enemy kept trying. DrZRG was tired of the enemy, and didn't want to try his gun, so he sent his knife into the enemies chest. DrZRG then tried his gun, and it wasn't working. Dr didn't understand what was happening. One moment, he was shooting down people with his ISO, the next bullets froze and the guns weren't working. He walked around in circles, confused. He thought maybe someone crashed the plugins, or the server was about to crash. But DR didn't think that was the case. While he was thinking, a enemy came out of nowhere. The enemy took out his diamond sword, and striked Dr. He blocked the shot, and then countered him. It was a duel, and Dr and the enemy both had chances of winning. Unfortunately, Dr was backed up towards the edge of the map, where the knife was held against his throat.
    "Haha! Now who is gonna die because of a sword noob? YOU!" the enemy said, laughing hysterically.
    The laughing stopped, when a masked figure came out of a dark spot, and sent the enemy into the dark depths of the under map. Dr thought he was doomed too, but the masked figure took his hand.
    "Thank you. You saved my butt!" Dr said, relieved he wasn't mudered.
    "Yes. I did." the masked figure said, mysteriously.
    "So, I am DrZRG. Who are you?"
    "I am the night stalker, the one who lives in shadows. The cousin of Majora_Jora, Jollyrancher22."
    "Oh, well hey! Thanks again for saving me!"
    "No problem."
    "Do you know what is happening? Why all the guns stopped working?"
    "I am not sure, but we can not leave the game"
    "Weird.."
    Out of nowhere, Dr heard a sound. Someone was creeping through the shadows.
    "Hello anyone there?" Dr asked, curiously.
    "Hush." Jolly said, and looked around."
    Then, a enemy jumped out of the shadows, a sword in there hand. He didn't hit anyone, until he got close. He hit at a insane amount of speed, sending Dr to 2 hearts. When Dr. was about to die, Jolly jumped into the air and sent her sword into the enemies skull. The enemy immediately slumped onto the ground.
    "Nice one! Also, what was that? How was the enemy hitting so fast?" asked Dr, still shocked from the attack.
    "Kill aura. Or force field. Not sure, but they are both a type of hack."
    "Really? Oh no.." Dr looked in to the sky, and saw dozens of enemies on the highest point of the map. They were all yelling random words, and hitting each other at a immense amount of speed.
    "A hacker gathering. We have to stop them, before they take over the map."
    "Ok, lets get to that point!"

    EnchantedBullet

    His legs broke. He scrolled through his inventory, to the bones and bandages and healed. he then ran through the room, his Ak in his hands. The enemy jumped out of a corner, and started spraying. Nothing happened. No bullets came out, except one, but it was frozen mid air. The enemy was confused, but it wanted to kill EnchantedBullet. The enemy took out there sword, and ran towards Enchanted, looking crazy. Enchanted tried his gun, but it didn't work, so he took out his sword. It was a short battle, as another enemy rushed out of the corner, carrying a sword in there hand. He killed the guy who was rushing Enchanted, and moved on to Enchanted. But, the enemy didn't move. The enemy just stared. Enchanted had a chance, but didn't want to use it, unless this enemy was hostile.
    "Hello?" Enchanted said, trying to see if the player wasn't afk.
    "Hello." the player replied.
    "Who are you?" asked Enchanted.
    "Sharkie123"
    "Oh, well hey Sharkie123. Can I call you sharkie?"
    "Sure, if we are friends."
    "I want to be your friend, do you?"
    "Sure."
    Before they could shake hands on it, they heard a rumbling noise from below. They both jumped out of the window, but didn't need to bandage up or heal. Weird. WarZ always required that. They ran to the room where they heard the rumbling, and poked there heads in. They immediately saw a green figure, and other figures, all stomping there feet and talking.
    "What do we want? To overthrow Chaploo and take the console!" The green figure shouted.
    Everyone cheered.
    "Who is that? Paparoach183?" asked EnchantedBullet.
    "Yes, I thought he was banned permanetly!" answered Sharkie.
    Paparoach saw them and laughed.
    "Look! Players! Get them boys!" Papa shouted.
    "Oh no.. we better move."

    Hey guys, hope you enjoyed. Please leave constructive criticism, and remember this is all fiction. Comment below if you want to be part of the next one! Thanks! -xXBearPvPXx
     
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  2. randomcitizen1

    randomcitizen1 The schizophrenic swagmoneymillionaire

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    I always enjoy reading other people's stories. I liked this one. Perhaps you should add some more action scenes. All in all a good story. I am interested to see where you will take this.
     
  3. xXBearPvPXx

    xXBearPvPXx Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for the feedback! I am planning to put a lot of action in the next one!
    If you want to be a part of this, just say it in the chat, and I will try to add you :3.
     
  4. TheDeluxeGamer

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    Yea I would like no action and there should be someone who doesn't hint chickenputty but later on does
     
  5. xXBearPvPXx

    xXBearPvPXx Well-Known Member

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    Hmhm, thanks for the feedback! Also, you don't want any action, or more?
     
  6. TheDeluxeGamer

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    I would like more action*
     
  7. xXBearPvPXx

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    Ok. Planning to add more in the next one.
     
  8. Lord_Roke

    Lord_Roke Forever the Forums Watchdog
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    This is awesome! It's written like a real book, the different points of view word good together and its funny too see all the relations too the history of McBrawl!
    Please continue, I would love to read more.
     
  9. xXBearPvPXx

    xXBearPvPXx Well-Known Member

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    Thank you so much! Working on the second one :smile:.
    Thanks for support everyone! Mean alot!
     
  10. Lord_Roke

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    Make more!
    I love to read that!
     
  11. xXBearPvPXx

    xXBearPvPXx Well-Known Member

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    Yea, sorry, I am making it right now. Thanks so much for the feedback, would you like to be in the next episode?
     
  12. Lord_Roke

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    Sure :smile:
     
  13. Usp45

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    Hue, very nice writing.
    Would you please put me in there?
    :v
     
  14. xXBearPvPXx

    xXBearPvPXx Well-Known Member

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    No problem, and thanks!
     
  15. Lord_Roke

    Lord_Roke Forever the Forums Watchdog
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    Whats with a second part?
     
  16. xXBearPvPXx

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    I have written it multiple times, but due to my stupidity, it didn't save. I am very very sorry, so I am gonna try to write it very soon.
     
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