Story Pressure of the Unknown: Chapter 1

This is a random story I thought of based on whatever creativity I have and this is about water pressure, unknown things lurking in the deepest parts of the ocean, anything can really happen in this story so lets start off.
Warning: This story has mature content, please be advised. There is no bad words though.

Pressure of the Unknown
|Chapter 1|
April 6th, 2014. The time is 9:38 PM U.S time. The fog is rolling in and the fisher men are catching their last catch of the day until they see a fish have a very odd bite mark. They see a shark near the boat thinking it was the shark that did that bite mark. "Should I grab the gun?" "Nah, just let it be, we got enough fish for the season." They soon see the shark get pulled underwater really quickly, they check to see what happened to it by looking over the boat. "What the hell happened to the shark... Oh my goodness..." They see the shark cut in half by a bite that was fairly large, most of the shark's organs were floating on top of the sea.
News spread quickly about the bite, once the word spread about a 'new monster' type of problem, everyone freaked out and began begging the Government to stop this 'monster'. "Ah you little babies, it's just a fish that can be easily dealt with, our crew can take that fish down and use it's bones as tooth picks." "I wouldn't be so cocky if I were you. Legend has it that this fish is was the top predator of the sea before humans even came. Fewer then 50 people have seen it, all but one still lives today to tell the story. Before you ask where you can find the survivor of the beast, South of you, five-hundred miles. You'll find a little island; isolated. Farewell laddies". As all four of the men go on a boat to find this mysterious man, they get a call from the local High-Tech Aquamarine Lab. "Hey I just wanna call you over to my lab, I got some tools to help you along the way". All four men go inside the lab to find a guy working on a top secret project. "Oh you're here! Nice to meet you, the names Kyle. So, what do you boys want? I got protective suits that can withstand high amounts of water pressure. It also has a camera attached to it to take recordings." "How much does the suit cost?" "About four grand, things like this aren't cheep ya know." "I'll take it, it'll help me find this unknown creature that is lurking in the sea." "What did this creature do?" "It bit off a shark in half, here's a picture of what it looks like." "No... it can't be... I've seen this type of bite before. Here, look at this picture, this was taken in 1970. A man was looking for his wife and found her dead, lying in the sand, she had half of her whole body bitten off, scientists tried to figure out what could of done a bite that powerful. Here, take this." "What is this?" "It's a very powerful underwater gun, it emits a very powerful blast that can blow everything up within a 35 feet distance. Be careful when using it..."
All four men go to the island to find the person there, sitting on his couch. "I see you've come to talk to me." "Yes, I was wondering if you know more about this creature then we do." "Ah I know this creature, it's not the first time I encountered it, I've seen this beast six times in my life. All six of them tried to kill me, how am I still alive today, I will never know." As he takes a sip of his coffee. "Let me tell you one thing about this creature, this thing is big, strong, powerful enough to take down a whole tank with one bite, scary, fearless predator, and your worst nightmare. I got a piece of its skin, the only time I was able to cut this beast was when it was sleeping near the shore with one of it's tails on the sand, I tried to stab a knife but it broke instantly by its super strong exo-skeleton. I deiced to use a bomb and it broke off part of its armored skin, the breast soon came out of the water looking. I was able to catch a glimpse of the beast, it looked directly at me, I couldn't move or do anything. It looked right at me, face to face with this beast, I could feel its breath, it then went back into the water, sparing my life. I just picked out the armored skin and left the place." The sound of lighten hits hard. "There's nothing you can do about this beast. It's ruthless and unstoppable. If you wanna risk your life's killing this beast, I hope you bring back it's head as a prize for taking my wife... Good luck laddies" The thunder hits hard again...


There is more to come, tell me what you think ​

 

There is going to be a new chapter today :3
Edit: There will be one tomorrow, hopefully when I'm not busy.