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Complete Turbine

Discussion in 'Maps Submissions' started by soccerstars, May 22, 2014.

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Do you like this map?

Poll closed Dec 22, 2014.
  1. Yes, please say why ( +1 )

    14 vote(s)
    73.7%
  2. No, please say why ( -1 )

    1 vote(s)
    5.3%
  3. Undecided, if you can say what you think ( +0 )

    4 vote(s)
    21.1%
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  1. soccerstars

    soccerstars Well-Known Member

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    Well it's been done for a couple days but I had a couple things to do for you guys. So I'll just get on with the rest.

    Creators: @soccerstars and @bedrock88

    Video:




    Gamemodes:
    TDM, CTF, FFA, gungame, OIC. ( yes you guys got me to say yes to OIC )

    Spawnpoints: Blue X -2278 Y 65 Z -261
    Red/Zombies X -2282 Y 73 Z -136
    ( At ground level for spawnpoints )

    Special Thanks! Yes this might be long.

    Video Helpers: @Blamo54 @CaptainStriker99 there could be more I wasn't really the one doing the video.

    Void Diggers: @XxECHIxX @Blamo54 @lcfboy Rafi225 @phantamanta44 @CaptainStriker99 I doubt there's more but if you did tell me.

    OOM Finders: @CaptainBrawler @creeper539 @phantamanta44 there are others but these are the ones who found a lot.

    Original Turbine makers ( like not the map but the turbines in the map): Alpha9er, Lil_Dwarf4312

    WE Helpers: @Darkchaosknight Someone was bored and wanted him to make mountain for us.
    @demonguy567 There was a OOM with the jumping out of the map and not going in the void
    and we didn't want to re-do it when because we were just about finished and he did it fast.
    @gamemaster800 when the map was just being started you did some of the void stuff for us
    you made some of us happy for a bit because we didn't have to dig then.
    @Colonel_Chris simple you finished the void digging with WE

    If there's any problems with this post/map please tell me.
     

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  2. Blamo

    Blamo ▄︻̷̿┻̿═━一

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    Off topic: Didn't I find 4-5 ooms
    Anyway
    On topic: FINALY!! Looks even better in film .
     
  3. soccerstars

    soccerstars Well-Known Member

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    I forgot to make votes public -_- I'm stupid.
     
  4. Blamo

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    So other people can't vote on it? What .
     
  5. TheguynamedToby

    TheguynamedToby Well-Known Member

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    The video seemed a little bit off but this map is amazing!
     
  6. UnknownIdentity

    UnknownIdentity Well-Known Member

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    TIP!
    Includes:

    • Background with mountains
    • A deep hole to the void for OOM Glitchers & Suiciders
    • Mountains with Trees around the map
    • Arabic Signs
    • Good camping spots (like seriously)
     
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  7. Blamo

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    You forgot good camping spots
     
  8. RottenCorn

    RottenCorn Well-Known Member

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    A really awesome map! I would love to see it in TDM!
     
  9. lcfboy

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    My first map helping
     
  10. UnknownIdentity

    UnknownIdentity Well-Known Member

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    Return back on Topic pls.
    Return back on Topic pls.
     
  11. soccerstars

    soccerstars Well-Known Member

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    Yes but you just can't see who did.
    Thanks!
    Let's hope you'll be able to later.
     
  12. sturmspitz

    sturmspitz Well-Known Member

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    Not a terrible first attempt at a map, but a few points to consider:
    • The scaling is a long way off. The map is way too narrow and the heights across the map are too steep at some points while almost non-existent in other places.
    • The map looks boring. Besides the planes in the middle and the bridge, practically everything is sandstone. It's just not visually appealing. Considering the colour of the actual map, I would have suggested using sandstone for the ground, but a mixture of hardened clay and red sand for rocks and cliffs.
     
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  13. Signatured

    Signatured War 2.0 Developer

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    No, he means we can't view who voted yes and who voted no.

    Not a bad map. Looks pretty nice. As others above said, maybe make the mountains look more appealing by adding a variety of blocks.
    Other than that, it looks pretty good. Nice job :smile:
     
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  14. UnknownIdentity

    UnknownIdentity Well-Known Member

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    @sturmspitz alrighty then... Whatever
    Well work on that, especially me just for you to be satisfied as everyone else even doe we got more than 20 positive comments in-game. Geez, you goddamn good at critizacing maps and ppl :frowning:
     
  15. sturmspitz

    sturmspitz Well-Known Member

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    I'm not trying to be harsh or overly critical of you, I'm just trying to help you develop your map building abilities. I wish I'd had people willing to criticise my early maps such as aftermath and drone. It would have helped me out a lot. Instead, everybody gave positive comments. You know why people are always willing to give positive feedback? Because in their mind, they think k "this maps looks alright, but since I could never spend the time to remake a map, I really like it." Me on the other hand, I know the required standard of map that's expected for a server like this, and yours is still lacking in a few areas. But don't worry about it, it takes time to improve your skills. Heck, I've been building for almost two years and I'm still lest I g new things.
     
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  16. soccerstars

    soccerstars Well-Known Member

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    Can we not start a flame war, another thing that the community has to think about is it good enough for mc-war do certain things have to be done first.

    P.S the negative feedback helps us learn what to do next time, like for Overflow I find it helpful.
     
  17. UnknownIdentity

    UnknownIdentity Well-Known Member

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    @sturmspitz as you said before that the scale of the map isn't good, then how the F are we supposed to do it then!?!? you always print the scale base of the map into mine craft. Tell us how to do it.
     
  18. patrickdemooij9

    patrickdemooij9 Well-Known Member

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    Hey calm down >:3 He is just helping you guys with saying what you guys can improve. And the thing he uses is called "Spritecraft". Search on it on google and you'll find it
     
  19. UnknownIdentity

    UnknownIdentity Well-Known Member

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    I already know what SpriteCraft is and how to use it, @patrickdemooij9 . The thing is that idk how to bring the scale of the map into the creative server.
     
  20. PigOiler

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    Great map. Doesn't look too bland or too busy,
    I like this and would enjoy playing this.
     
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