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Poem McWar sniper / ks

Discussion in 'Literature' started by DiverXe, Feb 16, 2014.

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  1. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    Hey guys i made a new poem again. Please leave the feedbacks.

    Sniper, sniper,
    Camping on the roof
    There he started,
    Quickscoping a goof.

    He got a 5 kill streak
    Got some ammos.
    He shot a guy near him,
    The kill was insane!

    He got a 15 kill streak
    Got a EMP.
    The Boy did the pee because he cant see.

    He got an 20 kill streak
    NUKE look out !
    All of a sudden,
    Time ran out.

    He was so furious,
    It was end of the game.
    He lost everything,
    Even his fame.

    Sniper, sniper
    No longer on his roof.
    The boy who was playing him,
    Is now known as the goof.

    Thanks and enjoy !

    ( Might be not good )who knows.
     
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    #1 DiverXe, Feb 16, 2014
  2. Dathamier

    Dathamier Well-Known Member

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    yup
    This was me, back before I wasn't mature enough to handle defeat
    good writings! this one was painfully accurate
     
    #2 Dathamier, Feb 16, 2014
  3. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    Thank you
     
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    #3 DiverXe, Feb 17, 2014
  4. F1r3tar

    F1r3tar Highly Established Member

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    I just related to this poem today. Except my 20ks got ended by a player instead of the timer. :V
     
    #4 F1r3tar, Feb 17, 2014
  5. DiverXe

    DiverXe Well-Known Member

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    Thank you for the feedback :smile:
     
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    #5 DiverXe, Feb 17, 2014
  6. shunsukez

    shunsukez Member

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    Nice poem :smile:
     
    #6 shunsukez, Feb 21, 2014
  7. TheDeluxeGamer

    TheDeluxeGamer Well-Known Member

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    Well so in the beginning you were rhyming and then when you got the the second paragraph u didn't was that on purpose or are u mixing it up?
     
    #7 TheDeluxeGamer, Feb 21, 2014
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