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  1. TheguynamedToby

    TheguynamedToby Well-Known Member

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    Making a new book
    Which out of 5 of these stories sounds better?

    Brum. She was 17 years old, with having a desire for hiking. She decided to hike Mount Elden. A small 5 mile hike. With her knowing that this mountain is only 5 miles, she packed very little water, food and supplies knowing she will be back. It was 6:50 PM and the sun was going down over a small town known as Flagstaff. She took an abandoned trail and then got lost. Her fight for survival is daring, risky and exiciting. With being lost for 3 months, she will have victories and defeats!

    Diron. Being a troubled kid in the town of Arizona, Phoenix. He had never met his dad or his real family. He often got into trouble for stealing, assault and many other things. With Diron being caught with 3 bikes stolen, the Phoenix police have had enough and throw him into Juvinile. His time is 7 years. Watch as Diron becomes the leader of the pack in Arizona State Prison.

    No one has met or visited Jacob in 10 years. Since birth, Jacob spent mostof his days as a mistaken patient at Colorado Insane Asylum. He meets friends that are victims of a diesese that controls their lifes and makes them suffer. Jacob escaping Colorado Insane Asylum at the age of 15, he meets fellow mates that will help him find a cure for those children.

    Fluffy the cat went missing 3 weeks ago. Kingman a young tall bully takes the cat and moves away! Nothing can stop Nuna and anything to get him back! Kingman is moving 4000 miles away from home. A 1 month journey with this girl helps her find Fluffy. Keeping 3 note books for day, noon, night as she follows Kingman for 4000 miles!
     
  2. jacobkolstad

    jacobkolstad Well-Known Member

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    Would be nice if you would write "Jakob" instead of "Jacob" in the third story.
     
  3. TheguynamedToby

    TheguynamedToby Well-Known Member

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    Ha, would be!
     
  4. Rainys

    Rainys Well-Known Member

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    Diron.
    First one is a plot used a large amount. Jacob just sounds boring in all honesty. Fluffy would be good for a kid book.
    Haven't heard of a plot like Diron's before though c:
     
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